Listen To Into The Night 2 Indie Song By Cyberflares | Looperman

Well, Ill be completely honest with you. Always in a friendly way, and if you allow me, as someone with a bit more experience. This applies not only to this particular track, but to anything you create and upload online.
This morning I listened to your track on my way to work using AirPods. Since they tend to boost the high frequencies, the mix sounded very sharp in the highs. Now Im listening again in the studio, and unfortunately it still feels overly bright.
Personally, I would pay more attention to the balance between the different sounds instruments, loops, samples, and so on. In every track, there is usually one dominant element: the vocals, the drums, the guitar in simpler songs, its often one of these. Those elements need space and should sit more forward in the mix.
The bass, or the bassline itself, is the calm giant of the composition. Thats where the groove and rhythm rest, so it should sit more centrally in the sound image, spreading warmth and giving space to everything else.
Then, further back not because they are less important, but because of their role and sonic characteristics come the keyboards, pads, synths, etc.
You need to listen to the track many times and keep correcting it. Just because the high frequencies are audible doesnt mean the balance is right. After that, listen on many different systems: computer speakers, studio monitors, headphones, car speakers thats how youll understand what really needs correction and what doesnt.
What you created has good energy and is pleasant to listen to, but the sound itself still needs refinement. Try it, and I think youll understand exactly what I mean.

With appreciation,
Chris LINEAR FADE

I listened both of tracks now and this one feels richer in texture, more balanced and clearer. I really like it. Great job!

Hello Robin !! Enjoyable and lively and lovely track my friend !!!! Ok you will see it for better closure like Mark wrote ! Cheerssssssssssssssss !

So Robin, you know you are a MASTER at capturing ambiance! This has a nostalgic but fresh vibe with some classic pop rock twists and turns.The only suggestion is to give it a really edgy and epic close out. Then its a wrap. I enjoyed the listen 4 sure.

Peace,

Mark