Dear Mother Pt 1 - Writenow921

15th Jul 2010 19:07 - 16 years ago
Description : This track is a part of a spoken word projectI am currently composing dedicated to my birth mother. Being that I am adopted I am creating a collection of poems centered around that theme. This project has been a few years in the making, and the poem itself was one of the first composed so it holds alot more anger than the later, more understanding, poems do. The track opens with a pella from Holly, and is backed by strings once again from Piano Sounds. I do compose my own tracks, but since I am using loops from other members I might as well upload those that borrow from here first. I hope you enjoy

Comments (7)

If you have time take a listen and give Writenow921 some feedback.

dyldonomus
dyldonomus 24th Jan 2014 03:40 - 12 years ago
this is pretty sick!
ntid
ntid 27th Oct 2013 02:25 - 12 years ago
Nice effort..try again.
Effluence
Effluence 14th Sep 2010 18:55 - 16 years ago
I love the George Bush line!
Effluence
Effluence 14th Sep 2010 18:54 - 16 years ago
Something that I love and appreciate about your poetry is that you but feeling into it. Whether pain, love ect. great job
StereoMathematics
StereoMathematics 31st Aug 2010 21:18 - 16 years ago
dude, your poetry is so moving. keep doin what you do man.
TheWritersPoet41
TheWritersPoet41 18th Jul 2010 18:44 - 16 years ago
Man this is very deep I can hear the strength in your voice
toxxicity
toxxicity 15th Jul 2010 19:54 - 16 years ago
i think the vocals are little to loud, good lyrics though. just needs to be compressed i think.

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