Description : I grow sad when thinking on
the rate at which one heals;
specifically, you would be gone
in six or seven meals.
Your fingers- lovely, never rough-
would hardly fill one up;
your precious heart holds not enough
to scantly fill a cup.
And worst of all, I hardly might
get more than one prize cut
before the blade too deeply bites
into some vital gut.
And then, my love, you would be through;
and I cut to the bone;
the lovely meal I'd made of you
I'd have to eat alone. If only death could be delayed,
my most delicious love,
you might look on as I filleted you and all cuts thereof.

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  1. Rats
    Rats on Sat 24th Apr 2010 - 9 years ago

    EXCELLENT track really creepy as hell but now I'm all hungry; if I get fat its YOUR fault

  2. lofthouse
    lofthouse on Sun 16th Aug 2009 - 10 years ago

    It's dark and mysterious and really interesting music.Reminds me of Nick Cave which can only be good.
    Yeah,in some wierd way,I like this more than I should.

  3. BigPete
    BigPete on Sun 16th Aug 2009 - 10 years ago

    you are sick, and I love your illness, great composition, great mood like E I might have push the arrangments a bit further, but thats us producers we always do, your track works well as it is and I am scared of you now, lol, reminded me of Bahaus and Peter Murphy great job.

  4. necron90nine
    necron90nine on Thu 13th Aug 2009 - 10 years ago

    Hell yeah good stuff! Lyrics add to it greatly.

  5. GotCheeve
    GotCheeve on Thu 13th Aug 2009 - 10 years ago

    lyrics, lyrics, lyrics, kudos fellow person. "take your time with me, cause I'm not good at things that everyone else seems to be." killer closer. always felt the same way. song structure excellent. lyrics building off of people. fav

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