Description : Thanks to VintageNights for helping me refine the text. I improved the track by tweaking some sounds, adding a few things, and removing others. The result turned out pretty good. I hope you'll enjoy it! Looking forward to your honest feedback or praise.
Sorry for the low-quality vocals. I recorded them using a phone, and it was challenging to reduce the background noise.
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Hey Alex very nice, like the buildup and the groove overall. I also like the static effect on the vocal though I couldn't understand what was being said. I still thought it made the track interesting, nice work.
Great track, only thing I would change is make the vocal a bit more loud/stand out in the time of the song 54-58 by sidechain, boosting the vocals db a bit in that part, or using a eq to sidechain some mid to high hzs where you can here the vocal character of the synth that plays at the same time. I know pro eq 4 can do this but don't know if the fl's eq can. it's not a big issue and it just could the bad pair of headphones i'm using to listen to this track.
That's a pretty slick track you got here. Excellent work on the mix. Everything is crystal, it all sits well by way of stereo separation and panning. I like the vox as well. In the beginning, it sounds like a vocoder and some distortion, maybe? I think the only thing I would have done differently with them is add a little reverb and or delay. But, that's just my own personal preference. What you have is just fine the way it is. I like the way the second set of vox are a little cleaner and dryer.
Yeah, this is a good track. I think my only real complaint is the abrupt ending. Even then, it's a small complaint.
Excellent work.
Take care.
V.
The intro is absolutely great, impressive sound. The whole song is very interesting with its electronic dance style. I liked it a lot. What I would possibly like more should be a slightly different ending. But anyhow, it is a very beautiful work.
My best regards, Anthony.
Hi Alex, I like your track, has a dark feeling, love the intro.
The "walking sound" starting at 00:16, is that intended as walking sound? If yes you could consider to record a real sound using your phone (using the right shoes at the right place and correct beat) I did that once before, walking on a gravel path, a 120 bpm beat on my earplugs to keep the pace for the duration I needed, the phone pointed downwards to record the sounds.
If you need assistance with the English pronunciation, try Google Translate (if the browser is allowed to play sound).
Put the English text in the left box and set it to auto-detect or English, then click the speaker icon (listen) at the bottom left of the left box, Google Translate will "speak" the text. This solution is most likely not perfect but better than nothing at all.
I need to sleep
But hate to sleep
I need to eat
But hate food
Need education
But I'm too old
I need help with this
But I am alone
I have put in the English adjustments - I hope that helps. Not easy writing in another language. A good dance track. I felt it needed a bit more vox stuff before the end. Kay
Description : Feel free to check out the video on YT as well (Alan McLaren Project - Upside Down) of this 6min journey from electronic to rock with some psychedelic moments...
This is my latest, but also one of my earliest tracks.... any feedback is more than welcome, thanks :)
Description : A demo of one of my current projects. The chorus vocal sounds like "Aaaaraashe" to me. The song is in C# minor with a nod to C# pythagorean on the chorus. The beat on the verse was inspired by the Peter Gabriel song Intruder.
Description : This is one of my earliest productions that I did at the start of my recording career. I did not have a keyboard at the time I made this song, so I improvised and used my sister's iPad and a 5 dollar GarageBand application instead, and plugged the headset jack into into my PT6 rig and did my best to turn each individual track (which were mono and there were about 25 tracks or so) into a stereo image. Then recorded vocals over it. My computer was so old and slow that I had to mix my music and then BOUNCE it to a new session - four times. My computer (which had 512 MB RAM and an 80 GB hard drive) couldn't handle more than 8 tracks at a time or it'd stop working because the processor couldn't handle it. Took me FOREVER to do. But I got it done. Had a lot of fun doing it too, even if it isn't my "best" work. I'm still happy with it, considering I didn't have many tools to choose from at the time.
Description : Long time lurker first time poster, pretty new to production n stuff, this is my first track in Ableton Live.
was going for a darkwave/synthwave sound, reminiscent of Justice, Carpenter Brut, Perturbator, ect.
Looking for some feed back, constructive criticisms or even just your thoughts if you liked it or not. This is just a rough cut on this current WIP, just the bones of it if you will.. If you have some cool title suggestions, would love to hear those too.
Thanks for listening.
-B
Description : Far out mid-tempo fat beat deep chillout grooves with Eastern/Arabic and slightly menacing vibes, huge delayed synth bass and a great palette of psychedelic layered and intricate sounds (mostly synths) and a stirring, epic feel. Even has guitar solo section reminiscent of some 80s power rock which is then followed by a brief synth harp solo. I began making it straight after staying round the flat of the flute player from the legendary Ozric Tentacles - easily the greatest ever space rock band. I made this in about 2001 and still think it might be my best track (and it's nice and short, for a change). My production skills were much weaker in those days (no EQ, compression or mastering used here) but, somehow, this one turned out pretty much just right. Feel free to disagree. Now sit back and get ready to trip extremely far out. If you manage to return, let me know how that trip was...
Description : Got some spare time finally...just started on some random ideas basically (lets say kygo meets alan walker). A blend of dubstep,edm,downbeat,tropical etc.
It's still a work in progress, so i would appreciate your honest inputs. Thanks to all those whose loops I have used in here, sorry I don't have time to search them out.
Edit-added some more filthy sounds from my previous tracks and gave it some ending. Advice will be helpful.
D
Kinda "don't believe in nothing, not even in yourself' one.
Hats off,
Danke
Ended little bit too soon, but still impressive.
Great work! :)
-J-
Yeah, this is a good track. I think my only real complaint is the abrupt ending. Even then, it's a small complaint.
Excellent work.
Take care.
V.
My best regards, Anthony.
The "walking sound" starting at 00:16, is that intended as walking sound? If yes you could consider to record a real sound using your phone (using the right shoes at the right place and correct beat) I did that once before, walking on a gravel path, a 120 bpm beat on my earplugs to keep the pace for the duration I needed, the phone pointed downwards to record the sounds.
If you need assistance with the English pronunciation, try Google Translate (if the browser is allowed to play sound).
Put the English text in the left box and set it to auto-detect or English, then click the speaker icon (listen) at the bottom left of the left box, Google Translate will "speak" the text. This solution is most likely not perfect but better than nothing at all.
But hate to sleep
I need to eat
But hate food
Need education
But I'm too old
I need help with this
But I am alone
I have put in the English adjustments - I hope that helps. Not easy writing in another language. A good dance track. I felt it needed a bit more vox stuff before the end. Kay