Tags : | RnB | 8.72 MB

Description : Don't know that to add here

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  1. dachopdocta
    dachopdocta on Tue 18th Apr 2017 - 3 years ago

    Hey, what's up again. This is a cool and mellow track. You should bring the vocals during the verses, they where kinda low. The chorus part was good though. The structure of the song especially the piano part is great.

    One thing I do is work on a song, don't listen to it for a day or two, then go back to it. You'll start to hear things differently. Catching all the little things that needs to be fixed.

    You should definitely take your time and finish this song. It's really dope. Plus the ladies will love it! :P

    Yo thanks for taking your time to listen and comment on my song.

    Peace man!

    kittytrillah
    Reply by kittytrillah

    Very useful advices, thank you. And yep, I did as you said, now I really hear it better. So, we are working on the fixed version or kinda mix, sound will be increased to a new level I hope.

  2. GregVincey
    GregVincey on Sat 15th Apr 2017 - 3 years ago

    I like the vibe of this track, but Damm! That huge spike at 2:55, Not sure if that was clipping or some effect or my speakers are just tripping

    kittytrillah
    Reply by kittytrillah

    Humm, thanks for notice
    I was afraid of potentially clipping in other moment of track but in this one I don't hear this. Anyway, thank you for notice, I will check it in other acoustics

  3. 6016
    6016 on Sat 15th Apr 2017 - 3 years ago

    Hi, Buffet6,
    Love the vibe of this track, like the keyboard melody and vocals etc. Almost 90's RnB. Just my opinion I think it needs a deep fingerstyle Guitar bass drop covering the verse and choruses. I know there's a keyboard bass within the chords but I think a the bass would lift the track even more.
    Great work dude!
    For some inspiration check out the below link:
    https://www.discogs.com/Opaz-I-Dont-Want-It/release/41291?ev=rr

    kittytrillah
    Reply by kittytrillah

    Thank you for so constructive comment, really apreciate it. Yep, I will experiment more with the sound, 'cos in fact this is my first try to make something like this one

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