Description : The latest song I'm working on. I guess you'd call it a pop-rock ballad?
I just felt like creating something in the Verse/chorus/verse/chorus/instrumental/chorus formula.
Still needs a lot of work. I kinda went crazy for the finale. I hope you enjoy it. I'm open to changes. Feedback would be most helpful :)

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  1. DjLeeMFW
    DjLeeMFW on Fri 25th Jan 2019 - 9 months ago

    ita ight, but the melody was a alittle funny, maybe you wanted it that way. it was ight. good job

  2. BLEEP
    BLEEP on Tue 22nd Jan 2019 - 9 months ago

    * and thanks a lot for publishing the lyrics it's really appreciate!

    toastedavalanche
    Reply by toastedavalanche

    Hey Bleep.

    Thanks for your kind words. I have been working on a second album and this will almost definitely be on it. I'll take your thoughts in to consideration as it does not have a title yet. And I think that is a good choice.
    And I like to add the lyrics because I can;t stand it when you buy an album andthey are not included. No matter how well a song is mixed it's easy to miss certain phrases.

    TA

  3. BLEEP
    BLEEP on Tue 22nd Jan 2019 - 9 months ago

    Hello TA!

    Sometimes no need to make long descriptions to say the same thing in a few words, namely that we like!!!! Thus here is in a few words my message: publish an album, this title above, and I shall be the first one to buy it!

    Sincerely
    Bleep

  4. clickbaitcabaret
    clickbaitcabaret on Tue 22nd Jan 2019 - 9 months ago

    This track has great atmosphere & sounds quite professional. It reminds me of the Pop act, Eskimo Joe. They do a similar type of piano, synth oriented balled.

    toastedavalanche
    Reply by toastedavalanche

    Hey clickbait

    Thanks for your feedback. I have heard of Eskimo Joe but have not listened to them yet. I'll definitely check them out soon.

    TA

  5. danke
    danke on Mon 21st Jan 2019 - 9 months ago

    this is an outstanding song...I'm not sure I've heard a stunning chorus like this here...waving song...thought provoking one...get calm in life (harder in the childhood, later wiser)

    thanx for this beauty, handshake, Danke

    fav of course

    toastedavalanche
    Reply by toastedavalanche

    Hey Danke.

    I'm really glad that you like the chorus. I often struggle to write one and usually avoid them all together. But I wanted to challenge myself this time. Thank you.

    TA

  6. tekreck
    tekreck on Mon 21st Jan 2019 - 9 months ago

    Thanks reminds me of the crab in Moana

    toastedavalanche
    Reply by toastedavalanche

    Hey Tekrek,

    I'm not sure I can see it myself. But he's the best character in the film. So I guess that's good?

    TA

  7. couteaub
    couteaub on Mon 21st Jan 2019 - 9 months ago

    your voice makes me go far, I love

    toastedavalanche
    Reply by toastedavalanche

    Thank you Couteaub. That's a really nice compliment. And thanks for listening.

    TA

  8. TheFemiFactor
    TheFemiFactor on Mon 21st Jan 2019 - 9 months ago

    I really liked the reverb effect on the vocals and I think you also used it on some of the instrumens? Also, I have a thing for pianos so I definitely liked the keys on this too.

    toastedavalanche
    Reply by toastedavalanche

    Hey Femifactor,
    Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I appereciate it.
    As for the vocal effect, it's a fun trick: Flip your vox track so it plays backwards and add reverb. Sample the vox on another track, then flip the new recording back. Now the reverb comes before the vocals instead of after and you get a ghost effect :)
    I didn't use this on the instuments, just played some of them backwards, cut them into sections and rearranged (just a stylistic thing I often do). Hope this gives you some ideas to play around with.

    TA

  9. damonb
    damonb on Sun 20th Jan 2019 - 9 months ago

    im sure there are a lot of things that need polishing here but with that being said you got me beat in the pop genre so im not the one that needs too point them out good stuff

    toastedavalanche
    Reply by toastedavalanche

    Hey Damonb,

    Thanks for your kind words. I honestly don't know much about pop music. Just know the basic formula. I'm pretty sure my definition would be out of date as I never listen to the radio or streaming charts.

    TA

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The sun burned out
In a gasp of fire
And our sea of doubts
Drowned all desire
Though our passion is gone
We can right this wrong.

'cause love means nothing if it's easily found
So I'll keep you here 'til my heart breaks down
And though I lose sleep
when the pain runs deep
How I love the subtle hurt that you gave me.

As the light goes out
And the silence falls
You can't hear me shout
From behind these walls
Though our passion is gone
We can right this wrong.

 


 

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