Listen To Sick Hip Hop Song By KukuKwan At Looperman.com

Don't mind MrBillionx, he's important to the site to just promote self-realization.
That being said, take it from a crazyimbecile lol

Definitely dug your choices in sounds.. I think that's the important thing to consider here, dynamically, I would maybe try and compress the vocal track with a gate... It's how I do vocals within ableton, like trying to keep that vocal presence? But not sound like "HIGH FREQS, and then off, and then HIGH FREQS" and then off?
You know what I mean?

I don't know what you use, but typically I like to run my vocals thru a compressor, and then a gate. That way I have a lot of room for volume.. Very specific. Breathes can actually be "pulled" out of the accapella this way.
You might know this stuff already and I do want to be a dick.
Music isn't a "challenge"
it's a form of therapy or healing.

So anyhow.
I like the idea of Dynamic Compression on the vocals, and then bumping the awesome guitar and drum work.
Why the drums soo quiet?
Bump them man.
BUMP them Hard.
Don't be afraid, just make sure they don't clip on your loudspeakers on the DAW mixer at -0 decibels, and they don't clip your speakers at -12 decibels live.
That's the way I look at it. But I am a whoretoheadphones.
Audiophile.

I am digging this.
Keep at it man.
You have the idea, just mess up some more.
:)

yes the vocal is amazing considering.

as for the beat itself

yes yes yes - we have heard this basic beat pattern so many times before - lets hope you don't plan to keep it this way and introduce this to the world.

Try again before you find out its been done.

( seems like someone is upset - or does the truth hurt )

Oh wow. Hot beat. You did a great job with this. Very atmospheric. Very deep. Wow.