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Tags : | Heavy Metal | 4.31 MB

Description : Here is the re-re-remastered version of the song. This is a Progressive Death Metal song about a certain leader lulling everyone into sleepy ignorance and setting about the end of the world. I play all of the insturments and sing on this recording. I used Magix Music Maker to record the tracks. The drums are layered drum loops. Everything else is a recorded instrument.

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  1. UncleMalaria
    UncleMalaria on Sat 6th Feb 2010 - 14 years ago

    Super fantastic track!
    The guitar is super fricking amazing! I really enjoyed the synths and drums.
    My comments are as follows, the vocals are too quite with lots of plosives, and I can not hear the bass line.

    Great track!

    guitarjock
    Reply by guitarjock

    UncleMalaria,

    Thanks for the review. Vocals are the hardest part for me. The next mix for it will have the vocals raised a little. I wish I could get rid of the plosives. The only way to fix that will likely be to re-record the vocal parts themselves. As for the bass line, there isn't actually any bass in the song. So I really should look at adding one. I am glad that you like what I have so far. I appreciate the feedback you gave. It will help in making this track better. I will check out some of your tunes. Thanks again for the review.

  2. Kper
    Kper on Sat 6th Feb 2010 - 14 years ago

    I enjoyed the progressive nature of this track. The keyboard work is great and really adds a nice layer. Everything is very well put together. I like how the keyboard melody at times mirrors the guitar riff. Great riffs in general. This is well constructed and each section is put together to flow well into the next and creates a complete song. Very interesting- this is a genre I enjoy and I think you have added a great track to this genre. Great job. Looking forward to hearing more. Kper

    guitarjock
    Reply by guitarjock

    Thanks Kper for the review. This is the first song that I have ever been somewhat happy with my vocals. So I finally have a song with all the parts. I usually just upload music and no vox. Anyway, thanks for the review and have a great weekend.

  3. ToxicConcepts
    ToxicConcepts on Thu 4th Feb 2010 - 14 years ago

    Great overall sound, and I hope when you upload the final cut the few spots with low vocals are sorted because I really like this song.

    guitarjock
    Reply by guitarjock

    Hello Toxic,
    Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like the song. I still haven't figured out how to record vocals very well. I have a Sure Beta 58 mic that I'm running straight into my computers mic jack for the recording. Do you have any suggestions on how I could get it to sound better other than going to a studio? Thanks again for the review, I'll check out some of your tunes.

  4. Crypt
    Crypt on Wed 3rd Feb 2010 - 14 years ago

    Love the vocals and the guitar and the keyboards. Wicked screams and the solo totally f**king rips man. Keep working this one dude. I'm faving this one.

    guitarjock
    Reply by guitarjock

    Guitarjock's Reply
    Hey Crypt, thanks for the review. I checked out some of your tunes and I like the new Industrial one you are working on. Can't wait to hear it when it's complete man. Let me know when its done.

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