Description : hi all this is my first song not finished yet as im stuck on a melody and not tht familiar with fruity loops yet
all feedback will be great and so will ideas on melodies or stuff so i can finish my track
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thanks for the review good thing is the begginin is now deleted bad thing so is the rest of the song as my loops messed up so aving to start over again
1st of all delete the beginning! :-) its a nice melody to put on a babytoy not for a dance song. but after that it sounds really good nice bass good vocals keep working on it a melody will pop in your head one day and yoou will make a great track.
Just be patient sometimes it takes me a few hours to make song sometimes days sometimes weeks so dont give up.
thanks for the feedback was thinking bout deleting the beggining but then imstuck on how to start my track.
and ive been thinking of a melody all day in my head but can i think of it now nolol but no i wont give up thanks for the feedback as said before this is my first track and attempt on making music so new to it all
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@deluci...wot vocals man?
Just be patient sometimes it takes me a few hours to make song sometimes days sometimes weeks so dont give up.
and ive been thinking of a melody all day in my head but can i think of it now nolol but no i wont give up thanks for the feedback as said before this is my first track and attempt on making music so new to it all