Stay Sane When You Touch The Sky - Groggy

27th Nov 2010 04:47 - 15 years ago
Description : .re-edit
I adjusted the drums with tridirt and the drums are now much louder compared to the previous versions. However, I'm not sure whether the kicker disrupts the bassline or not... some feedback pls?
/re-edit

.edit
REMOVED THE VOCALS. hf and please let me know what you think.
/edit

FL Studio 9

One of my first tracks I feel 'satisfied' about.
First time I used vocals, I'm still messing around with vocals, and clearly I didn't succeed here.. oh well ;)

Comments (11)

If you have time take a listen and give Groggy some feedback.

CiRcUz
CiRcUz 13th Mar 2011 22:50 - 15 years ago
might use another instrument
Groggy
Groggy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
never
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 9th Feb 2011 09:23 - 15 years ago
This isn't a genre I'm really all that familiar with so I can't really comment from that perspective. As a geeral lover of music, however, I can say that I like this track.

Well done

John
Groggy
Groggy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks John!
TjaardA
TjaardA 7th Feb 2011 07:12 - 15 years ago
Impressive groggy,

btw you are right about the kick drum it pushes away the other music, try a compressor on the kickdrum so u can mix it in easy and make it sound heavy.
Groggy
Groggy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Hey TjaardA, nice to see you joined looperman :-) thanks for the comment, I think I might try it in other tracks, I've adjusted this track so many times now hehe. I'll be looking forward to one of your tracks soon.
Vessela
Vessela 26th Jan 2011 20:45 - 15 years ago
I'm not good at all when it comes to reviewing... but I just wanna say I definitely like everything about that track:)cool,really cool bass:)
Groggy
Groggy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Haha nice to see you at one of my tracks :-) Thanks for your kind review and sharing your opinion, I'm glad you like it :D
TomaHawk
TomaHawk 18th Jan 2011 22:09 - 15 years ago
Personaly i think there are some wonderfull elements to this *track* if i may say so, perhaps the arrangment'would benifit, in regards of Bar/Blocks_Counts? rather than 4/8/16, go 1 nothch up,From what i can gather D&B only deals with 4 & 8 in its fills, & 16/32/64 Bar_counts for ' Verse & chorus's , I hope this helps for future tracks :) aka Tomahawk > Jamie
Groggy
Groggy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Aight, thanks man. Thanks for the advice, I'm just a beginner, or maybe I'm past that, but anyway I'm still trying to find out a lot of stuff. You're right tho, I mostly use 8/16 blocks. Cheers
LovensBeats
LovensBeats 19th Dec 2010 16:26 - 15 years ago
daim i love this here aww man i hope its cool if mix it or sample it keep that up
Groggy
Groggy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
ofcourse no problem man. Make it tight and share it with me :) Thanks for the review!
clinthammerMUSIC
clinthammerMUSIC 5th Dec 2010 06:59 - 15 years ago
Thick Drums and crazy synths. Everything sounds good here, bro. Keep em coming!-cheers
Groggy
Groggy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks! I will! Cheers.
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 4th Dec 2010 19:50 - 15 years ago
I didn't hear this with the vocals, but it stands just fine as an instrumental. I really like the bass on this one, but I think it drowns out the drums a bit. I like the piano sections very much! Good track to chill out to! Well done!
Groggy
Groggy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
I know what you mean when say the bass kind of drowns out the drums. The kicker isn't nowhere near as strong as in the piano sections.. I guess I could boost that a little too. Thanks for the nice words, glad it made you chill out :-) When are you going to upload a new track my friend? Am curious what you're working on now.
LongJohnsLiver
LongJohnsLiver 4th Dec 2010 19:34 - 15 years ago
Hey nice track, really good synth work for fl. Like the drums too. I need to get upgraded with that fl 9
Groggy
Groggy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for the review. Glad you like it. The drums are samples I grabbed from somewhere on the net but everything else made in fl9 if I remember correctly.
Mrbillionx
Mrbillionx 29th Nov 2010 20:04 - 15 years ago
Its incredible how someone was allowed to attempt to sing on this if you want to call it singing.

I suggest removing that and let the track stand on its own of you can't get someone to really do what needs to be done.

Pump up the bass

nice track other than that - Seems overly bright in places.
Groggy
Groggy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
hahahaha that's funny! DOn't worry it's just a sample from fl studio9 I took from a demo. Maybe I should've mentioned it. Like I said I was just experimenting with vocals and clearly I failed ;) Thanks for the review and maybe I'll repost or edit the track without vocals someday! Greetz
toddj
toddj 27th Nov 2010 09:47 - 15 years ago
The vocal doesn't have a harmonic match to this track. It does sound as though you have the good basis for a fine song. I like the drum and bass reminds me a little like the band Kosheen. Keep experimenting and practicing. It sounds like your off to a good start.
Groggy
Groggy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Haha Kosheen! I forgot about them! I youtubed them and I feel a bit proud you compare this track with Kosheen. Nostalgia... :-)

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