Crystal City - WARRIORDANIKA

Very good use of the pads. And I like the vocals that it has.

WOW!dreamy!!!THOSE padz!!?Out of this world..definatly in crystal city

Wow, Danika, This is a really cool track! Scott did a great job with this, as did you. Your voice sounds good, but I'm not a guy who likes allot of reverb. I know this style lends itself to that, but would have liked to understand the lyrics a bit better. Also like your lyric writing skill. I think when you get more familiar with your DAW program and your mixing skills improve, you will be a real powerhouse!

Good job!

Cheers,
Scott (another one)

first of all this is a remarkable lyrix which makes me have most respects for this track ( as sung version ) ..
instrumentaly , no doubT its adorable ..a thoughtfull musical form (especially as a platform for vocal ) , and as a guitarist I enjoyed the guitar part & mentality of selecting symphonic/classical inervals & notes ...
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as a criticism which I hope won't bother U , I just think this instrumentation ( such a multiple & something which has taken time of composer ) deserves to be heared more in sung version too ...
I underestand your lyrix has been worth considering & I really enjoyed & adored your lyrix ...but there's a point which makes the proff singers be recognizable from those singers who are seriously tallented but -for any reason-not quite proff in which " a proff singer/lyricist makes,designes considers & some how calculates how many seconds is she/he singing & how many seconds she/he has let the music to talk & be heared & remembered for audiances...
but a singer who is not quite proff but quite tallented & with an amazing mind ,does everythings perfectly & finely but just forgets about this simple principle in which that instrumentation which has convinced her/him(singer) to compose a serious lyrix & vocal melody as an instrumental track , deserves to be heared by the audiances/listeners in sung version too ...& that's what will make listener to be influenced by what singer is singing ...""
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anyway I really enjoyed , I really found it so worth to
be heared more & I admire you both for such a great & adrable collab..excuse me for such a long comment & hope U'll reallize I just tried to be more usefull as a comment despite writing just some repeatetive words as loopermanian compliments was so easier for me ...
respects , regards & best wishes.___Behnam

great track, your voice is so gothic in this track anyway, it is dreaming, mystical but powerfull.
Great story telling voice you have here.
great work

I think your vocals are absolutely fantastic. The track is quite tight. Love when the lead guitar comes in. Everything just fits so very well.

I am honoured to be the first to fav the track

John

Geez, I don't know, the vocals sound great to me. They sound real and powerful, if you know what I mean. The music moves nicely through the track. Good job.
Gord

Wow!! That was killer! When I wrote this song I wasn't thinking about vocals, now you make me want to redo it so you can sing it again! Great job! Thank you so much for singing on it!! Sorry it took so long for the review. Very strong vocals!! Outstanding!!

Nothing wrong here - agreed with the other dude definately Susie and the banshee's type track - great lyrics and music score - well done

I think there is something very Alison Goldfrapp meets Siouxsie and the Banshees about your vocals with this tune. Very powerful and direct evoking moods and emotions which meet the harmonic nature of the backing track. Your vocals would be a huge credit to any future tracks I may make...I'll def. keep you in mind. Well done. Respect, --Davey--

i love this could have a lot of fun tuneing it! but that just me good job so far! lots of energy1 reminds me of all the chics i played d&d with! wow! the fun we had!

Good lyrics, I really like when the song picks up the pace, good job keep it up.