Staring Into Space - DJTwix09

Please delete this, there's no way you could can take the feedback, I made this.

Bruh, you are the lowest of producers man. This is my track you legit just downloaded it and posted it for yourself. That is a HUGE no go. Please delete this bro. It's obvious i made it first due to the date lol.

This is a really good idea. The vocals fit well but I would recommend compressing them a little and turning the volume down slightly in order make them cleaner. The drop is also a good idea, I find the drums a little lacking but at the same time that is an easy fix. Finally I find that the intro is a little to simple and that the idea deserves a little more filling. Some natural sound effects such as water flowing down a stream, thunder off in the distance, even a busy street would give it more life. All in all though well done, keep on producing.

Also if you wouldn't mind could I try taking a crack at it. I also use fl studio and thought of some ideas.