Subtle Hurt - Rough Mix - Toastedavalanche

20th Jan 2019 21:17 - 7 years ago
Description : The latest song I'm working on. I guess you'd call it a pop-rock ballad?
I just felt like creating something in the Verse/chorus/verse/chorus/instrumental/chorus formula.
Still needs a lot of work. I kinda went crazy for the finale. I hope you enjoy it. I'm open to changes. Feedback would be most helpful :)

Comments (8)

If you have time take a listen and give toastedavalanche some feedback.

DjLeeMFW
DjLeeMFW 25th Jan 2019 11:21 - 7 years ago
ita ight, but the melody was a alittle funny, maybe you wanted it that way. it was ight. good job
DubSmockers
DubSmockers 22nd Jan 2019 21:44 - 7 years ago
* and thanks a lot for publishing the lyrics it's really appreciate!
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche replied 24th Jan 2019 - 7 years ago
Hey Bleep.

Thanks for your kind words. I have been working on a second album and this will almost definitely be on it. I'll take your thoughts in to consideration as it does not have a title yet. And I think that is a good choice.
And I like to add the lyrics because I can;t stand it when you buy an album andthey are not included. No matter how well a song is mixed it's easy to miss certain phrases.

TA
DubSmockers
DubSmockers 22nd Jan 2019 21:42 - 7 years ago
Hello TA!

Sometimes no need to make long descriptions to say the same thing in a few words, namely that we like!!!! Thus here is in a few words my message: publish an album, this title above, and I shall be the first one to buy it!

Sincerely
Bleep
ClickbaitCabaret
ClickbaitCabaret 22nd Jan 2019 15:37 - 7 years ago
This track has great atmosphere & sounds quite professional. It reminds me of the Pop act, Eskimo Joe. They do a similar type of piano, synth oriented balled.
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche replied 24th Jan 2019 - 7 years ago
Hey clickbait

Thanks for your feedback. I have heard of Eskimo Joe but have not listened to them yet. I'll definitely check them out soon.

TA
Danke
Danke 21st Jan 2019 19:57 - 7 years ago
this is an outstanding song...I'm not sure I've heard a stunning chorus like this here...waving song...thought provoking one...get calm in life (harder in the childhood, later wiser)

thanx for this beauty, handshake, Danke

fav of course
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche replied 24th Jan 2019 - 7 years ago
Hey Danke.

I'm really glad that you like the chorus. I often struggle to write one and usually avoid them all together. But I wanted to challenge myself this time. Thank you.

TA
tekreck
tekreck 21st Jan 2019 12:02 - 7 years ago
Thanks reminds me of the crab in Moana
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche replied 21st Jan 2019 - 7 years ago
Hey Tekrek,

I'm not sure I can see it myself. But he's the best character in the film. So I guess that's good?

TA
couteaub
couteaub 21st Jan 2019 10:42 - 7 years ago
your voice makes me go far, I love
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche replied 21st Jan 2019 - 7 years ago
Thank you Couteaub. That's a really nice compliment. And thanks for listening.

TA
TheFemiFactor
TheFemiFactor 21st Jan 2019 01:03 - 7 years ago
I really liked the reverb effect on the vocals and I think you also used it on some of the instrumens? Also, I have a thing for pianos so I definitely liked the keys on this too.
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche replied 21st Jan 2019 - 7 years ago
Hey Femifactor,
Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I appereciate it.
As for the vocal effect, it's a fun trick: Flip your vox track so it plays backwards and add reverb. Sample the vox on another track, then flip the new recording back. Now the reverb comes before the vocals instead of after and you get a ghost effect :)
I didn't use this on the instuments, just played some of them backwards, cut them into sections and rearranged (just a stylistic thing I often do). Hope this gives you some ideas to play around with.

TA

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