Shawl Feat Odarka - AtticElla

Just read BOD's synopsis, and totally concur. this is a great example of filtered deep house. But also as a cool background at a trendy 5star hotel bar. The bass is the star in this track. This is the kind of song that lifts your spirits and makes u feel better after you have listened to it. great job on this one, sad I missed it when it came out!

Bass sounded good to me on this track, AtticElla. You did great job of weaving all those intricate different parts together on the track. And, you definitely know how to place a vocal in the mix properly. Very clean mix. Another excellent piece of work.

Eric

Is the mix ducking a hair when the kick hits? I feel like there is a hint of compression there. If so you are miles ahead of the game, just FYI.

I saw in your profile that you don't play any instruments. As far as I am concerned, manipulating samples and using a MIDI piano rolls are instrumentation (and this is coming from a multi-instrumentalist).
If you are making these timbre, timing, and frequency choices naturally (without any formal music education), then you have competitive advantage (just FYI).

You may want to consider binge watching some traditional music theory content (I recommend Rick Beato), particularly to spice up your chord choices and arpeggio shapes (you will love using 9ths and 7ths). A little film scoring theory (for example) could expand your sound immensely as well.

Also, check out some "French House" if you haven't already, you could steal some of their unorthodox production tricks.

It's not like anything is missing, this is just some food for thought. Excellent work, keep it up.

Bonita pista querido amigo AtticElla, muy agradable y con un sonido house de calidad. La voz entra muy bien y es muy apropiada para este estilo de música. Gran ritmo y enorme piano. Que pases una buena noche. Paz y salud

Very nice - starts as a kind of dreamy electro pop and some nice jazzy and percussive elements building up to a more classic house sound - the bass sticks out at first but it kind of leads the transition into the more dance / house sound and sounds damn fine in the mix to my ears
Nice work : )

I think the bass sounds good, the entire production sounds really good to my ear. nice job

This is immense. Can’t tell you about the bass because I was playing it on tablet speakers but it sounded fine to me. You’re clearly very good at what you do. The last one Made me wanna check out your other tracks which is a good sign. I know what u mean about posting constantly I’m the same I post like every two days cause I’m always creating. Music is too fun