MOONLYTE

good stuff man!!!

Hey, it's nice to have you back, especially with this great song! Really fascinating from the start, very unique. I really like the tension created at around 01:40 and how the song's atmosphere abruptly changes. As usual, your tracks are bursting with creativity and I really appreciate that! Congrats.

Nice work! Enjoyed listening to this piece. =B-)

Love the choirs used and the dark strings, they really give that epic feel to the beat

The only thing that bothers is the drum in the second part, I know others have mentioned it and you acknowledged it yourself

I am not sure what causes it, might be clipping so maybe turn it down a notch and see if your master doesn't peaks over 0 db

Very nice production, really takes off on the second half. After the 4:00 mark the drums are lil loud, maybe too much compression? I would look into that, all the other elements are being overshadowed by that. There kind of muddy in the intro too. Other than those suggestions, I liked the arrangement of the track and the instrument choice. Epic choir. Keep working, peace

Gramo/Neo

Really good track man. Those vocals sound really nice and I like the way you made the track build. Quality work.

Kind regards,

Steve

Sounds cool! :) I like it.

Nice work man.

Very interesting track you have here, dude. Remind me one one of the many creepypastas read on youtube, ironic how I never find any of them creepy but that's not the point. The point is, this is very enchanting, charming, and peaks my morbid curiosity. Keep it up.

This is a great track. If the drum samples were a little more clean and had less staticky noise it would sound great others than that the whole composition of the track is very nicely put together. I am a dubstep kind of guy but I love cinematic and orchestral type of music to with which I like to incorporate into my beats. maybe in the future we can collaborate on a track together? Nice work.

I am downloading this and sharing it with people, you are really good and oh my god this is one of my new favorite songs! your awesome! keep it up

2:08 to 2:50 you remind me so much of John Frusciante in 'to record only water for 10 days'. heartfelt and real. nice track..

Brilliant track bro. Love it. Poignant lyrics.

Hey mate

you had me right from the start even before hitting play button, when you mention piano in piece, totally love piano in piece's, excellent piano work, and the vocals good too, nice listen mate...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...

EYEDYE as i remember this is best instrumentation I've heared from U & beside music your tallented mentality for lyrix is wonderfull ...but i think that screaming line & generally your vocal execution can be improved easily & so fast if U pay attention a bit seriously about solfeggio rules & diafragm breathing (U can find it even in Oratory rules too).
to me , this EYEDEYE , right now is a better composer & lyricist than a singer ..and it's obviously a pity if U want to give these great tallented mind of lyrix & composition to be sung by any other singer but yourself ...
hope I've been able to express my idea finely & expressive for U man...keep it up.____B

Awesome Stuff!!

YO !

first of all this isnt hardcore ..

i like the vocals and lyrics ...
im not into the metalstuff but i like it .

good job !

I like your verse singing, the rhythm, and way you speed up and slow down and change tone sounds great. Sure there's some things wrong, but this is a pretty cool track. I don't know if you did the melody yourself as well, if so, even more amazing.
If you are bored, I uploaded some tracks in need of vocals.. :)

Well done on the vocals, I don't know how people can do that throat growl singing but it an interesting change from the verse singing and was a little unexpected. On the mix end of things, I think with a little less compression you would hear more separation between the guitars, piano, vocals... especially when they are all playing loud. It's a great song idea and some nice changes, it's well written. Good luck with the new daw!

Wayne

Hi,

Well have listened to your previous work and you have a lot of talent, and I don't mean that lightly! ok with this one you have all the basics right, a really good into, great bridge at 1.07 and some really clear vocals, the downside is some of the transitions were a bit messy and the shouted vocals really did nothing to enhance the track at all.. I would have banged in some strong but softer chorus vocals instead..hey that's only my opinion. This is still a good track and well thought out. Good luck with your new Magix software, its brilliant gear and I cant wait to hear more from you.

Best wishes,

Mark/Larry!

OK - a lot of this works - has a certain drive to it that is interesting. Good intro - the verse kind of works although it should be clearer. I don't love the scream/roar chorus because I don't think the vibe/tone is that angry. The bridge is actually very good. Honestly the overall track has promise - I just don't think it needs to hit the level of distortion/destruction that comes through. Not really my genre so I may be missing something.
-clindsay

I will just be totally honest and direct.

It was a nice verse. It has a good melody and builds up to a chorus, I think it sounds good. You need to come up with a better chorus, because that just sounded like noise to me.

I think, the song has potential, if you make a nice chorus!

I will also suggest you research Dynamic Range. You can bring your music alive this way. It is very easy to do:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Gmex_4hreQ

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qUcgg2vMX_s

imi place foarte mult-language-Romanian ;)

sweet man

You're improving greatly, mate...this was really sexy hardcore to listen...:)

Compliments_____Orlando

At start i thought 80´s Music that changes, while it turns to Marilyn Manson, that´s interesting and Sounds special on it´s own , there is definetily a lot of Potential.
Good Work ,Kepp on Mate,:)
DESTERO