Listen To In Mah House Electronic Song By KooLKYLE At Looperman.com

So, Kyle. I liked this track a lot. I understand that Verdiqo may have found it repetitive. I agree with that, but I was "hearing" it (with some re-mixing) as a backing track for vocals. With vocals the repetition issue would be solved because the variation comes from the vocal performance and lyrics. The track has choppy rhythm, so the vocals would be legato to provide contrast.

Another option instead of adding a vocal melody line would be to cut back on the number of bars that a particular sequence (loop) plays. Instead of 8 bars, try 4. Problem with that idea is that I could be totally out to lunch. I aspire to make good EDM, but I'm more attuned to pop and R&B stuff. For dance music I know that extended sections which introduce subtle changes in the track are really effective. So, what might seem repetitive to a listener would work really well for dancers. At least, that's what I've been told.

Anyway, that's my two cents worth. I like all kinds of music, but I do know that on Looperman, if I listen to a track and a vocal line springs into my head, it's a track worth pursuing. Nice work!

Prety monotone and kinda repeative. So yeah i miss some diversity in this track. Besides missing some ingredients. It still sounded decent enough though (quality wise). So yeah it was ok but it could have been better though. Anyway keep on listening & creating.