This is really fab! Vocals are good, you sound like Midge Ure.

change nothing! this is an awesome song overall, music, vocals, delivery, the cause. great job.

Interesting use of the vocals of the kids. The track sounds good and it somehow reminds me of a few artists in the trance area, probably has more influences in it then I would have expected.

Not my cup of tea this genre but a fabulous effort.

The vocals are sounding great and I think you've made a professional job over here!

-Malu-

Wow . One of the best trance tracks I've heard on looperman . The laugh makes the song really epic and the synths are really great . Your voice is amazing . Keep up the good work . Definitely going to keep an eye on you to see more amazing trance tracks . Fav

Don't change anything about this, it's perfect with your vocals. This is so totally your song, it would be spoilt if you changed it!

great track. i don't share your opinion it would sound better with female vocals. think it's fine as it is. your voice reminds me to dj shah - tides of time (maybe i'm completely wrong, cause i haven't heared that track for a whole bunch of years, but i think your vocals sound similar - just was the first thing that came into my mind, when i listened to your track). it would be quite amazing, if you could add some spoken vocals by any child, saying something impressive. imagine something like michael jackson's heal the world - the little girl talking at the beginning. something like that would fit perfectly into the break at 2:30, i think. you did a good job here at all.

I like this!
Would love to add it to Fern Flame!
Thank u for taking part!l
g.xxxx

really enjoyed this track. your singings not bad at all better than i could do anyway. it reminds me of cosmic gate alot which i like a lot. nice clear sounds great bassline and great all round track. dont feel guilty its not your fault, wish more people shared this sentiment tho.
nice one
Hunter

I agree with Estafano...your vocals should stay,it feels like it's from a male or father's perspective,but of course anyone can identify.I have four grandchildren now and can appreciate your song and it's message.

Allen

Hey Brother

Man back to check out the version with lyric's in it,glad that you took my advice on the vocal wording, it sounds like it was meant for the english speaking world, mate this has gone up another notch my friend, Joyful my friend, this is stunning piece, I ask that you keep your vocal on it, my man as your voice goes so well with the music, personally I dont think a female vocal would suit the track, could be wrong but mate I think it is perfect as it is, stunning my good friend, pleased that I could help you out with a few words for the track, massive Fav Brother....Telling people at work what we have spoken about with this one and they can not believe what you said you would do, told them what is the plan for the track, they were impressed...Peace and Respect good mate...Your one in a million JW....

Mate this is a pure no1, i love this track, you got a great voice over it. Must ask you to put some of your voice on my future tracks ha ha..

Now can you do us a extended 12"remix cause its an addictive tune.

You given me food for thought on future ideas now.

Nice one...

Peace...

This is so great JW!
You have all my respect man, and you have great voice really impressive!
Synths are always excellent when you made it!

Great work JW,once again!

9R

Hi joyful, how you doing? Nice laugh in the start, and the samples really are fanastic at the start. Really like this new style your developing, and this is the best new song you've done recently in my opinion, the pikes/arps are great, and the bassline. The vocals are fantastic, you are a great singer! I like what you've done with this song Joyful, very good song!

I'm gonna faviroute this one, it deserves it!

Ste :)

Great tack man, love the way this was done! the kids voices ad lots of diemsion to the song!good vocals, maybe could have been more sinister! but really cut it well!

peace

Bm;)

Hey Brother

Mate this is one stunning piece, man it will be a pleasure to do what you have asked, synths are magic here,Great strong beat and bassline, you are right techno at start and finish but the rest is pure brilliant trance, absolutely amazing my good friend, hey nothing surprises me now with the quality of work you do, always stunning...Instant FAV...Peace and massive respect to you JW...Estefano...

yeah bro thats a tune your are a great trance producer i love the pads and the synths are something else this is going in my fav section as always your music is flawless keep them coming bro

u have a great voice mate,
solid track my friend, great synths , and nice notes, it will be great if u add some female vocals, u always amaze me with ur work , so keep them coming bro.i will fav this one , again great
cheers

from 1 min and out.. it sounds so damn great!! realy trance sound of that synth :) keep it up ;)

Outstanding trance track my friend this is definately going on my ipod for my workout playlist! I recognize a few of the loops but i cant tell from where lol anyways great song all the way through good job!

Nice stuff man, one of the best tracks I've heard on here today. Best synth work, no doubt.