Screw You - Slone1

21st Jul 2017 04:45 - 9 years ago
Description : idk what to say
check me out in sound cloud: https://soundcloud.com/slone-one

Comments (6)

If you have time take a listen and give slone1 some feedback.

wikkid
wikkid 4th Aug 2017 17:35 - 9 years ago
Hi Slone1,

I want to encourage you to keep on keeping on. Your profile lists you as 14, so you've got the time to learn.

I'd rather be helpful rather than trying to tear you down, because you're
new to this and at least you're trying. I also like the way you responded
to Modnex's suggestions. That attitude will serve you well as you continue to learn about creating music and rapping.

You tube videos can assist you with recording, just search under "mixing"
or "mastering" and even "microphones". Not sure what DAW you're using to record with, but one that's free if you're using a PC is Audacity. If you're on a MAC then Garageband will work.

Also, asking questions about recording in the forum section of Looperman will help you on your quest. With all sincerity, I wish you the best.
slone1
slone1 replied 6th Aug 2017 - 9 years ago
I really enjoy this comment thanks a ton. I will do that right now.
benjizo
benjizo 2nd Aug 2017 19:29 - 9 years ago
You just screwed me dawg..lol
Modnex
Modnex 21st Jul 2017 23:32 - 9 years ago
Hello Slone,

I've noticed a few issues while listening to your track and thought I should point them out and try my best to help you fix them. The vocals on this track sounds too loud in my opinion and it makes it very difficult to hear what you're saying due to the amount of distortion the loudness is creating. One way you can fix that issue is by either turning down the vocals, making sure the levels are somewhat in the same range as the instrumental or you can even try to adjust the levels of the master channel.

I'm not entirely sure if the vocals are that way due to your work in your DAW or if it's from the way you recorded it. If the recording itself happens to be the issue, I would suggest you try to record it over. Make sure you have space between the microphone and yourself, that can help a lot when it comes to distortion. Once you do those things, I think you will see a big improvement. Keep striving for improvement and you'll get there one step at a time.

-Modnex
slone1
slone1 replied 21st Jul 2017 - 9 years ago
Thanks for the feedback. I never thought of turning down the master track. I will use this in future tacks and songs
silverman
silverman 21st Jul 2017 23:23 - 9 years ago
Wow wow worst thing I ever heard on here!
payatention
payatention 21st Jul 2017 19:28 - 9 years ago
wow wow
payatention
payatention 21st Jul 2017 18:38 - 9 years ago
wow wow

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