Excellent piece of music. No crits.

A really enjoyable listen.

John

diggin the intro. ima sucker for piano melodies..
it fits together really well.
love when everything drops off except that little organ sound.
there was like one little wobble that kinda comes at you a bit more than the others do. dont know if that was intentional or not.
its a good smooth dubstep breakthrough track!
keept it up homie!

-celest

UPDATE (8-21-10)
right around 0:48 when the "WAOW WAOW WA WAOW" hits, the 3rd wobble comes a little bit harder than the other 3. sounds to me like you have a phaser on it and that might just happen to be when it swells out at you. which if thats the case maybe try soothing the phaser a bit. its nothing BAD that will kill the song, just something that happened to catch my ears. once again, keep up the good work homie!!

Any way I could do vox for this one too?

Epic.

Spreading Bass Pad is my initial fav. The entire beat is just filthy. I'm starting to hear lyrics too. maybe something like;

Some times some things
You can never take back
So keep rollin on
Don't ever look back

I don't know its your track, and I'm sure whatever you do with it will be awesome. Props again B'n'B. Burnin down for this one.
NOICE WORK!!!

I think this is great. Melodic as you say, crisp beats, and a deep wobble. I like how the guitar and piano swap being the lead. that is a great keys sample.The tone of the piano is really fantastic.

Dope brutha... This is some good dubstep...I too am working on a dubstep beat as it is new to me for production. But you are on right track for sure. The beat is solid, you got the wobs wobbin...lol... and the melody of that organ is dope...Keep at it man we only get better from here.!!! Blume :)

its put together really nice. Just add more bass lines. the bass lines you have are pretty sick just add more.

i like it man,nice work..keep that comming

nice mate your seem to have a natural talent to make good put together music unlike myself. keep up the good work. il look out for more of yours.

Man, Nice Tune! I am really diggin' the melodies! The bass is thick as hell,...Great wobble. You got the drums samples down pat. Great envelope tweakage on the bass dude. Very nice!

There is a long ending, but other than that, Great track!

Wow, I didn't expect anything out of it from the start, but it explodes with sound a couple seconds later. Great first try on this. Continue what you during. Sounds great.

EPIC! Damn dude, sounds like a performance. I don't even know what to say, it all sounds excellent, good work man!

i secretly envy those who say a really well put together piece is their first attempt at a genre.
youre keys are divine, as previously stated by almost everyone. the drums are solid..the bass is on point..the wobble is nicely used.
great first attempt..well done!

Wow! When I heard that lovely intro with the organ and stuff I thought this track wouldn't have that fat dubstep bass at all....

But once the wobble came in,, awesome track man! you should keep it like this ;)

The only bad thing I can say about this is someone needs to put vocals over this, its beautiful. Outside my normal genre, but I really like what I hear. I'm going to listen to more of you.

-MrBG

This is so great I love piano tune,man!
Piano is my favourite toy,great elements and this go to my favourite!

keep doing good work!

(If you are put this track for download,please let me know!)

9R

I Like it man, whats the BPM your working at? I can't think of much advice for the track, sounds good to me man. Some good elements in here.

EDIT: OK, I was thinking it sounded like Grime speed, normally Dubstep is 150ish, so maybe up the tempo a little. It's up to you but that's the speed most D-Step producers use. Take it easy man.

SECOND EDIT: No worries man, yeah 140 is usually Grime and Breakbeat speed.

Hey, I like this style of dubstep! It's more melodic than most I've heard. Nice organ part, I love organs! Nice track, it has a lot of potential!

This is good mate,the drums are nice and strong and the melodic parts fit nicely together, did you play them yourself?

Maybe just make it a bit longer and add some breakdowns/buildups.

good work, Keep it up