Can You See My Pain - Joyfulwave Edit - Bmw2000uk

7th Dec 2010 11:59 - 15 years ago
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Description : Updated
This track is about broken relationships. I wrote this after one of my friends marriage broke up and saw the pain he was going through. I wrote it from a guys point of view, as we tend to get little or no sympathy at all in our lives in situations like this.

Special Thanks to Joyfulwave for mixing the vocals and mastering this for me, i would not have got a great track if he did not do such a fantastic job for me.

Comments (16)

If you have time take a listen and give bmw2000uk some feedback.

Polyfronetic
Polyfronetic 21st May 2013 17:52 - 13 years ago
Cool dance track. Has lots of groove, cool melodie and the vocals fits also. Good tune - i like it!

Greetings
Martin
TCAS
TCAS 8th Apr 2011 20:18 - 15 years ago
WOW man... this sound so Retro...

Depeche Mode, Information Society, Human League... you know where to get your inspiration...
I love the transition from the saw to the filtered pad very much!!!

Love this 80's tune in the new century...

But give the vocals some more input gain and their own eq'ing space.. sometimes the vocals drop back into the music...

Love this track, faved!!!

Don't try trance... just stick with this genre, that's what you're really good at!!!

TCAS
bmw2000uk
bmw2000uk replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Hey thanks for your review, i am amazed many people find my music brings them good memories and good old times. Dance is my genre since a teen, but today dance and trance and club sounds all the same to me. So i try put it in the correct genre. My current two tracks are trance, so if you not listened, have a listen and see if its more or less the same, as i like my music between 130 to 140 bpm. Also like other genres, when i have a good idea haaa. It is hard to get vocalists for my tracks and when i do it is usually old school friends or tempt the a female at work to do it haaa, still most of my friends are vocal so it helps, as they play those sing a long playstation games...haa
Dannii
Dannii 2nd Mar 2011 08:04 - 15 years ago
Oh God! Love this! Very 80´s but still modern! Very clear vocals, and I love your voice! Reminds me of Depeche Mode... Ever wanna collab let me know, I´ll be honored to-
bmw2000uk
bmw2000uk replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for your review, very much appreciated. Glad you like this. Not my voice, it was a friends vocals. Maybe one day we should collab..: )

Thanks.

Peace...
rsmisch
rsmisch 13th Feb 2011 03:58 - 15 years ago
nice production of vocals and all thats arownd it smoot put in place nice work

greetz DJ RV-Tex (rsmisch)
bmw2000uk
bmw2000uk replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thank you for your review, very much appreciated.
Encourages me to do better tracks in the future.

Peace...
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 20th Jan 2011 16:39 - 15 years ago
This is excellent! I'm hearing a bit of a Depeche Mode vibe on this one, which is very cool because I love them! The mixing and mastering is top notch! I think you did a great job conveying the feelings you intended! Awesome work! Faved for sure!
bmw2000uk
bmw2000uk replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thank you for your review, very much appreciated.
Makes me do better tracks each time.

Peace...
Resonanc
Resonanc 10th Jan 2011 14:03 - 15 years ago
yeah i dig this tune, i like the whole 80's sound. the voice sounds very 80's i dig sad topic i know but great tune, i also think the drums are a bit repetative but you know what it works not much change needed with this.
great work
bmw2000uk
bmw2000uk replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for your review. Mean a lot to me when people gives positive feedback, makes me do better tunes each time.

Peace...
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 10th Jan 2011 11:25 - 15 years ago
Wooow .. i was speechless for a moment here ..
the drum work is a bit repetitive but i really digg the vocals you have!

the synth is awsome too mate, keep up the awsome work!
bmw2000uk
bmw2000uk replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for your review. I am pleased it gave you the reaction as you said. Your positive feedback encourages me to do even better tunes each time.

Peace...
Planetjazzbass
Planetjazzbass 8th Jan 2011 23:59 - 15 years ago
Smooth production man....I was wondering how I was going to relate the description of this track to just the music,then the vocals kicked in!....I dig the whole vibe here,it's balanced yet dynamic at the same time....a tricky subject and painful for many,but you've both kept to task and delivered something that's heartfelt yet at the same time is not drowning in it's own self pity...great work!..cheers Dave :)
bmw2000uk
bmw2000uk replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thank you for your review. Yes, people know i just do music, but i also like to surprise my listeners with my music also. I guess that is what made you say hmmm? until the vocals kicked in.

Well i am always learning, and hopefully get better and better as my music matures.

Thanks again.

Peace...
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 30th Dec 2010 10:45 - 15 years ago
It always amazes me when someone says they love your track, but they neither fav nor download it. arrgggg

Anyways, I love the track.

Faved and Downloaded

John
bmw2000uk
bmw2000uk replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thank you for your review. Means a lot when i get positive reviews. Glad you love this track.

Peace...
jermaineOO9
jermaineOO9 19th Dec 2010 18:29 - 15 years ago
feeelin the overall track man, very nice work wit da drums and da synths, mix down is superb too!!! powerful vocals to set it all off!!!
bmw2000uk
bmw2000uk replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for your review. Yes the mix down is very good, Joyfulwave did a great job.

Peace...
koble
koble 18th Dec 2010 16:58 - 15 years ago
Nice track! Well mixed and bangin. Almost a rock track. Except the electronic feel makes it more of a club track. Did you do the vocals? They are quite good and appropriate. Impressive.
bmw2000uk
bmw2000uk replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for your review and kind words. This is something new i was trying out and had the pleasure of being helped by Joyfulwave. Vocals were from a friend, not my voice. wish i could sing ha ha ha.

Peace...
Influx
Influx 13th Dec 2010 22:03 - 15 years ago
EPIC! Loved every bit of it. Very nice job to the both of you. Vocals were really cool as well. Fav'd here. Take it easy, keep making great music!
bmw2000uk
bmw2000uk replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for your review, much appreciated. Glad u liked it, i think this is one of my fav tracks also.

Peace..
Cinas
Cinas 10th Dec 2010 22:45 - 15 years ago
holy cow nice track! i like the vocals alot! Hats off to the both of you!
bmw2000uk
bmw2000uk replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thank you for your review, i used the same words as you when i first heard what Jw did with the vocals : )

Peace...
jfw
jfw 9th Dec 2010 00:23 - 15 years ago
Excellent production and vocals. Great job - both of you!

Jamie.
bmw2000uk
bmw2000uk replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for your review. Glad you liked it.
It has been updated if u want another listen : )

Peace...
vigwig
vigwig 7th Dec 2010 15:44 - 15 years ago
Good mxing and good dance music but this is a subject for another genre, I think. It's s hard to convey pain in adance genre.Vocals are hard for me, I never get them right, that's why I make holes for them and it sounds kind of weird. Either that or I amp them up so I can hear them. This is a smooooooooth track.
bmw2000uk
bmw2000uk replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for your review, when i started this project, i did not want to do a sad kinda song like a ballard, like most songs are. So i try to make it enjoyable to listen to. Guess i wanted to be different, coming from unexpected direction.
Updated, if u care to take anther listen. : )

Peace...
Mosaic
Mosaic 7th Dec 2010 12:48 - 15 years ago
G'day my friend

Liking this one a lot matey, nice piece, good beat and bassline, liking the vocals but to me they could come up a few notches as they seem to get lost a little in the mix, good arrangement here keeping it interesting for the whole trip, so pleased that Joyful could help you out my friend, he is one brilliant guy and musician, adding this one to favs my friend...Peace n Respect...Estefano...
bmw2000uk
bmw2000uk replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Hi my friend, thanks for your review, i am glad you like this one, it is also a fav of mine too. Yes Joyfulwave and me been talking recently, got on well, he is one cool dude and i am big fan of his. My jaw dropped when he said he will help me this time as he was so busy...Vocals sound different on headphones and compare to speakers.

I still want to collab with you some time mate : )
Peace...

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