Silence In My Head - AlexBorvin

Amazing track.

Banging tune you have created i enjoyed my listen :)

Wow, those beats are insane. However, still see some potential concerning the vocals. All in all superb job, love the track. Congrats!

I've spent the last year crafting a blend of trap with a cinematic/electronic twist. Lately, I've started exploring the world of ambient/electronic music, and I can't wait to drop some new tracks on LM very soon!. This song will definitely inspire me. Good job!

First of all, I like the fast paced nature of his track. It gives a very almost house. House kind of feel to it with the pumping kicks.

By the way, did you have any symbolic or poetic meaning with the lyrics? The "want to sleep. Hate to sleep" Bit seems to tell the story from two different ends.

Meaning is objective and it doesn't always have to be wrong. So feel free not to answer that question lol

As for the background noise, I use all native plugins on FL studio 12, you should be able to stamp out a lot of that with the parametric EQ function.
Hope this helps, well done

-z

Very special indeed !!! I love it ! Cheersssssssssssssss !!!

Sounds sick! I like the vox. Cheers Zoot.

This is really nice and groovy. I like that electronic bass.
Good job!
Cheers!

Hello AlexBorvin, I enjoyed this quite a bit....loved that voice, think it melds in beautifully.....good bass and effects and percussions.

Nice pumping sound... enough going on to give the listener something to focus on during each listen. Love that bass sound too - clean but also diiiirty. Nice job :)

Just as an aside - you mentioned struggling with background noise, so maybe try using Clarity VX from Waves. I've found that it does a decent job of clearing things up when used properly. They usually have a sale on as well so you might be able to pick it up on the cheap, like I did.

Wow the refinements add an even edgier feel somehow - v dramatic piece, feels cinematic and the tension and build up is palpable - sick beat. Your hard work paid off, big time

Hey Alex very nice, like the buildup and the groove overall. I also like the static effect on the vocal though I couldn't understand what was being said. I still thought it made the track interesting, nice work.

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intensity is building up progressively and nicely, interesting lyrics. I like it.

Great track, only thing I would change is make the vocal a bit more loud/stand out in the time of the song 54-58 by sidechain, boosting the vocals db a bit in that part, or using a eq to sidechain some mid to high hzs where you can here the vocal character of the synth that plays at the same time. I know pro eq 4 can do this but don't know if the fl's eq can. it's not a big issue and it just could the bad pair of headphones i'm using to listen to this track.

Very cool sounded, post-apocalyptic, cold, dangerous track.
Kinda "don't believe in nothing, not even in yourself' one.
Hats off,
Danke

It's awesome. It's like nothing I've heard before. Very original

What a amazing track! The intro had Silent Hill vibes all over an I really liked it.
Ended little bit too soon, but still impressive.
Great work! :)

-J-

That's a pretty slick track you got here. Excellent work on the mix. Everything is crystal, it all sits well by way of stereo separation and panning. I like the vox as well. In the beginning, it sounds like a vocoder and some distortion, maybe? I think the only thing I would have done differently with them is add a little reverb and or delay. But, that's just my own personal preference. What you have is just fine the way it is. I like the way the second set of vox are a little cleaner and dryer.
Yeah, this is a good track. I think my only real complaint is the abrupt ending. Even then, it's a small complaint.
Excellent work.
Take care.
V.

Great build up, Alex. Loving it

The intro is absolutely great, impressive sound. The whole song is very interesting with its electronic dance style. I liked it a lot. What I would possibly like more should be a slightly different ending. But anyhow, it is a very beautiful work.
My best regards, Anthony.

Hi Alex, I like your track, has a dark feeling, love the intro.

The "walking sound" starting at 00:16, is that intended as walking sound? If yes you could consider to record a real sound using your phone (using the right shoes at the right place and correct beat) I did that once before, walking on a gravel path, a 120 bpm beat on my earplugs to keep the pace for the duration I needed, the phone pointed downwards to record the sounds.

If you need assistance with the English pronunciation, try Google Translate (if the browser is allowed to play sound).
Put the English text in the left box and set it to auto-detect or English, then click the speaker icon (listen) at the bottom left of the left box, Google Translate will "speak" the text. This solution is most likely not perfect but better than nothing at all.

I need to sleep
But hate to sleep
I need to eat
But hate food
Need education
But I'm too old
I need help with this
But I am alone

I have put in the English adjustments - I hope that helps. Not easy writing in another language. A good dance track. I felt it needed a bit more vox stuff before the end. Kay

Ilike it a lot and the lyrics work well with the track. It sounds like an army marching, and the lyrics match that. Great job!