Description : I am heavily looking for feedback on this track. Please provide some things you'd change in this piece?

This track has been recently updated. I changed up the drums and added a bass following some feedback.

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  1. terryjmhitsong
    terryjmhitsong on Tue 20th Oct 2020 - 3 years ago

    smokinnnnn.....enjoying the high...cheers

  2. ClickbaitCabaret
    ClickbaitCabaret on Mon 19th Oct 2020 - 3 years ago

    I never know what to advise people on their beats because I rarely know what they're trying to get it to sound like. This beat is a kinda quirky electronic beat with an old school feel to it. If that's what you were aiming for, you hit a bullseye.

    koga100
    Reply by koga100

    hmm to me it just always sounds like everyone else tracks have more depth and sound more hmm what's the word... Alive? Personality. I guess it kinda stims from the fact I make music just going off my ear. I haven't really adopted a style or really refined my editing and making skills.

  3. CINCOCENT
    CINCOCENT on Mon 19th Oct 2020 - 3 years ago

    This is so freakin cool especially intro. Love doing the same and hearing it from others. The sampling voxs. Great sound choices

    koga100
    Reply by koga100

    Thanks, sometimes I guess I accidently create something people will like.

  4. Aotzaok
    Aotzaok on Tue 12th May 2020 - 3 years ago

    Thank you i love this song

    koga100
    Reply by koga100

    A very late reply, but I made a newer version to this to show off my new talents, fill free to check it out!

  5. crucethus
    crucethus on Tue 12th May 2020 - 3 years ago

    I like the synths, Its the drums and percussion I might add too to make a little more groove to the tune. Otherwise nice work.
    Cru

    koga100
    Reply by koga100

    Hey thanks for the feedback, I just recently updated the track and did a bit more work to the beats. I wanted to use my own VST instead of picking a random so the drum work it all mine. I'm not very good with Drums just yet. So I hope the changes improved the track.

  6. Jynxz
    Jynxz on Mon 11th May 2020 - 3 years ago

    Hello koga100,
    Wow... I am literally in the process of posting a track with "spoken word" in it. Lately everyone seems to be posting "singing" so I thought spoken word for a change, and it seems you beat me to it. Bravo!
    My feedback on this track would be that it needs a "bottom". The Synth work and the Drum needs to have more bass. In fact I think a Bass guitar line playing against a Drum and your Synth would "activate" the drive this track needs to sound powerful.
    BTW... Keep in mind the last Electronic music I listened to was "Devo" and "Gary Newman" LOL...
    Great track...
    PEACE...

    koga100
    Reply by koga100

    lol no worries about listening to Devo. Anyway thanks for the feedback. It should prove to be valuable.

  7. DijamMusic
    DijamMusic on Mon 11th May 2020 - 3 years ago

    Awesome !!

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