Description : I put this together quickly - Ad-lib lyrics. A memory. 7 Years ago.
This is a first draft - will probably get back to it later and tweak. I would love to put some lush strings in here.
Hope you enjoy. Let me know your thoughts.
LYRICS:
i guess i could have been braver
and taken your hand
down to the bus stop
through the sand
in my shoe
(it was you)
looking back now
i see
but it's too late for me
i guess i could have been braver
i could have let go
the autumn and springtime
the sun and the snow
i'm waiting for you now
to come to a halt
feels like you've been running forever
and it feels like it's my fault
like i'm to blame
blame
carry the shame
alone
i guess i could have been braver
and kissed you on the mouth
i guess i could have been stronger
and let it out
i'm telling you now
i want you again
that summer or springtime
was...
but winter or autumn is
buried within
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Comments (9)
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This sounds real, piano has very nice and chamber touch. Topic in the lyric is heavy but that makes it soulful. Voice has pleasant color, I see there are cool parts and some where it does not intones well or is overbalanced. Hihats are staccated after each other with no velocity manipulation, that is not easy listening for me, but maybe they should hihlight the heaviness of topic I do not know. Song structure is well done. I like it except those 2 things I mentioned.
hey there, had a listen to some of your tracks. you definately know what you're doing. myself on the other hand... I have no experience in sound engineering and stuff like that. So when you tell me the "Hihats are staccated"... I don't really know what you mean! :) hehehehe You must forgive me, I make music that sounds good to my ears, in the way I taught myself. Your comments and advice is always welcome though, so I will try and learn what you meant in your comment!
Hi Minette,
What can I say?Another beautiful track from you which goes directly to my favs.Your voice is absolutely fantastic here and perfectly fits the melancholic and haunting feel to the song.I agree the strings would probably bring something to the track
Cheers
StÃÂphane
hey StÃÂphane, thanks for the listen and the compliment. I would like to redo the track with lush strings in it... now... where do i find a full string section? hehehe
thanks for checking in on my tunes - appreciate it!
Good heavens, how have I not heard you on Looperman before?
A better question might be, why haven't I heard you on the radio and television before?
I am not flattering or exaggerating. Female vocals are my favorite instrument, and there are only a hand full of famous musicians that have the same mesmerizing effect on me as your voice does.
man your voice is amazing why do you want to rap? maybe we should do a collab and il hook you up wid some drum samples.got to give it to you tho your vocals are really good..nice sounds good work wish i could singh
drum samples are always welcomed! got FL the other day...... tried to put some drums down... man I sucked! looks like i'm going to have to rely on the looper-family to "hook me up"!
hello,
Good composition, but just a little thing. Sometime, your voice seems to fall down as if you can not maintain it at its note. It makes a special effect, but, I think that if you make longer expirations (like trainings), you could develope a real beautiful voice, but a voice with a strength, which can give a real presence to you music(s).
It's only my opinion, don(t worry, you have this possibility to better control your voice, so...DO IT !
i agree with you wholeheartedly - i am sure i could do loads more with my voice, just... finding the time. not to try and cover my tracks here... but i was sitting when i did the vocal on this (bad move) - and also, like i mentioned, it was all ad-lib (the lyrics) - so this is a one-take track (on the vocals)
but thanks for the advise. i hear what you're saying! thanks!
Description : Spacey and Dancey and Synthwavey and Dreamy
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Description : UPDATED 01/03/2023 better volume level
hi guys this is my comeback song, never let them haters beat you.
as you know ive not been around much having gained a successful job and giving that all my attention. ive some catching up to do
this is to CreativeStudios great track The Ride, see what ive done :)). its 5 mins plus. thanks for letting me loose on it Jan.
Description : messed around on my piano, came up with a good idea, and put it in fl studio. I think it turned out pretty great. It would be awsome to get some vocals to this. if you do, feel free to change up the title or whatever. tempo is at 105 if ya need to know. review it and enjoy.
Description : Prod. by Louie Jun and Marbs Music. Diamond Star is the singer. It's on YouTube and SoundCloud. Check out my social media @diamondstarsy.
Description : My original vocal composition with an array of fantastic looperman samples.
Credits;
Production and Mix - 2nick8
Lyrics and Vocals - 2nick8
Music from Looperman Samples
midnightkayaking-sound-of-walking-away-guitar-2
sushilbawa-pluck-punchy-90
simsa105-vigorous-piano
sushilbawa-synth-stroke-90
hnstracks-piano-chords-oh-well-90-bpm
fanto8bc-liuru-piano-synth
willaman-xxxtentacion-drama-drums #2
krolbeats-lo-fi-drum-loop
angelwtf14-grand-808-slide
mamagbeats-80s-future-synth-90-bpm
yourboyhs-lovely-pads-90-bpm
krolbeats-synth-percussion-loop
josephfunk-fresh-and-clean-electric-keys-90
djole94hns-smooth-bass-for-beats
alabafruit-simple-hip-hop-drums-90-bpm
thenerve-chill-trap-90bpm
dannyhonestly-peezo-pixies
designedimpression-bass-loop-hip-rap-bass-guitar-90
Description : This one has been sitting on my computer for a bit now but didn't really like it. My friends say it can use some vocals and I think that is what this one needs. If there is anyone who wants to put some vocals on this, send me an email at .magic41151@yahoo.com. or post below. Thanks for tuning in and have a great day!
Description : Based on excellent track by BradoSanz (nothing compares instrumental). I've added an intro, many sliced up vocals, audio effects, and some electric guitar. Includes loops: Holly's Within your soul, and 40A's Unstoppable.
Hope you are all staying safe! I don't know about all of you guys but I was feeling really creative during this pandemic. I'm really proud of it because It reflects a lot of my life and it's an all-round feel-good hopeful ep can't wait to share it. It's out 6.19.20 you can get a sign up for a reminder on my website or just comment below and I'll send it to you when it's out! :) THANKS EVERYONE SO MUCH FOR YOUR SUPPORT FOR THE PASS 4 years!!! #LoopermanFam
Thanks again for the listen and come back soon :)
What can I say?Another beautiful track from you which goes directly to my favs.Your voice is absolutely fantastic here and perfectly fits the melancholic and haunting feel to the song.I agree the strings would probably bring something to the track
Cheers
StÃÂphane
thanks for checking in on my tunes - appreciate it!
A better question might be, why haven't I heard you on the radio and television before?
I am not flattering or exaggerating. Female vocals are my favorite instrument, and there are only a hand full of famous musicians that have the same mesmerizing effect on me as your voice does.
Ps. I know i still owe you an email.
thanks for the listen and leaving a comment! :)
Good composition, but just a little thing. Sometime, your voice seems to fall down as if you can not maintain it at its note. It makes a special effect, but, I think that if you make longer expirations (like trainings), you could develope a real beautiful voice, but a voice with a strength, which can give a real presence to you music(s).
It's only my opinion, don(t worry, you have this possibility to better control your voice, so...DO IT !
but thanks for the advise. i hear what you're saying! thanks!
fav and dl.
/pmk
p.s. I'd love to do a song with you. Let me know if you're interrested.
your kind words are much appreciated :)