F1rst Song - Paulevans

Name: f1rst song
Duration: 52 s
Channel: paulevans
Description: hi all this is my first song not finished yet as im stuck on a melody and not tht familiar with fruity loops yet all feedback will be great and so will ideas on melodies or stuff so i can finish my track

F1rst Song

paulevans

17th May 2009 17:37 - 17 years ago

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17th May 2009 17:37 - 17 years ago

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Dance

1.21 MB

Description : hi all this is my first song not finished yet as im stuck on a melody and not tht familiar with fruity loops yet

all feedback will be great and so will ideas on melodies or stuff so i can finish my track

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brianredman 9th Jun 2009 14:53 - 17 years ago

not the best begging but not bad needs speeding up abit and maybe diffrent donk but still thats good mate

DuBzReCoRdInGsTuDiO 24th May 2009 00:16 - 17 years ago

lol man i agree wit daluci, how can u have such a killer beat n bass wit that silly thing at the bigginin
@deluci...wot vocals man?

paulevans replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

thanks for the review good thing is the begginin is now deleted bad thing so is the rest of the song as my loops messed up so aving to start over again

Daluci 17th May 2009 19:13 - 17 years ago

1st of all delete the beginning! :-) its a nice melody to put on a babytoy not for a dance song. but after that it sounds really good nice bass good vocals keep working on it a melody will pop in your head one day and yoou will make a great track.
Just be patient sometimes it takes me a few hours to make song sometimes days sometimes weeks so dont give up.

paulevans replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

thanks for the feedback was thinking bout deleting the beggining but then imstuck on how to start my track.

and ive been thinking of a melody all day in my head but can i think of it now nolol but no i wont give up thanks for the feedback as said before this is my first track and attempt on making music so new to it all

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