blairrock957

interesting..if you slow the tempo a bit and change the solo to an electric distorted...then i can imagine a marilyn manson vocal type performance on it..it's a good thing because it means the song is great in a way that allows different versions..and ofcourse industrial gothic is my influence.

Hey mate...nice modulation in your voice..love that phasey guitar....You know I remember you saying how you'd been ridiculed at another site for your beliefs...I don't think your ever going to have that issue here..this place is civilised in that regard...so while the description of your song is true I don't think it warrants the disclaimer...In fact more power to you for singing about something that has real meaning to you..the more the merrier...cheers planet

Nice guitar sounds...especially where the melody changes up towards the higher notes...vocals sound quite inspiring...Wicked cat BTW...

Splish

Very nice killer lyrics to me! this sounded like Roy orbison himself impressive couldn't get enough of it!
might have to cover this one in church!...........JG

As always Blair, the guitar rocks and so do the lyrics. Well done. I love the new avatar too. It puts a smile on my face. God Bless you too. Pep

I really like this! It's got quite a haunting tone. Very mellow. Very nice =)

Kinda remind me of an old acquaintance of mine and Jazz singer, Arlene Murray. Met her on a now defunct blog site, but that's another story.

That was one wild story in the desc to this. So how'd everything turn out? Was it her first kid or...?? Hopefully it's all cool there. The 'Never Give up...' part, before the back up singers was kinda remindin me of Sade. Choice chunage. Lates!

I could maybe do somethin with this. I'm think that I could lay down some vocals (wait, don't everyone run away just yet, haha). It wouldn't be rap or falcetto singin. I'd go all raspy with it.

As for the song, it sounds kinda like Pat Metheny on speed. And I'm lovin the effects ya placed on the Lead. Makes it sound very Spacey or kinda Tubed. Lates!

Hey mate...sweet tune!...love the strings...I sort of agree with Rei, it's hanging for a bass line..however I like it the way it is..sometimes when you leave out some instruments in a mix it gives it space and a different dynamic......cool and clear work!...cheers planet

I bet you would do a perfect version of "House of the Rising Son" .. nice voice!

Nice job...you really hit the feeling with this song! Right from the heart!

Well sorted smooth track with a twist of gritty sax! Nice! Great beat and string combinations, plus a funky piano=Super song.. Cheers Slap...

Nice tune, it had me banging my head from the first beats. Chill track,a bit dramatic(violins...nice), the piano sounds great too. It's just the sax, it feels like it's being played at the other side of the room... maybee less FX on it. Apart from that, you got it right. Will you be uploading another version of it? If so, please let me know, I'm sure it will sound good, and I'd love to here the bassline.
Excellent work my friend.
Cheers S.

well, the thing with the volume of the sax is mentioned several times ....
but there's one thing that's much more important: there's no bassline!!!!!!
music like that only works with a strong and groovy bottom ...

apart from that it's a track that makes me want to jump in and jam .... and this is the best thing I can say about a song ... lol

peace, rei

It's a rally cool track...but like Elaine and MrE said the sax is a bit too loud...would love to hear the strings brought a bit more forward...but really nice arrangement nonetheless...

Splish

Very cool track musically speaking. The sequencing is very good and sets a great mood. The sax is overwhelming in the mix. It needs a little space to breath, a little reverb and/or a very, very light chorus would do wonders to give it some real life. Just drop the volume in the mix a little bit and you will see an incredible difference. Also consider a fade out at the end, that will help make it less abrupt and chopped sounding. But these are all technical comments. From a pure musical point of view this is a great track! Good work. Peace, Six

Original, DJ BlairRock, I like the synth in your track. Like the others, I think that the vocal are a bit to dry, maybe try with reverb or phaser, your software is bond to have one. Last thing: Your convertion to the dark-side of the dance music, is almost complete my young apprentice... ;)
Cheers S.

Man I dig this a lot. Good lyrics and solid singing. I agree with DV that the vocals need some room to breathe. A little Reverb ought to fix that right up. The vocals definitely make this track a lot more interesting. Good work. Now just blend them in with the rest of the track and you are gonna have something pretty cool going on. Peace and Love, Six

Goodness golly, oh miss Molly. Just do me a favor man, and never start singin in 'Tongues', haha. I tell you what, I was at this place once where that happened and it flat flipped me out.

So I was thinkin that this would be a pretty sweet song to be played on a Wednesday Youth Group meeting or something. You know, the part of it that's kinda like a party. I'm thinkin it'd be pretty jammin. Though I dunno exactly with the group I was a part of back in NC. It was more of an alt-rock crowd there.

One last thing before I bounce out. Maybe you could redo this and add some effects on the vocals to make 'em sound Spacey or something. I was also thinkin humor-wise on my sinister side, you could add some sample of a chick doing a horrendously bad fake orgasm, hahahahaha. Or not!? Later on mate!

Excellent dance track. What's next you're going to get a pair of turnables and become a superstar DJ!
Very good use of filters and FX. Well constructed funky track. Well done DJ Blair!
Cheers S.

I'm impressed! Yes definitely dance. It made me mant to move. Welcome to the loop movement!! I know, right?? It was quite an eye opening time for me too. Lots of fun! Great job. Try another now....

I really like the scratching song that goes on throughout the song.

real nice man, i would never guess its your first time!!! then u r no longer a dance virgin?? nice!! keep em comming, u r very good man
peace
mouko

superb

grat track blair..no wonder this is your wifes fav...its great

gizzard

so very cool blair.

great track, sounds are great and arranged like a pro

gizzard