The Journey Of Lonely - DJFredrick

Yo. Firstly - it is a great track indeed. I like the flow, the background melody reminds me of Hadouk Trio (if you don't know them - recommend listen for you!). The pace is nice, the tune is progressing well, it's arranged in a way that lets enjoy the trip. One thing - to me, the snares were bit too loud, kinda took lead of the whole track, and I think it should be melody that leads it, not the beat. Could be little bit longer too! It ended too fast!

Respect, well done.

And peace.

cool track, i liked how smoothly it moves along, really feels like im traveling to somewhere distant on a camel's back or something. would make for a great sound track, wish i could give out some constructive criticism but it sounds pretty damn good through my cheap laptop speakers, so i think you accomplished something very few people could do "make music sound good on my laptop". i enjoyed the contrasting feel of ethnic sounds and an uplifting drum beat. sounds a little like the drums are borderline hip hop but they go great with the rest of the track, anyways in short, Great Job
Fayz

this one is so relaxing. i can set this tune up while i smoke a L , and kick back with my shorty to relax and chill.

Nice one man, i dont know if i ever wrote you any imagery on your old tracks on my old account, but anyways here goes, typing while listening. i sense a clashing cascade of emotions that begin suttle but then infuse themself with dramatic feelings and tensions rise slightly again only to be soothed by the calming voice of what seems to be almost an angel singing a choir. But yet the one listening to this angels voice begins wonder who it's listening to, and singing such a heavenly rhythm. the person then realizes where their hearing this soothing rhythm coming from within, and the person opens their mouth and suddenly sings that soothing rhythm....

Bane

Thia is a great piece. I listebned to it while watching a battle scene from Gettysburg (tv sound off as usual, lol, must have been a silent movie fan in a previous life). Anyways, the track sounded like it belonged.

Great track, my friend, all the best

John

Let me Put me feet up to this one...
Nice chilled out feel to it..Carn't get up now gonna get the wife to put the kettle on..Nice
Vantage

Hi

Music a great sense of life where given soul and energy - in this track, I feel it ... Great work deserves a good evaluation - style 100% enigma, beautiful sounds of something ethereal and soothing - so keep

hey sorry to bug ya. i worte a few lines in case you wanted em. if you like em i could try to rap em for ya.. any where here ya go

The sun rising at my feet
Tonight, it will set to my back
I walk along this tiresome street
My life under this lonely attack

Alone, alone I walk
The darkness stalks
Around ever corner
Only to turn ya

Leaving nothing but these weeping blues
And the chaos ensues
But I step and step once more to pay my dues

Feeling the glaring eyes
Peering into this chest of mine
Each day I slowly die
All I want to see is the bottom of this bottle of wine

alone, alone I talk
But there eyes mock
There is no other owner
To my crying soul

Leaving nothing but these weeping blues
And the chaos ensues
But I step and step once more to pay my dues

uhhh thats what i got. any way thats kinda how this track made me kinda feel.. any who once again. awesome song dude ahaha 10 out of 10

Well its a cool tune to relax to, i really like this one.

Nice vocal background, the snare drums? sound awesome, very calm and not overpowering track. I love the pianos also...

Ahhh great one to listen to.

Good job

Peace...

well i am i don't know what you were aiming for with this song, but to me i got this deep urge to write some lines down. it really is an amazing song. haha really deep. music is a crazy thing. to you this could mean something so different that how it makes me feel. the songs flow was better than any i could manage and beyond my dreams. this was an amazing track. the flow was what was the most shocking. in all honesty id love to rap to it : ) haha. great work. i really wanna peer through you work now ahaha

Doughi Boi ahaha thats how i roll

A master piece man u did the equal work to what enigma does but u r now my favourate.

Wow. I cant believe i haven't heard your stuff before. This is truly fantastic. I loved every second of it. I mean its so epic i dont know if i could describe it in words! I'll give you this: the sounds that you put together are very original. I mean you've got a little hip hop, a little oriental, a little orchestreal, and a little chill out, and of course the fx sounds here and there. Love it, fav'd for sure.

Peace Love Jesus!

This is beautiful. I love all the earth sounds. This song you would hear on a journey. There is a sense of sadness, but I get more of a feeling of overcoming something in life, and like your moving forward. I do get that Enya feel or Enigma feel.

Hey my friend

Man nice piece, liking the natural sounds of the seagulls at the start, very much a Ambient sound and feel about this one, maybe sober feeling, yep you are right it is tinged with a bit of saddness in the sound, nice synths, piano also, matey always enjoy listening to your piece's, they take you on a journey, which is not always easy to do but you have down to a tee, fav'd...Peace mate...PS have new piece for ya to check out, it is called Come On Baby, hope you enjoy, something again bit diff from me again...Estefano...

Definitely a sad traveling feel, like you said! I really like the percussion on this track, and those vocal samples are really cool! The piano is a nice touch. That duduk is beautiful! Nicely put together my friend! I really like this track!

Hey man cool journey with this piece....love those vocal insertions!....a real crossover track if ever there was one,very cool!and well executed..I recently went to a Turkish wedding where the band consisted of three guys,a keyboardist who doubled as the source for the rhythm track,a woodwind player (duduk and other mid eastern pipes),and a bazouki player or the Turkish equivalent...these guys were incredible..I had a long talk with them after the gig,they loved that a non Turkish guy appreciated their music so much,I was blown away by their musicianship,they literally ripped every song they played,traditional music but with a strong upbeat modern tempo not unlike in some areas what your doing here...cheers planet :)

Yeah thats got the Planets touch I hear that! nice work, not crazy about the snare sound though,would have given it a more solid snare, sort of Sade feel to it maybe! but the tune flows nice and gets really dynomac to the mid end! very kool!

peace

Bm;)