Trapped Among Society - SUBJECTN9NE

trapped among society. nice title, sounds like a woman trapped in my arms. very good job

this one is nice and dark love that wobble
o yea and that synth is still too loud
lookin forward to seeing your evolution
peace

DAW = Digital Audio Workstation
like Fl, Ableton, or Cubase.

dude!
i was in the same position not too long ago.
just exported loops and fit stuff together
in audacity. i did a bassline that got close
to chase and status's basslines for "Eastern Jam"...
mad i didnt save the sytrus patch.
i think ud do damage with a working DAW,
and a phat bassline pushin' VSTi, like albino 3 or massive. (Albino's my weapon of choice, but the anoloug sounds from massive are, well, massive haha)
hope u can get a hold of it soon,
ur stuffs on point.

im likin this...great start. youve got a helluva wobble on your bass, which makes this nice and dirty. the beat is solid, and your synth accents are right on point. in terms of changes, you might want to try some subtle rythym switches with the bass, perhaps a small variation in the beat. or, do what i do and just go crazy: place one of the beats you started working on but didnt know how to finish/what to do with it [we all seem to have some of those lol] and just stick it in the middle of this piece as a break. wose come to worse, you just break up the elements you alread have [let just the wobble or just the synth ride with just the beat for a while].
youre getting better and better with each piece. its been a joy listening to your progession. keep it up...
great work!