Description : I am heavily looking for feedback on this track. Please provide some things you'd change in this piece?
This track has been recently updated. I changed up the drums and added a bass following some feedback.
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I never know what to advise people on their beats because I rarely know what they're trying to get it to sound like. This beat is a kinda quirky electronic beat with an old school feel to it. If that's what you were aiming for, you hit a bullseye.
hmm to me it just always sounds like everyone else tracks have more depth and sound more hmm what's the word... Alive? Personality. I guess it kinda stims from the fact I make music just going off my ear. I haven't really adopted a style or really refined my editing and making skills.
Hey thanks for the feedback, I just recently updated the track and did a bit more work to the beats. I wanted to use my own VST instead of picking a random so the drum work it all mine. I'm not very good with Drums just yet. So I hope the changes improved the track.
Hello koga100,
Wow... I am literally in the process of posting a track with "spoken word" in it. Lately everyone seems to be posting "singing" so I thought spoken word for a change, and it seems you beat me to it. Bravo!
My feedback on this track would be that it needs a "bottom". The Synth work and the Drum needs to have more bass. In fact I think a Bass guitar line playing against a Drum and your Synth would "activate" the drive this track needs to sound powerful.
BTW... Keep in mind the last Electronic music I listened to was "Devo" and "Gary Newman" LOL...
Great track...
PEACE...
Description : Feel free to check out the video on YT as well (Alan McLaren Project - Upside Down) of this 6min journey from electronic to rock with some psychedelic moments...
This is my latest, but also one of my earliest tracks.... any feedback is more than welcome, thanks :)
Description : 'The main point of this song is really about the frustrations of living in the overload of today's World of Tech. The consequences are impaired communication and that if you advance too far you end up diminishing what you had to start with, so you are way worse off.' Enjoy a 60s Rhythm with a modern deep Bass, a Sitar, a Piano from EvilPianist, a lost flute from UniverseHuston and some Oscillators :-)
If you like our work, please find us under kayos2 on Bandcamp
Description : A demo of one of my current projects. The chorus vocal sounds like "Aaaaraashe" to me. The song is in C# minor with a nod to C# pythagorean on the chorus. The beat on the verse was inspired by the Peter Gabriel song Intruder.
Description : This is one of my earliest productions that I did at the start of my recording career. I did not have a keyboard at the time I made this song, so I improvised and used my sister's iPad and a 5 dollar GarageBand application instead, and plugged the headset jack into into my PT6 rig and did my best to turn each individual track (which were mono and there were about 25 tracks or so) into a stereo image. Then recorded vocals over it. My computer was so old and slow that I had to mix my music and then BOUNCE it to a new session - four times. My computer (which had 512 MB RAM and an 80 GB hard drive) couldn't handle more than 8 tracks at a time or it'd stop working because the processor couldn't handle it. Took me FOREVER to do. But I got it done. Had a lot of fun doing it too, even if it isn't my "best" work. I'm still happy with it, considering I didn't have many tools to choose from at the time.
Description : Long time lurker first time poster, pretty new to production n stuff, this is my first track in Ableton Live.
was going for a darkwave/synthwave sound, reminiscent of Justice, Carpenter Brut, Perturbator, ect.
Looking for some feed back, constructive criticisms or even just your thoughts if you liked it or not. This is just a rough cut on this current WIP, just the bones of it if you will.. If you have some cool title suggestions, would love to hear those too.
Thanks for listening.
-B
Cru
Wow... I am literally in the process of posting a track with "spoken word" in it. Lately everyone seems to be posting "singing" so I thought spoken word for a change, and it seems you beat me to it. Bravo!
My feedback on this track would be that it needs a "bottom". The Synth work and the Drum needs to have more bass. In fact I think a Bass guitar line playing against a Drum and your Synth would "activate" the drive this track needs to sound powerful.
BTW... Keep in mind the last Electronic music I listened to was "Devo" and "Gary Newman" LOL...
Great track...
PEACE...