Description : chill vibes.

made the beat and rapped on it with my buddy, please let me know what you think if u listen.
loops used: Off The X - Lil Peep Type Guitar by 03szn

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  1. koga100
    koga100 on Wed 13th Sep 2023 - 2 months ago

    Everything is great, but I agree with Dime about the sudden stop, if I was me, I would use a subtle disc stop effect or something or the sort for the sudden stop, but also add maybe hits of the same effect or similar sounds throughout the track. Doesn't have to be a disc effect, but you get what I mean. For this the sudden stop I think is a negative without something to back it up.

  2. dimestop
    dimestop on Wed 13th Sep 2023 - 2 months ago

    nice work lads, good vocals nice pace and flow great guitar and the melody and beat are on point, you put work into it, you should revisit the finish though, the mix and mastering are good i dont mind straight stops but that was to abrupt, a lazy finish thats the last thing you here it needs to be as good as the intro

  3. randalld
    randalld on Tue 12th Sep 2023 - 2 months ago

    the lyrics are cool man, you and your friend both killed it. try and stay consistent with it and you'll be srt8. If you ever want free features hit my email, I make the same stuff. Also, has a 30 day free trial on all their plugins, it will help the mixing process a lot.

  4. 2Sisters
    2Sisters on Mon 11th Sep 2023 - 2 months ago

    Very nice soulful melodic rap. I like it very much! The ending is very abrupt. I think that's too blatant for this very melodic track. Otherwise, good mixing and mastering, very balanced.
    Kind regards, Manuela

  5. ClickbaitCabaret
    ClickbaitCabaret on Mon 11th Sep 2023 - 2 months ago

    I like the guitar.

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