MOONLYTE

Well if this is the first track you've ever made it's not bad at all. I think you should extend the delay on that first synth as it only echoes twice and leaves gaps in the music.
Your production and mix is pretty good but that bass drum that comes in near the end is out of time.
There are good elements here which suggest that you will eventually get to grips with it. NOBODY creates a great track on their first attempt so bear that in mind and keep practicing. You'll get there if you do.
FR

Cool man, piano punk, nicely created! Good to hear someone spekaing their minds! I like the outro part very much, it's a good conclusion. My only trouble with this is that at some point something seems to be clipping pretty heavilly, can't tell if it was in the mix, or if the master is peaking, or if it was just too loud when made into an mp3. Other wise, totally awesome! Faved!

Great story behind the song. I love when being faced with a challenge to prove others that I can do something. Being able to express it in a song is an awesome way to let it out. Some of the best songs are about personal issues, it makes them real and people can relate to them on a personal level.

Martin's loops are nice. Not sure if this is punk but it was cool to listen to!

Keep up the good work!

Wayne

This is a hell of a lot better than the first thing of yours I heard.

I must say, your writing is great.
Vocal pitch and timing off at parts, but still better than before.

You are better than I have given you credit for.

Very nice song. I can hear that you put a lot of thoughts and heart into the lyrics. You should go to YouTube and learn about Eq'ing and compressing vocals. It will definitely help you make your vocals sit better in the mix.

It has helped me a lot with mixing and I've been doing this for a long time but I always learn something new everyday. Keep practicing and you get there man.

In the end, I'm loving the song.

Peace!

Interesting concept, strong conviction is present with the way the you mixed the loops together then vocals added to the scale brought a familiar listening field I've heard throughout the story of music while being something new, good job. I do hear this continuing into a heavier direction and letting those controlled thoughts loose. Thanks for sharing, keep going.

Cute, Really cool beat and nice lyrics man!

Vance B.

Your voice has some good tonality. When you sing, think of it coming from the bottom of your chest, as opposed to your throat or mouth. A piano has a big cavity even though the notes seem like theyre coming from the just keys. A voice comes from the center of your body, deep inside.

It's great that you can put so much emotion into a song and that the listener is clearly able to see it through your vocals. Also, great piano!

I like it. A very deep song!!.

Bear

definitely not Adam Gontier but still nice job tryin to do a nice track! yeah minor2go rules with his keys! great! +1

Damn duuude! That piano is great! The lyrics is kind of funny/depressing but I really like this one. '

Keep up the good work!

What a track...man you are not a singer but when you sing I could cry, shout and fight...:-) awesome feelings...

Sensational one, hats off...Danke

If u are ever up for doing a thrashmetal version lemme know :)

I'm really digging that piano. This is a sweet track, keep it up, dude, awesome job

Nice song eish

must be fun making music with your lady!

Great job. Reminds me of Radiohead in some way. Vocals are indeed a bit shaky but they didn't build New York in 1 day either right? Keep it up!

And where is the download why is it disabled i wanna steal this and say it was me so i can get rich off you and lie about it!

You have suck a happy little smile for a sad song :P lol good job a again

"Something is right here!"

Compliments____Orlando

very different but in a good way,so sad. Gives me chills

This is my favorite you both sound so meaningful and honest

great electronic sound!

Love it! your very talented :)