Listen To Odd Man Out With Vocals Rap Song By Wordybum | Looperman

3rd Mar 2017 11:24 - 9 years ago
Description : this is an odd track. i wanted to write something with a little more substance, so tackled a fun topic. the story is about an entity who is slated to become the next God. he is young and cocky, full of himself and not fully prepared for the past at hand. and the story unfolds...

Comments (6)

If you have time take a listen and give wordybum some feedback.

Judah76
Judah76 9th Mar 2017 06:06 - 9 years ago
Pros:
1. the music composition is bada$$
2. the lyrics are mediocre but...
3. your hard-hitting flow redeems them for replay action
4. great job in making the melody stand above the bassline (it's getting a bit stale hearing other people's track after track of 80% kick & sub-bass)

Cons:
1. one minute lead-in to the vocals had me questioning: "does he mean this is an instrumental about blah-blah"
2. vocals were under the music and not on top

Over-all its superior to most the crap on Soundcloud.
wordybum
wordybum replied 10th Mar 2017 - 9 years ago
thanksso much for the feedback. i am remixing the vocals this weekend, adding a little reverb and volume, as well as some ambient spoken word that will float in the far background of the intro.

as far as the lyrics being mediocre, i beg to differ, but it's your opinion and i have to respect it. did you read them on the lyrics tab?

either way, thanks so much for the feedback and feel free to check out my other projects on this site.

Bless.
dani9991
dani9991 4th Mar 2017 14:41 - 9 years ago
I do have a beat you may like. Check out "Lowrider" on my profile.
dani9991
dani9991 3rd Mar 2017 22:45 - 9 years ago
Great song. I like your lyrical style and the way you tackle profound or ambiguous subjects with such ease. Now, I may be wrong, but I think the vocals aren`t "wide" enough. Everything in the instrumental feels just as it should, but I think adding a bit of reverb to make the vocals a bit wider in the stereo field would glue everything together nicely.
wordybum
wordybum replied 3rd Mar 2017 - 9 years ago
that's a great call. I'm going to add some this weekend.

How have you been, brother? any beats laying around you want me to tackle?
onlyhits
onlyhits 3rd Mar 2017 16:22 - 9 years ago
Nevermind, listening again, the vocals are fine in the mix.
wordybum
wordybum replied 3rd Mar 2017 - 9 years ago
thanks for the feedback. i am going to shorten the intro, and i actually agree with your 1st statement. the vocals do need to come up a bit, and in my opinion need a little de-essing or warmth. thanks again for the listen and the feedback, brother!
onlyhits
onlyhits 3rd Mar 2017 16:20 - 9 years ago
Nice track, I like the vibe. Very unique beat, in a good way! Vocals could be a little louder maybe, but there's not really any mixing problems that I could find other than at 2:24 when the beat comes back in the first hit is really loud. I also would have started the vocals a little sooner. Good rap though!
wordybum
wordybum replied 3rd Mar 2017 - 9 years ago
I'd like to also add that the Lyrics are in the lyric section of this, for anyone who wants to read them.
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 3rd Mar 2017 15:53 - 9 years ago
I listened through before beginning my comment, and Your words and delivery got me high by the end. This is, as far as rap goes, about as good as it gets! Definitely the kind of rap I chose to listen to, and purchase. Extremely effective and potent. Fine schtuff! Thank you for the DL! Fave!
wordybum
wordybum replied 3rd Mar 2017 - 9 years ago
thanks dude! I knew that when i was done with and ready to UL to Looperman that you would be one of the people to 'get it' and enjoy it for the diversity.

i have a few more that i will be adding this weekend and the coming days with a similar feel. i lookforward to getting your feedback!

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