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14th Jan 2025 21:24 - 3 months ago
Description : Thanks to VintageNights for helping me refine the text. I improved the track by tweaking some sounds, adding a few things, and removing others. The result turned out pretty good. I hope you'll enjoy it! Looking forward to your honest feedback or praise.

Sorry for the low-quality vocals. I recorded them using a phone, and it was challenging to reduce the background noise.

Comments (12)

If you have time take a listen and give AlexBorvin some feedback.

Dennel
Dennel 1st Mar 2025 10:44 - 2 months ago
Hey Alex very nice, like the buildup and the groove overall. I also like the static effect on the vocal though I couldn't understand what was being said. I still thought it made the track interesting, nice work.

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StratOli
StratOli 12th Feb 2025 18:53 - 2 months ago
intensity is building up progressively and nicely, interesting lyrics. I like it.
MW2185
MW2185 5th Feb 2025 13:26 - 2 months ago
Great track, only thing I would change is make the vocal a bit more loud/stand out in the time of the song 54-58 by sidechain, boosting the vocals db a bit in that part, or using a eq to sidechain some mid to high hzs where you can here the vocal character of the synth that plays at the same time. I know pro eq 4 can do this but don't know if the fl's eq can. it's not a big issue and it just could the bad pair of headphones i'm using to listen to this track.
Danke
Danke 4th Feb 2025 12:27 - 2 months ago
Very cool sounded, post-apocalyptic, cold, dangerous track.
Kinda "don't believe in nothing, not even in yourself' one.
Hats off,
Danke
TrippleN97
TrippleN97 4th Feb 2025 08:17 - 2 months ago
It's awesome. It's like nothing I've heard before. Very original
McYrkke
McYrkke 31st Jan 2025 06:16 - 2 months ago
What a amazing track! The intro had Silent Hill vibes all over an I really liked it.
Ended little bit too soon, but still impressive.
Great work! :)

-J-
ValveDriver
ValveDriver 30th Jan 2025 23:11 - 2 months ago
That's a pretty slick track you got here. Excellent work on the mix. Everything is crystal, it all sits well by way of stereo separation and panning. I like the vox as well. In the beginning, it sounds like a vocoder and some distortion, maybe? I think the only thing I would have done differently with them is add a little reverb and or delay. But, that's just my own personal preference. What you have is just fine the way it is. I like the way the second set of vox are a little cleaner and dryer.
Yeah, this is a good track. I think my only real complaint is the abrupt ending. Even then, it's a small complaint.
Excellent work.
Take care.
V.
RichardShekari
RichardShekari 30th Jan 2025 11:57 - 3 months ago
Great build up, Alex. Loving it
AnthonyAttard
AnthonyAttard 17th Jan 2025 08:41 - 3 months ago
The intro is absolutely great, impressive sound. The whole song is very interesting with its electronic dance style. I liked it a lot. What I would possibly like more should be a slightly different ending. But anyhow, it is a very beautiful work.
My best regards, Anthony.
TheFrenZ
TheFrenZ 15th Jan 2025 15:38 - 3 months ago
Hi Alex, I like your track, has a dark feeling, love the intro.

The "walking sound" starting at 00:16, is that intended as walking sound? If yes you could consider to record a real sound using your phone (using the right shoes at the right place and correct beat) I did that once before, walking on a gravel path, a 120 bpm beat on my earplugs to keep the pace for the duration I needed, the phone pointed downwards to record the sounds.

If you need assistance with the English pronunciation, try Google Translate (if the browser is allowed to play sound).
Put the English text in the left box and set it to auto-detect or English, then click the speaker icon (listen) at the bottom left of the left box, Google Translate will "speak" the text. This solution is most likely not perfect but better than nothing at all.
Kayos2
Kayos2 15th Jan 2025 14:12 - 3 months ago
I need to sleep
But hate to sleep
I need to eat
But hate food
Need education
But I'm too old
I need help with this
But I am alone

I have put in the English adjustments - I hope that helps. Not easy writing in another language. A good dance track. I felt it needed a bit more vox stuff before the end. Kay
AlexBorvin
AlexBorvin replied 15th Jan 2025 - 3 months ago
Bro, God bless you. Thanks for the advice. I'll work on reorganizing the text.
BaoBou
BaoBou 14th Jan 2025 22:21 - 3 months ago
Ilike it a lot and the lyrics work well with the track. It sounds like an army marching, and the lyrics match that. Great job!

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