Smokescreens - VicaMOOR

fantastic piece of Tarantino felt soundtrack music...brilliant vintage mix as a listener...this is the music where technicality doesn't count too much...feeling...:-)

hats off, Danke

I like how the claps fade into distortion. Your vocal control and poetic prowess cant be denied. I appreciate rugged nature of the beat too. I feel like the vocal mix could be better. I know it matches the theme of the song. As someone who spends hours and hours in front of a computer mixing vocals, I have to say that control is the main factor for good vocals. I would recommend getting a very clean and well balanced vocal first, then adding distortion, filters or whatever you want to create the desire effect. Controlled chaos instead of perceived oversight. That's just my technical advice. Overall as a music listener I enjoyed the track, nice work.

I very much enjoy the vocals but the beat makes it sound more like slam poetry. The mix could use a little love as well.

Otherwise, good work!

Very interesting. Kind of reminds me of Saul Williams. I like hearing this kind of thing on LM once in a while. It's a pleasant shock. Great job.

This can be better if you make it a hip-hop beat overall your vocals are on point but the sound itself need a bit of mixing and mastering.

nice.