Listen To GOLD - U2 Wb - Extended Version Featuring Sumper Rock Song By GOLDMARCH At Looperman.com

16th Oct 2010 00:13 - 15 years ago
Description : NOT finished.. Still working with it.. s

Intro in or out ???

Would like outstandig ears on it, while I'm working with it thanks.. Do You still like it, or has something to be changed/corrected???

LYRICS:

Spoken Words:

Sometimes we choose our coinsidences..
Sometimes the coinsidences choose us...
Sometimes we make the wrong choise...
Sometimes we listen to the wrong voice...
- Do things we might regret...
- As we can try to make better..
- If we haven't yet...

Hours of lust... You're standing there in the cold...
Hours of dust... You're want to make Your 'gold'..

Oh lord..

Preacher tell me what's wrong...
What's going on...

Make a wish.. to Your god.. Cause he might help.. and be Your guard..

You get a cold there... in the rain...
and try to avoid the enormously pain...

Harrr...

Oh lord..

Powers with must.. You want to change Your role..
(Absolute powers... You HAVE to do this and that (in this song sexually...)

Powers in fust... You're underserving Your soul...
(The story: Men want sex nearly no matter where with hookers and want to control them with power... very often undecent places, where the smell and hygiejne isn't good...) That's fx. fust...

Oh lord..

Some more lyrics, when time and after the reviews.. s

Comments (7)

If you have time take a listen and give GOLDMARCH some feedback.

VickyDan
VickyDan 23rd Oct 2010 11:18 - 15 years ago
Excellent .... Could not we get the a capella? I would like to integrate your voice on one of my composition. Just for fun. Thank you ....
GOLDMARCH
GOLDMARCH replied Unknown
Thanks dear.. With spoken words too ??? You could also get another acapella instead in the same genre, if You send the composition ..
SpyderX
SpyderX 19th Oct 2010 01:57 - 15 years ago
Hello, Stina,

Very, very nice track. The soft "jazzy" drums are fantastic with the spacey atmospheric pads. And the sparkling, echoing keys are a perfect compliment to your warm, mellow vocals. And the lyrics are excellent as well. I wouldn't change a thing, girl ~ it's perfect as it stands.

Peace and love,

Mike
GOLDMARCH
GOLDMARCH replied Unknown
Thank You so much dear.. Guess Sumper will be happy to know, You like his choise of drums and so on.. And so happy to know, You like the lyrics and voice.. Means a lot to me, people notice the work with lyrics and voice nicely and like them/it..
deltaaah
deltaaah 18th Oct 2010 22:26 - 15 years ago
Alright Stina, lets listen and review simultaneously... Keep the intro definitely. percussion is solid and well mixed. Love this feeling, your vox add so much to this. Love the vocal play with you and the pads. Good choice of bass and instruments all around. Solid :)
GOLDMARCH
GOLDMARCH replied Unknown
Thank You so much dear for the very nice compliments.. ☺ Kind of You.. Sumper has now made a profile in here, so hope he also will read Your very nice words concerning the bass and instruments..
Kikajon
Kikajon 18th Oct 2010 22:10 - 15 years ago
hey Stina, I like this soundscape and your voice fits right in. I really like the low pitched, semi spoken parts, creates a very special mood. Good stuff.
Ha det gott
/pmk
GOLDMARCH
GOLDMARCH replied Unknown
Tack så mycket snälla för Your nice comment, compliments and review..

Tack det samma til ha det så bra.. s

Hugs Stina..
ssc24
ssc24 16th Oct 2010 18:33 - 15 years ago
Yeah very good job Stina !! I want a colaboration with you.. something similar schiller, musik relax.. compliments!
GOLDMARCH
GOLDMARCH replied Unknown
Thank You very much dear.. Nice of You to listen again and review.. And thanks for the compliments.. s Sounds nice with collaboration.. ☺
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 16th Oct 2010 05:59 - 15 years ago
A very atmospheric piece. Quite dark, especially given the content of the lyrics. I like the intro, I think it is just fine. I can't imagine what you would change. Faved.

You have a great voice, perhaps, we can do a track together in the future. I'm already currently involved in 3 collabs at the time.

All The Best

John
GOLDMARCH
GOLDMARCH replied Unknown
Thank You so much for Your very kind and nice review dear.. and the nice compliment concerning my voice.. ☺ I am flattered.. And would be nice to collaborate yes.. I'm also working with several nice collaborations, so that's the same.. ☺
Gordw
Gordw 16th Oct 2010 01:57 - 15 years ago
I still like it, but personally, I would leave the higher pitched voice on the intro out from 5 seconds to 12 seconds. That's just my opinion though. I do like the spoken word that you have after the intro, I think its great. You have such good vocals. Very nice job. Would you care to either post or e-mail your lyrics. I am having a little trouble understanding them. Not your fault, my ears sometimes can't pick vocals/lyrics out of songs. I just think it's a great track and once I read the vocals I'll beable to hear them. You've got a really really nice track here and I like it alot. Very nice job on everything. Take Care, Gord

Your lyrics and vocals are perfect. They are not messy at all. It all fits together nicely. You have a well thought out and well produced track that I enjoyed listening to.
Take Care, Gord
GOLDMARCH
GOLDMARCH replied Unknown
Thank you VERY much dear.. Kind of You.. Kisses on the cheek..

Is it okay with the lyrics now written to the song?, or is it too messy... Tried to make lines (enter...), but stands like that now ...

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