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21st May 2017 22:55 - 7 years ago
Description : I'm close to moving up, whereas me and most of my friends would be parting ways. It's been quite a memorable journey with them, so I made this to remember our moments.
Emotions aside, this is an electronic track and if there's any problems with the track, you're gladly welcome to comment it! Cheers, and enjoy!

EDIT: Added velocities on the snares and some fixes

Comments (10)

If you have time take a listen and give bitronix some feedback.

crucethus
crucethus 8th Jun 2017 00:27 - 7 years ago
Like an advanced chiptune track with nice sidechains. pleasant listen and journey you have created.
Cru
bitronix
bitronix replied 8th Jun 2017 - 7 years ago
It's because of that electric guitar xD
I don't even know how to make the electric guitar be more realistic without having it to be "mono-ish" sound

Anyways, thanks!
grrr
grrr 7th Jun 2017 07:40 - 7 years ago
Hi,
Nice track. Thought it could do with a little bit more 'interest'in the intro. The wind effects were nice.....but not enough. IMO :))
Nice build, really good melodies. Enjoyed listening to this....thx:
bitronix
bitronix replied 7th Jun 2017 - 7 years ago
I'm gonna think about what I'll add on the intro

Thanks!
ReonN
ReonN 7th Jun 2017 05:40 - 7 years ago
reminiscing the past I see... (did I spell it correctly? hahaha) Anyways, Its a nice track and the structure.... Its kind of ok?? but the end really sums up the whole track so... Its still great! Keep it up!

-ReonN
bitronix
bitronix replied 7th Jun 2017 - 7 years ago
kthnx
BeatzFactory
BeatzFactory 2nd Jun 2017 01:58 - 7 years ago
I really enjoy this oh so much man ¡¡ nice tune ... sounds great to me ¡¡

Congrats
bitronix
bitronix replied 2nd Jun 2017 - 7 years ago
thanks!
CitizenMofo
CitizenMofo 1st Jun 2017 23:58 - 7 years ago
I like this but like the 2nd half much better. For me, that's when the tune really comes alive and engages my ears and mind. Something to think about, for what it's worth, is more of a verse/chorus/verse/chorus structure, where you get some of that 2nd half goodness early on and then return to it later. That's kind of the hook of the song so that way you'd hook people faster. Anyway, I really like the 2nd half a lot.
bitronix
bitronix replied 2nd Jun 2017 - 7 years ago
I get what you mean, its like cutting the drop part up into two parts, the first part into the first drop/chorus and the second part (the one where the electronic guitar thing-y starts) will be on the second drop/chorus.

I could do that, if I can find someone to sing the song for me with them also having to write the lyrics for me too lol

anyways, thank you very much!
topclass
topclass 31st May 2017 14:15 - 7 years ago
fairly good, i like that piano it's nice and so is the ending, maybe you can check some of my electronic tracks too :)
bitronix
bitronix replied 1st Jun 2017 - 7 years ago
hey thanks! i will ^_^
Nodog
Nodog 30th May 2017 15:20 - 7 years ago
i really like this and its a bit different to the usual tracks here on lopperman which has me thinking i need to to concentrate more on my melody lines. (which Metabolic has already commented on.) I like the way the melody develops into a swell really well done i also like the ending which is sweet and poignant. thanks and best regards Robbie.
bitronix
bitronix replied 30th May 2017 - 7 years ago
Thanks! I did not think that it was THAT different from other tracks lol, but maybe some since tracks on looperman often offers tracks that are uses live instruments and thats freaking awesome

Cheers!
Tinka0
Tinka0 24th May 2017 13:57 - 7 years ago
Play with the velocities (and maybe pitch too) of the first snares, I think it'll bring some extra life to that first section.

If I was in a lighter mood I would enjoy this more, I'll come back when I am.

My mind is imagining a sidechained sub (quiet to loud kinda effect) kind of similar to what you have but a littler more slippery if that makes sense.

I'm enjoying the progression of the melodies, rare in electronic music.

I'll be keeping my eye out for more of your tracks.

Keep it up dude
bitronix
bitronix replied 25th May 2017 - 7 years ago
That velocity controlled snares is a very neat idea! Thanks man!

And that sidechained sub, is it the pads or the bass on the super saw part on the drop? I'll just check it out

Cheers!
Billydragon1
Billydragon1 24th May 2017 09:46 - 7 years ago
I enjoyed this tune that started with some emotions and deep thoughts, before it filled up with memories of the journey you took, then the parting of ways at the end, the emotions coming back. Great work buddy.
bitronix
bitronix replied 24th May 2017 - 7 years ago
Hey man, thanks for that meaningful comment! I feel great to see that was able to portray what I felt in this simple track
silverman
silverman 22nd May 2017 09:04 - 7 years ago
Did not like the opening but then this magical tune appeared and I was able to leave the opening behind.
But then I get to the ending and suddenly the opening was perfect.
Great tune very well put together.
bitronix
bitronix replied 24th May 2017 - 7 years ago
just added some wind effects on the intro to fill in some spaces! thanks!

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