Enlightenment - Livingsoulsdie

great job, effects were well done

Hey dude, I just saw your comment un my track now.
Well, I think this a pretty cool Track, I love cinematic elements in dubstep tracks and you pretty much did it for me.
Choir would have been amazing, but it's good anyway, even though I mostly like more brutal stuff.

The only thing I think could be fixed is the mastering of the drums.

congrats!
-Timmy

The opening is nice with the big growling bass and now it's accompanied by some fat synth work and a heavy beat. Like what you've done with the synths. It's how dubstep ought to sound and the melody is great. I can see why you've had a lot of attention with this one. It makes me think i must have another go at dubstep sometime.
Great tune!
FR

real nice work !! high energy an clean mix...keep up the good work!!

Jody

Im not really fan of dubstep but this is really good.Most people overuse wobbles in their tracks but you did great job balancing wobbles and synths.

Woooow, that's really cool, remembered Saints Row 3

Epic work dude! Nice wubs in this track.

Well..that was a unfit title for this track because I wasn't enlightened at all. No kidding, I'm just messing with you. Anyways, digging the approach with this one. The synths put you in a trance and has a great bounce to it. The part at 1:28 stands out, like how it does that later on too. Pretty nice fusion of genres, great work. Keep up the productions bro. peace

Gramo/Neo

LSS,
You have superb production skills and a creative mind. Awesome job on this song man. Fav'd.
Mark.

what a great combination man! loved this really. but i think kicks should be more powerful on drop. but still good. awesome work. faved

I really enjoyed this one. I like the combination of orchestra and dubstep you added to the track, works nicely. I The drop was pretty good too. Good stuff here man, thanks for the listen :)!

Daaaamn. This is sick. Heavy Duty. Nice work.

this track is perfect i can't hear anything wrong with it . great job, keep it up!!

Definitely love the darker aspect of it more than the "cheesy ass chipmunk bubblegum synth business" as valvedriver puts it haha. Flow is very nice, and overall great job!

Hey man. Good update. The levels on the different synths in the drop match each other much better than before. They definitely flow into each other quite a bit more smoothly, and you can hear all of them. And it really is a pretty cool drop. Now, just bring them all down to where they match the levels of the rest of the song, and you should be golden!

Which DAW are you using to make this?

this is very good man, keep it up

soo nice :D

Hey L,
cool dark ds mate,enjoyed the listen,keep on the good work,
DRO

This is really nice! I totally agree with #Aviat and #ValVedriVer! They said everything! Keep up the great work ;)

THIS IS AWESOME...!!!

The darker intro was really something...Superb!

The melodies are really crafted well.Loved the different soft synths used.

The structure of the song is nice and variations keep coming up.

The drops are awesome and loved those sqare/harsh synths.LFO Rates are synced nicely.Awesome!
Its one of the hardest thing to modulate them in Dubstep genre.

About the drops and buildup they can be made more intense with percussive elements and different FX.Search them up.

Beats are nice but can be more punchier.Do add more percussion.

Mastering and Mixing is really nice.Liked it!

And you already got an awesome detailed feedback from ValVedriVer which pretty much explains everything.

Good Job!

This is pretty good. I like the fact that it starts out with a darker, heavier intro. Not that cheesy ass chipmunk bubblegum synth business. I also like the melodic nature. It actually has purpose. The drops are nicely pieced together, and the melodies between are actually melody driven. Good work.
There are only three things that stand out to me in regards to room for improvement.

1) The different synth levels in the drop. Some come across as much louder, or quieter than others, which kind of disrupt the smooth flow and give it a "pieced together" feel, taking away from the smooth flow. Pretty simple fix. Just a little tweaking in the mixer.

2)The drums get lost in the drop. During the rest of it, they're fine. I think if you take care of the levels from the first suggestion, this one would probably work itself out with very minimal work afterwards.

3) A lack of impacts on the initial drop start. Your builds are good, they lead up to the drop with the anticipation needed, but then kind of just stumble into the rest of it. If you added an impact, or some big hits right at the beginning of the drop, it would slam that badboy into your face! This, also, a very simple fix.

Aside from those simple technicalities... "Sick drops, bro!"
This is a good piece. With a little fine tuning, I think you can make it better.

But, this is just my opinion. Take it for what it's worth.
Good work, keep it up!
Take care.
V.