On Edge - SweetRampaige

30th Aug 2009 00:12 - 17 years ago
Description : My cousin(Aaron Lytle) made the beat. This is my first screamo/metal song. Anomaly helped produce this song too.

Comments (6)

If you have time take a listen and give SweetRampaige some feedback.

ManicM
ManicM 17th Jun 2012 14:50 - 14 years ago
the beat is very good and I love the breakdown parts but just for some advice (trying to be constructive here) try singing without going with the sound of the guitars and synth; it sounds weird and "childy". Not too sure if this is the genre for you but you should listen to some classic metalcore bands like Asking Alexandria, Attack Attack, Sleeping With Sirens, etc to get a better idea of how to sing on this kind of genre. Props though!
DJ_JEZZA
DJ_JEZZA 1st Sep 2009 18:47 - 17 years ago
As a master of Metal and all things goth/Screamo (im a screamo vocalist) - I cant stand this track to me it unfortunately sounds like a mash-up of saturday night live, chav induced violence, mixed with fruity loops presets.

But i do give u dibs for trying.
alividlife
alividlife 30th Aug 2009 15:37 - 17 years ago
I saw this posted ....

I love the growl .. on about 1:oo to 2:00

YOU ROCK! k?

I want you to know that before I saw this ...
err
wait-- that came out all wrong lol
That I was a little put off, but the emotional content!
This was AMAZING.

but
vocals more forward!
guitars actually guitars!

drums where awesome! but i woulda mixed two kits...

You got it tho.
This is just undeniable.

Lyrics where the best part.
JackRipper
JackRipper 30th Aug 2009 03:30 - 17 years ago
Wow! Great track.. I love it.. Has an MSI feel to it, theyre one of my favorites. This is great, I'll be looking for more, so please keep em coming.. Faved. Please get at me if you post pella's..Jack Ripper
DextDee
DextDee 30th Aug 2009 02:34 - 17 years ago
wonderful!!! i like the child-y twist to the track (no offense) and then the hardcore metal scream it has. truly, i get y AJ recommended it. it is catchy!! keep it up. the pauses were good too.
DextDee
The_Acidizer
The_Acidizer 30th Aug 2009 02:09 - 17 years ago
Interesting song you have hear. i like your courage to do a screamo song. i might just do one myself (i have already done a couple of screaming acapellas.) i just gotta write something worthy of it lol. its an nice idea you got going in this track. all it really needs is a little more polishing and it would be great

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