Description : layed down vocals for neal visher's awsome instrumental "besides myself". many many takes and frustrations later this is what i came up with.tried to mix it the best that i could....thx for the spin and thx neal for the opportunity.
UPDATE:fixed volume levels......need feedback ...if it still needs more fixing......thx
" into your hands"
alone with my thoughts unable to escape you
im alone in solitude
this silence consumes but what can one do
when theres nowhere to run and hide
your chasing after me,you beckon me,your calling me
chorus:
im giving into and i fall
into your hands im always falling
into your grasp i give in....i give in x2
why do i fight this love? why?
do i shove away the one that saves this wretched soul?
but what can one do when theres nowhere to run and hide
when you are chasing after me,you beckon me
you are calling me
chorus:
This a great tune with tons of potential. I agree with Wayne, check out the volumes – the distorted chorus is not working for me. With lower levels you can use the dynamics in your voice even better.
Keep on keeping on, bro!
I like the effort you put into the vocal track, very creative and raw, nice layering of the tracks. NV can put a rocker together and the vocals seem to fit the music.
Just a suggestion on the mix, go for clearity in the mixing of the track over volume. I think if you brought the volume down a bit, the individual tracks will have more dynamics and impact, right now they are all at 11 on the scale, fighting for who will be the loudest in the song. I had to turn the vol down to about 60% and lost the feel and impact of the song. Maybe check your compression levels too, if your mix is good you shouldn't have to add much compression. Hopefully you take this as constructive criticism as it was meant. :)
the volume on the vocals? well of to the mixing board again.lol thanx for the feedback wayne i like constructive criticism makes better in the long run.i really do appreciate the tips.thx brother.if you could explain a bit further iwould really appreciate that.shoot me an e-mail.thx.
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Just a suggestion on the mix, go for clearity in the mixing of the track over volume. I think if you brought the volume down a bit, the individual tracks will have more dynamics and impact, right now they are all at 11 on the scale, fighting for who will be the loudest in the song. I had to turn the vol down to about 60% and lost the feel and impact of the song. Maybe check your compression levels too, if your mix is good you shouldn't have to add much compression. Hopefully you take this as constructive criticism as it was meant. :)
Wayne