The pianos off beat Which makes it not as good as it could have been
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I always find it amazing how differently sounds are received individually. But of course fortunately, because it becomes colorful.
Angelusyeux777SC couldn't really do anything with the vocals; for me, their simple, sparse form fits very well into the basically very uniform, stoic track ("uniform/stoic" is just a description, not a criticism!).
The instrumental-musical representation of a coma state comes to my mind, which on its own would come across as a swan song, but then shows through the vocals that life resists giving up just like that.
I perceive the voice(s) as that of a little girl, of little girls (preschool age), who have a basic charisma that is always fascinating and impressive to me: They are full of optimism, are filled with a confidence that is not damaged by anything, look at the world with boundless confidence, have an unshakable self-conviction.
So on this track they are definitely the vital signals emitting counterweight to the swan song of life.
Overall, a nice, solid track (perhaps a bit too abbreviated in length).
As Angelusyeux777SC said ?
"The overall track/melody sounds NICE! All in All FAB! work. Kudos!"
Thank you for the feedback. I spend a lot of time by myself so not a lot of people hear what I make. That's one of the reasons why I put somethings on here. Always in hopes someone will give me a different perspective. So again, thank you for the feedback.
I have always had a soft spot for boom bap music. The beat is FRESH!!! but the vocals here were throwing me off or sounded just a tad slightly off. I would like to have just heard the track without the vox but that's just my opinion, everyone hears differently. The piano didn't sound off but I must say the vocal key nearing the end seemed to fit better and in tune. The overall track/melody sounds NICE! All in All FAB! work. Kudos!
Thank you for the feedback like I told the last person, not a lot of people hear what I make so it's always nice to hear a differnt perspective. And I do have another version without so many vocal samples and is a little different over all I guess you could say. I'll put it up so you can hear it.
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I always find it amazing how differently sounds are received individually. But of course fortunately, because it becomes colorful.
Angelusyeux777SC couldn't really do anything with the vocals; for me, their simple, sparse form fits very well into the basically very uniform, stoic track ("uniform/stoic" is just a description, not a criticism!).
The instrumental-musical representation of a coma state comes to my mind, which on its own would come across as a swan song, but then shows through the vocals that life resists giving up just like that.
I perceive the voice(s) as that of a little girl, of little girls (preschool age), who have a basic charisma that is always fascinating and impressive to me: They are full of optimism, are filled with a confidence that is not damaged by anything, look at the world with boundless confidence, have an unshakable self-conviction.
So on this track they are definitely the vital signals emitting counterweight to the swan song of life.
Overall, a nice, solid track (perhaps a bit too abbreviated in length).
As Angelusyeux777SC said ?
"The overall track/melody sounds NICE! All in All FAB! work. Kudos!"
YES !
Nice regards
Seelengold