This... - Acrylic

19th Apr 2009 19:42 - 17 years ago
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Description : This... is my hip hop attempt... But i can rap so id apreciate it if anyone is willing to redo the lyrics,

Here are the lyrics:

The answer sits on the window sill,
you get your fill by poppin' pills makin' time to kill,
every other day you are undecided but you feel enlighted,
every time you light it, and you know you cant fight it.
I can tell you about a story 'bout a girl,
who spent her life curled up, away from the world,
One night she was on the level, trying to rebel,
stayin' away from her friends and closing in on the devil,

She put a ##### to her head, she said, "i'm dead",
and she fed the mental anguish without all the meds,
It was the last day, an hour before she croaked,
her roommate walked in and she read the note,

It coulda been much more than this, more than a fist,
clutching life and falling back through the mist,
and more and more i am learning the world keeps turning,
souls keep burning full of yearning and my stomach keeps churning.
It coulda been much more than this, more than a miss,
anthother marked off, one less on the list,
and more and more someone is falling until theyre crawling
on thier knees, head down and bawling...

Its so long, Its so long, but it's hard once it's gone.
let's just face it, and place it in position for admission,
It ain't tough no it ain't tough, no, it ain't nuclear fission.
Im just waiting for someones permission, their coalition.
I could crack a joke at the sad looking folk,
but then i would choke, i'd break like an egg yolk.
I could stand around and start portrayin'
a slain king or somthing while my nerves are Frayin'

But she'd still be not there, it's not fair,
everyone stumbles around like they don't care.
and i'd still be somthing that i can be but it's not easy,
when theyre counting one, two, three, continue...

It coulda been much more than this, more than a fist,
clutching life and falling back through the mist,
and more and more i am learning the world keeps turning,
souls keep burning full of yearning and my stomach keeps churning.
It coulda been much more than this, more than a miss,
anthother marked off, one less on the list,
and more and more someone is falling until theyre crawling
on thier knees, head down and bawling...

Comments (1)

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LongJohnsLiver
LongJohnsLiver 19th Apr 2009 20:19 - 17 years ago
I like this, especially the beat, but the lyrics are cool as well.

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