dude i heard a song by a buddy on looperman. Broken Scythe. he has some ubber awesome beats. so he asked if i could write a rap to follow up to his awesome beat.. so instead of playing his track and makeing it conform to my style.. i did my best to conform to his style. so here my rap infused and with a great track called winter ice. this song was mixed my Broken Scythe. he did all the work so you should give him th pat on the back haha yea
he did a great job
EDIT.. a new version is up.. if you want to hear the older one.. you will have to hit it up at my myspace. this track was worked on by Broken Scythe all over again.. so if you drop me a line you should do the same on his page.. as i stated before i simply sent him a vocal track and he both mixxed it in to his song and made it fit.. more to come from us when i touch down in so-cal .. thanks for play our music..
This track is very unique.. i couldnt quite catch your flow, but still i caught your words and the meaning you put into them...The mixing and quality are real good...its' a very nice track bro i really enjoyed listening to it....
I think you did alright on this track. You need to keep working and working at it and things will keep improving, that rule applies to everyone including me. You have your own style and approach to lyrics, some people may criticise you but keep expanding and working on your style.
The music, vocals and mix were decent, you should be proud of what you've done here!!
Dope track Luckyfeatherstudios. Broken Scythe came through with an ill beat. Your lyrics are tight man. And with time the flow will get better so stick with it. Nice work man.
yea broken scythe has mad skills. thanks for the props man i am hopeing in time ill will do a bit more justice to the music haha : ) thanks for your listen and more so for leaveing a few lines
first off id just like to say, all the people that posted negitive reviews, it doesnt really matter. i would agree that yeah theres almost always more work to be done on any track its not just yours.
Personally, i kinda liked it, your vox really remind me of Icp. i guess my biggest suggestion, is less effects on the vox. bout the only thing i really know about rap, is that you want it to come out crystal clear, but there are songs that do have lots of effects that make it work, but just while your getting into the feel of making music, try to keep it simple. another thing is that with any kind of vox, you want to put alot of emotion into it to connect with the listener. but i think that for only a few uploaded tracks your doing pretty good for yourself! and dont let peoples negitive words get to you
i could not agree more in what you said other than me sounding like icp they. they have a far better sound than i, if you get the time, broken scythe lower'd some the vox on the track he just reuploaed.. you could always check it out. maybe be more to your likeing.. haha any way fayz always good to hear from you buddy, thankes for the listen and i wont let any one get me down haha. later pro. go with peace man
haha yea dude i really do need another mic haha, and a pop filter right now my brokeness is jamming off a old rock band mic.. but yea the beat is wicked haha.. well bro thanks for the listen and glad you took the time not only to play my song, but to leave a few words thanks playa
ummm i have no idea about the genre.., but dude thanks for the listen to my music.. means alot.. maybe i should put this one under spoken word haha.. thanks for the time day
We tried man, now we see what people think. Part of the process is having a lot of growing pains, and a lot of flinches lol. Beyond if you could give some pointers for whatevers wrong thatd be great. Appreciate the listen.
ouch first review and tis not a great one.. well do you know where it needs work. if the rap lacking. is the beat off.. plz breah you gotta give me a lil more thanks for playing it at least
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Personally, i kinda liked it, your vox really remind me of Icp. i guess my biggest suggestion, is less effects on the vox. bout the only thing i really know about rap, is that you want it to come out crystal clear, but there are songs that do have lots of effects that make it work, but just while your getting into the feel of making music, try to keep it simple. another thing is that with any kind of vox, you want to put alot of emotion into it to connect with the listener. but i think that for only a few uploaded tracks your doing pretty good for yourself! and dont let peoples negitive words get to you
maybe cause im high, could u explain the style
cause mabe it should be in spoken word genre