Description : a song i made in 2 hours. i know the hi hats are too loud but my laptop broke so i cant mix it properly

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  1. 30Seconds
    30Seconds on Tue 29th Sep 2020 - 3 weeks ago

    Really good piece. Lots of feeling in the music and lyrics.

  2. Luckyy3rd
    Luckyy3rd on Mon 1st Jun 2020 - 4 months ago

    this is smooth

  3. VirginiaSlimm
    VirginiaSlimm on Sat 18th Apr 2020 - 6 months ago

    These lyrics are daf!
    :D

  4. Jkingz
    Jkingz on Fri 17th Apr 2020 - 6 months ago

    great smooth sound to this one. nice chilled out laid back flow. great work !

  5. ClickbaitCabaret
    ClickbaitCabaret on Thu 16th Apr 2020 - 6 months ago

    Stunningly beautiful R&B track packed with emotion. Great Job.

  6. JoeFunktastic
    JoeFunktastic on Wed 15th Apr 2020 - 6 months ago

    Bonez! Man, this one most certainly took a lot of effort. Handclap for an awesome job. The vocals are top quality, the production you aced, the mix is awesome, overall two thumbs up. Just an amazing song and effort bro! Well done! Joe.

  7. SliMusic
    SliMusic on Mon 13th Apr 2020 - 6 months ago

    This one is really great. I personally hat a problem with the hats at the beginning, but that one is probably just my ears. Keep it up!

  8. HenryPascal
    HenryPascal on Mon 13th Apr 2020 - 6 months ago

    Its a two hours job, with the limits that working time entails. By the way, music is very souly, but i found the vocal coaching a tad singsongey and boring, maybe you have to "get more souly" coaching. No bad things, I just try to give you honest feedback.

  9. Eighteen
    Eighteen on Sun 12th Apr 2020 - 6 months ago

    The background music is hypnotizing man,
    And your voice is also very much to my liking

    +favved

    Cheers man!

    ~Eighteen

    BONEZONMARZ
    Reply by BONEZONMARZ

    thank you so much!

  10. sunnyunderhill
    sunnyunderhill on Fri 10th Apr 2020 - 6 months ago

    its beautiful

  11. ShawnDonJovi
    ShawnDonJovi on Fri 10th Apr 2020 - 6 months ago

    bro im on this!!!!!!!!

    BONEZONMARZ
    Reply by BONEZONMARZ

    thanks for getting to me man, ill update the song i just need everything to be mixed first

  12. swansea
    swansea on Thu 9th Apr 2020 - 6 months ago

    Very chill vibe, love those vocals

    BONEZONMARZ
    Reply by BONEZONMARZ

    thanks very much! i hate my vocals sometimes but this tells me i must be doing something right... cheers

  13. Format
    Format on Thu 9th Apr 2020 - 6 months ago

    Nice writing and delivery bro, true talent.

    BONEZONMARZ
    Reply by BONEZONMARZ

    thank you, from the bottom of my heart

  14. ProdByFetti
    ProdByFetti on Tue 31st Mar 2020 - 6 months ago

    LOVING this beat, that shits wavy asf

    BONEZONMARZ
    Reply by BONEZONMARZ

    im glad you like it!

  15. danke
    danke on Mon 30th Mar 2020 - 6 months ago

    sent a message and that sax part with DVS

    hope you like it

    handshake, Danke

    BONEZONMARZ
    Reply by BONEZONMARZ

    just updated it, thanks a lot!

  16. ProdEASTCOAST
    ProdEASTCOAST on Mon 30th Mar 2020 - 6 months ago

    Oh yeah the track is on point now (insert emoji with shades)

    BONEZONMARZ
    Reply by BONEZONMARZ

    nice!

  17. ProdEASTCOAST
    ProdEASTCOAST on Sun 29th Mar 2020 - 6 months ago

    Honestly a really awesome RnB song.
    I really dig the vibe.
    As a rap/trap producer, I honestly think that the gain on this track could be louder (louder mixing) and the drums could be a little louder (as a drummer). Honestly, music producing is about making your track your way, so mix it the way you want.
    But overall, I really dig this. I would listen to this in my spare time.

    BONEZONMARZ
    Reply by BONEZONMARZ

    Thank you! i fixed the drums i think but ill let the mastering take care of the loudness issue. lemme know what you think

  18. danke
    danke on Sun 29th Mar 2020 - 6 months ago

    Yeah, agreed with sweet...this is a full one, maybe from 0.54 - 1.07 could get a creative, short, essential (so it's hard) sax solo...from my view...

    DVSSax is a freebie vst and it's so live tuned...

    handshake, Danke

    BONEZONMARZ
    Reply by BONEZONMARZ

    couldnt find a mac version of the vst... i added a sax but its not very real sounding.. let me know what you think

  19. Angelusyeux777SC
    Angelusyeux777SC on Sun 29th Mar 2020 - 6 months ago

    This is really NICEEE! i love the arrangement, every thing seems to fit so perfectly on the track. GREAT! Work here indeed, I enjoyed listening to this. Sweet! Track...Keep up the awesome work.

    BONEZONMARZ
    Reply by BONEZONMARZ

    Thank you so much for your kind words!

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