Oh man I absolutely love this!
I've never got a ##### clue what your singing about Joe but it never seems to matter.
I love your voice.
It has a magical quality.
I love this track from start to finish and straight in the faves.
Perfection.
Since I'm on looperman, my musical range has greatly expanded.
But which is not surprising. Therefor looperman stands, right?
But as light and fluffy as it sounds, it was not the produce.
I do not know why but the notes of the melody to make me precisely is extremely difficult.
Therefore, I am pleased, of course, much that you like the result.
and that you like it so well that it has become a fav, is amazing.
I thank you, very much Mr. Silverman for your kind word
Don't know if its heavy enough to be considered Doom Metal maybe Doom Punk !
I dig the guitar track but wish there could have been more chord progression or a bridge. Great job on the vocals, really adds to the sinister or macabre element.
I think it is more Dark Gloom Rock but i am not good in genres and i am really not into Rock and or Mestal at all :)
Last metal concert i enjoyed was somewhat around 1984 with
Corn and Ozzy and Iron Maiden and two others. They played in a big sports hall on two stages, so it was almost 7 hours in one go :)
Almost enough for a life time
This track wasn´t planed in any way, so i had no influence on the music at all. I just grab Phatkatz track and start working a bit on it. Maybe there is not much progression but i feel like it fits good to the overall feeling of the track. A little solo could be intressting but thats Phatkatz work :)
Thanks for your kind words. I ##### Burt enjoys your "avant garde" same then me
This is quite awesome! Your vocal work is done very well, and fits the tone of the music. I enjoyed reading the lyrics, and I couldn't help but think of my wish for the older inhabitants of the earth, who are hanging on by a pharmaceutical thread, to move on and let us build a better world. Maybe not what you intended, but it speaks to me all the same. This reminds me a bit of the garage band era around this town I still reside in. Teenagers having an amazing time opening for touring bands in a little ghetto club which no longer exists. Angst and focus. Leaving the stage and then moshing to the rest of the bands til late in the night. Thank you for reminding me. Fave!
You are not realy far from what i had in mind when i wrote the lyrics! Sure they fit to this little piece of music and in this case they are just good for the "movie" that Phatkatz has in his mind. (but i wrote them befor start working on this track really)
In fact i had in mind something like this:
All the bad, sad, unfriendly and terrible things around you, slowly destroy all the lights, what makes this world a fine place to be, like love and friendship, humanity, brotherhood and so on.
But here is a easy thing you could do. That every body could do. Just leave all this things behind and walk into a better world. With no anger or angst or fear, with no feeling of giving anything back. Only witht the feeling of doing it right in the way it has to be done. Giving in the way you wanna get........
So it ends with a - Come, we go ahead.
And if all would follow, the world would change :)
So this isn´t a real dark track. It sounds dark and deep in a way but i think it gives some hope
We had this youth clubs also in town. This was good times ........ but now mostly all gone ...... just one of the lights that already be killed .... time to enlighten it again :)
Thanks for your nice comment. I really enjoyed all your the words.
This is not heavy metal, there are no heavy guitar riff's on this and no screaming!!
I could hear only a spooky voice :D
But creepy in a way. I liked the drums. The electric guitar really gives it a spooky haunted effect.
It sounds somewhat down. Good work though :)
the heavy guitar riffs and the terrible, wild, screaming vocals were recorded by the crew below deck and without light. Unfortunately, you can barely hear it. :)
if it is a genre "spooky metal" or something like "dark rock" I would have taken one of them
Phatkatz will be excited about your words to his guitar playing/sound
Nice to hear that you liked it. I really enoyed your comment
I like the waves in the opening, It's like we just stepped onto the Island of Dr. Moreau. Do you want to be shot like a zombie again? I have a boiling death that needs to be put to use :p It's painless hahahaha Joe gets shipwrecked and swims to the closest Island only to find it's inhabited by cannibals. What's for dinner? Joe is :D One of my biggest hold ups has been the drums on this! I'm not that good at programming beats so I use alot of premade midi ones, then I'll edit them if needed. Since you redid the drums I'll re record the guitar and bass so we can do a proper mix :D I'll send you wav files of those. Probably be sometime next week. I'm going to be really busy the next couple days.
There is someone on this ship on his way into his own darkness ..... he felt into sleep and a nightmare is on the way ..... In his darkest dreams he found a helping hand and a voice told him that he could leave the nightmare ...... he slowly awakes and have a look around ...... he saw that he hit an island with his ship and that it will not go anywhere else ....... after a while he leaves the ship and goes into the jungle near the beach ....... Dr Moreau already waits for him .... the real nightmare still waits around the corner ....
Don´t worry about time. Record whenever you have the time or the right feeling to do so. In between i just do something different. Maybe another zombie one :) ? or this blues one, or a zombie blues maybe ......
This drums are realy nothing special. First I just used a standart robota beat and cut it abit and place it under the track, and let the fills away. Then i cut a standart fill and mixed it again with the drums under the track and look that i have almost same power on the new drums then the one in your track. So all what makes this beat sound cool is more the original drum line with your fills and extra sounds.
PM me when you have recored anything. I will send you a link to the stems.
Dark. Agree with the others, voice is creepy. Not really a stranger to dark things so I really like the vibes on this one. 2:03 tom sounds a little muffled but not a major deal. Guitar is pretty low and ominous and the drums has a nice pace. Great work. Dangerous.
The drum thing is one of the harder thing here to work on. I already taked some "new" ones over the track from Phatkatz but i left the fills. Hadn´t the time to try to make the same fills by myself so i used the org ones :) The thing is that i work only with a mp3 with guitars and drums included. So all i can do is let the guitars sound good and at the same time let the fills not sound to bad at all :) still trying to find a better level on that.
Right now i added a cello like synth and working on a more centered "lead" vocal. After that, the drums are on the list :)
I whish I had better awareness to what is really happening on the looperman track section currently but my attention is very selective now.
to me this piece is really dark coloured - very unlike from all of what I could hear from you last time. Probably it is too heavy even as I prefer lighter sounds - I am still searching for the proper convention here haha.
hey joe i really enjoyed listening to this i have a mild form of aspergers and most of the time its not noticed in my day to day life but im aware of my almost rain man like obsession for things that i like
anyhows very kool track and balanced in all the right places imo
Love that you're working with this old track, and what you've with it!! :D Does it really need to be re recorded now? You got is sounding pretty damn good :p I have another old dark one, Doom(not posted), that was actually the first one I recorded with DAW if you're interested in doing a similar treatment :D I do need to re record that one, be alot easier to work out the drums for that, than this one. I bought a video loop for making a video for Doom, but never got around to it. Also for this I have a clip from Dr.Tarr's Torture dungeon (Poe movie) that may work well in the opening. Love that ocean sound hahaha I was thinking this song would come before Doom like the beginning of the adventure. The movie is about an asylum, in the forest, where the patients have taken over imprisoning the Dr (Dr.Tarr) and staff. The clip i was thinking of "You will enter this dungeon. Let the shadows watch over you as you sleep. (laughing)" Doom song feels like passing through the halls of an old castle. Here's the movie. It;s public domain so it's ok to use clips :D https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bqtxVBFixa0
Nice to see that you didn´t shoot me like a zombie for this one
I will play around just a little bit with this one until i lost fun OR until i think it is a real great one and THEN i will ask you for the wav file, cause i just used that centraldev mastering try. so mp3 from a mp3 to mp3 .... but you are right it dosen´t sound bad for that.
Let me know when you will start on your doom project and need some vocals or else :)
Hey man cool track, but I think that the vocals could have been projected more clearly, because I can't understand a word they are saying lol. But I really like the vintage/80's shock metal vibes I'm getting from this one! Loving the flanger on the guitar, adds some pretty sinister feel to the background of the track.
Unique zu sein ist das Ziel schlechthin. Ich habe immer irgendwie versucht einfach mein Ding zu machen. Mitlerweile weiss ich auch warum :) die Dinge der anderen passen irgendwie nie so wirklich zu mir.
Schön zu hören das dir das Lied gefällt und das du der Meinung bist das die Musik zur Botschaft passt
joecramer
It is brilliant, and unique I love the intro,
However, as regard to your condition, I think you should know that I know of lots of Doctors, consultant with a similar condition, which I might add, a brilliant people who are brilliant at their job.
I believe that the others have the problem, and should learn to understand people like you.
Brilliant job.
Well done
Jamid
Thanks a lot for your realy true words.
It is nice to know that you like the song and found it in a way brilliant. And if the track helps to open a door for thinking about - the diversities of the humans - then i am realy happy
Comments like yours are the reason to make music and post the songs here. Thanks again for that.
This one has a bit darker tone which is however not unexpected
since dealing with much personal unsecurities. The subject
matter appears to be expressed very authentic and sincere!
Very well done, maestro!
Thanks for this realy friendly comment.
To get a "very well done", from you, is realy a nice thing for me!
Personal things make music (words) mostly a bit deeper and authentic.
I like that explanation, a different OS. Everybody is different, that's what makes the world such a beautiful diverse place. Vocal level sounds perfect to me :D
Diversities! We are all same, cause we are all different.
I realy love the line that the people in Thailand say realy often - same same but different.
Good to hear that you think the vocal level is ok, cause it is always this - i wrote it, i sing it, i masterd it and so i can hear and understand it - but maybe it isnt so for others :)
mmmmm ...... i can hear them very well ...... but who knows :)
at least you can look into the lyrics ..... if others think the same, then i can make them sure louder but i think they are good (right now)
Very nice track in deed, really loving your vocals, great voice, very easy on the ear, could listen to you singing all day... instrumental spot on, whole track tells a story, one of the better listens today while doing reviews...Rarely download tracks from here on Looperman, but this one is a must, thank you so much for sharing this great track...MASSIVE fav man...Peace n much Respect...Mosaic...
Thanks for your friendly words about the vocals and my voice, Always nice to hear that there are people around who like it.
While i done the master for this track (SBM Comp) i had the feeling like you, that the music tells a story. And i start to sing abit to the music (first only to get the timeing problems that SBM produced to see who can handle it) and later i done the vocals ´cause i had the feeling that they fit not to bad at all.......
That you downloaded this one is realy something special to me,´cause i mostly also never download songs here (only if i wanna work on/with them) and so i am realy happy to hear that you done so ´cause you like it. Thats realy great!
So thanks a lot for this realy nice and friendly comment, the download and the fav!
You'll probably think I'm crazy but it gives me a mix of Van Der Graaf Generator Iggy Pop and Eno.
I like being crazy and I love this.
To me this is early seventies prog rock and that isn't meant as a put down in any way shape or form.
Very nice bit of work.
Hey Silverman,
thats some real gentle words you wrote. Me in a row with "them" - wow
Maybe you are right and this track is more progrock then pop but i wasn´t never real good in genres at all :)
I hope that peoples don´t have to be crazy to like this ....
The music itself isn´t from me. I just made a master mix from the stems from Mr. ShortBusMusic for his competition. Ok, this mix is a bit different to the most other master mixes from his stems but it is still his work, ´cause i didn´t change much. Mostly i changed it just to a minimal version
So thanks again for your nice comment and it is nice to know that you love this little lovesong
on Hey Komm doch mit by joecramer
I've never got a ##### clue what your singing about Joe but it never seems to matter.
I love your voice.
It has a magical quality.
I love this track from start to finish and straight in the faves.
Perfection.
But which is not surprising. Therefor looperman stands, right?
But as light and fluffy as it sounds, it was not the produce.
I do not know why but the notes of the melody to make me precisely is extremely difficult.
Therefore, I am pleased, of course, much that you like the result.
and that you like it so well that it has become a fav, is amazing.
I thank you, very much Mr. Silverman for your kind word
stay tuned
joe
on LOD - the end of a nightmare by joecramer
Thanks for your time you spent on this track and for your friendly comment.
stay tuned
joe
on LOD - the end of a nightmare by joecramer
I am glad there is a message of hope!
nice work - phatkatz work great also!
Nice to hear that you like the atmosphere we created and
I am pleased that you have understood the lyric as well.
stay tuned
joe
on LOD - the end of a nightmare by joecramer
Don't know if its heavy enough to be considered Doom Metal maybe Doom Punk !
I dig the guitar track but wish there could have been more chord progression or a bridge. Great job on the vocals, really adds to the sinister or macabre element.
I think it is more Dark Gloom Rock but i am not good in genres and i am really not into Rock and or Mestal at all :)
Last metal concert i enjoyed was somewhat around 1984 with
Corn and Ozzy and Iron Maiden and two others. They played in a big sports hall on two stages, so it was almost 7 hours in one go :)
Almost enough for a life time
This track wasn´t planed in any way, so i had no influence on the music at all. I just grab Phatkatz track and start working a bit on it. Maybe there is not much progression but i feel like it fits good to the overall feeling of the track. A little solo could be intressting but thats Phatkatz work :)
Thanks for your kind words. I ##### Burt enjoys your "avant garde" same then me
stay tuned
joe
on LOD - the end of a nightmare by joecramer
Nice to read something from you. Like always :)
You are not realy far from what i had in mind when i wrote the lyrics! Sure they fit to this little piece of music and in this case they are just good for the "movie" that Phatkatz has in his mind. (but i wrote them befor start working on this track really)
In fact i had in mind something like this:
All the bad, sad, unfriendly and terrible things around you, slowly destroy all the lights, what makes this world a fine place to be, like love and friendship, humanity, brotherhood and so on.
But here is a easy thing you could do. That every body could do. Just leave all this things behind and walk into a better world. With no anger or angst or fear, with no feeling of giving anything back. Only witht the feeling of doing it right in the way it has to be done. Giving in the way you wanna get........
So it ends with a - Come, we go ahead.
And if all would follow, the world would change :)
So this isn´t a real dark track. It sounds dark and deep in a way but i think it gives some hope
We had this youth clubs also in town. This was good times ........ but now mostly all gone ...... just one of the lights that already be killed .... time to enlighten it again :)
Thanks for your nice comment. I really enjoyed all your the words.
stay tuned
joe
on LOD - the end of a nightmare by joecramer
I could hear only a spooky voice :D
But creepy in a way. I liked the drums. The electric guitar really gives it a spooky haunted effect.
It sounds somewhat down. Good work though :)
if it is a genre "spooky metal" or something like "dark rock" I would have taken one of them
Phatkatz will be excited about your words to his guitar playing/sound
Nice to hear that you liked it. I really enoyed your comment
stay tuned
joe
on LOD - the end of a nightmare by joecramer
Don´t worry about time. Record whenever you have the time or the right feeling to do so. In between i just do something different. Maybe another zombie one :) ? or this blues one, or a zombie blues maybe ......
This drums are realy nothing special. First I just used a standart robota beat and cut it abit and place it under the track, and let the fills away. Then i cut a standart fill and mixed it again with the drums under the track and look that i have almost same power on the new drums then the one in your track. So all what makes this beat sound cool is more the original drum line with your fills and extra sounds.
PM me when you have recored anything. I will send you a link to the stems.
stay tuned
joe
on LOD - the end of a nightmare by joecramer
Gramo/Neo
Right now i added a cello like synth and working on a more centered "lead" vocal. After that, the drums are on the list :)
Thanks for your nice comment GramoChopin
stay tuned
joe
on LOD - the end of a nightmare by joecramer
or/and more interesting!
Congrats______Orlando
I realy dont know any at all, i just tryed to let it sound good and sure in a way intresting and it looks like i had a little luck :)
stay tuned
joe
on LOD - the end of a nightmare by joecramer
I whish I had better awareness to what is really happening on the looperman track section currently but my attention is very selective now.
to me this piece is really dark coloured - very unlike from all of what I could hear from you last time. Probably it is too heavy even as I prefer lighter sounds - I am still searching for the proper convention here haha.
Nice collab!
Good luck with your future projects!
All the best to you, Aleksander
Nice that you found some time for listen to this one, while all this "things" happend in the looperversum :)
The plan was to make a real deep and dark metal one.
Phatkatz called it nightmare, so it couldn´t be light
But overall it isn´t that evil :)
Thanks for your nice comment
stay tuned
joe
on Asperger Love by joecramer
anyhows very kool track and balanced in all the right places imo
Nice to hear that you think that every things fits.
Thanks for your friendly words
stay tuned
joe
on LOD - the end of a nightmare by joecramer
Nice to see that you didn´t shoot me like a zombie for this one
I will play around just a little bit with this one until i lost fun OR until i think it is a real great one and THEN i will ask you for the wav file, cause i just used that centraldev mastering try. so mp3 from a mp3 to mp3 .... but you are right it dosen´t sound bad for that.
Let me know when you will start on your doom project and need some vocals or else :)
stay tuned
joe
on LOD - the end of a nightmare by joecramer
That is a lot better very good.
Great Job.
Jamid
Nice to see that you found some time to listen again to it.
I think it is a lot deeper now and fits much better.
stay tuned
joe
on LOD - the end of a nightmare by joecramer
Awesome job!
Rico L.
Can it be that you don´t understand anything because you can´t any german :) ?
I think i make a kind of a leadvoice over the choir, then it should be better to get.
stay tuned
joe
on LOD - the end of a nightmare by joecramer
Now this is good, mind you I would have preferred it with your music though.
But, hey its great job.
Jamid
Thanks for your listen and nice words
stay tuned
joe
on LOD - the end of a nightmare by joecramer
Love your voice.
It's a very saleable one I'm thinking.
Nice to know that you enjoy you listen.
Phatkatz thinks on a rerecord and i ##### then this could sound much better.
Thanks for your real gentle comment Mr. Silverman
stay tuned
joe
on LOD - the end of a nightmare by joecramer
i stay here and wait
stay tuned
joe
on Asperger Love by joecramer
Unique zu sein ist das Ziel schlechthin. Ich habe immer irgendwie versucht einfach mein Ding zu machen. Mitlerweile weiss ich auch warum :) die Dinge der anderen passen irgendwie nie so wirklich zu mir.
Schön zu hören das dir das Lied gefällt und das du der Meinung bist das die Musik zur Botschaft passt
Viele vielen Dank für deine wirklich netten Worte
stay tuned
joe
on Asperger Love by joecramer
It is brilliant, and unique I love the intro,
However, as regard to your condition, I think you should know that I know of lots of Doctors, consultant with a similar condition, which I might add, a brilliant people who are brilliant at their job.
I believe that the others have the problem, and should learn to understand people like you.
Brilliant job.
Well done
Jamid
Thanks a lot for your realy true words.
It is nice to know that you like the song and found it in a way brilliant. And if the track helps to open a door for thinking about - the diversities of the humans - then i am realy happy
Comments like yours are the reason to make music and post the songs here. Thanks again for that.
stay tuned
joe
on Asperger Love by joecramer
stay tuned
joe
on Asperger Love by joecramer
since dealing with much personal unsecurities. The subject
matter appears to be expressed very authentic and sincere!
Very well done, maestro!
Compliments______Orlando
Thanks for this realy friendly comment.
To get a "very well done", from you, is realy a nice thing for me!
Personal things make music (words) mostly a bit deeper and authentic.
Nice to see that you take this one to your fav´s
stay tuned
joe
on Asperger Love by joecramer
I realy love the line that the people in Thailand say realy often - same same but different.
Good to hear that you think the vocal level is ok, cause it is always this - i wrote it, i sing it, i masterd it and so i can hear and understand it - but maybe it isnt so for others :)
thanks for your words
stay tuned
joe
on Asperger Love by joecramer
at least you can look into the lyrics ..... if others think the same, then i can make them sure louder but i think they are good (right now)
on HOME - Joe Cramer on SBM - proximal vicinity by joecramer
Very nice track in deed, really loving your vocals, great voice, very easy on the ear, could listen to you singing all day... instrumental spot on, whole track tells a story, one of the better listens today while doing reviews...Rarely download tracks from here on Looperman, but this one is a must, thank you so much for sharing this great track...MASSIVE fav man...Peace n much Respect...Mosaic...
Thanks for your friendly words about the vocals and my voice, Always nice to hear that there are people around who like it.
While i done the master for this track (SBM Comp) i had the feeling like you, that the music tells a story. And i start to sing abit to the music (first only to get the timeing problems that SBM produced to see who can handle it) and later i done the vocals ´cause i had the feeling that they fit not to bad at all.......
That you downloaded this one is realy something special to me,´cause i mostly also never download songs here (only if i wanna work on/with them) and so i am realy happy to hear that you done so ´cause you like it. Thats realy great!
So thanks a lot for this realy nice and friendly comment, the download and the fav!
stay tuned
joe
on HOME - Joe Cramer on SBM - proximal vicinity by joecramer
I like being crazy and I love this.
To me this is early seventies prog rock and that isn't meant as a put down in any way shape or form.
Very nice bit of work.
thats some real gentle words you wrote. Me in a row with "them" - wow
Maybe you are right and this track is more progrock then pop but i wasn´t never real good in genres at all :)
I hope that peoples don´t have to be crazy to like this ....
The music itself isn´t from me. I just made a master mix from the stems from Mr. ShortBusMusic for his competition. Ok, this mix is a bit different to the most other master mixes from his stems but it is still his work, ´cause i didn´t change much. Mostly i changed it just to a minimal version
So thanks again for your nice comment and it is nice to know that you love this little lovesong
stay tuned
joe