Description : I have posted this song for the valentines competition but any constructive criticism is welcomed.
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Comments (14)
If you have time take a listen and give Mario some feedback.
Sorry for taking too long to reply but im actually really glad to hear from you!! You are more than welcome to work on the song!! Im really excited to hear what you can do with this track, I've heard your work and its amazing!!! Next Adele not kidding, just need to meet the right people.
Not enough happening in the track to hold my interest. To me, needs more development, more movement, theme and variations, contrasts, something. I appreciate the cleanness of the sounds that are here, but I want more to keep my mind and ears engaged. Thank you.
I completely understand where you getting at because i think the same way, but in this project I kind of wanted to let the vocals take over and drive the song( which would require a very good and experienced vocalist). After the vocals will I then revise the song and fill in those missing parts.
It's cute, but I agree with ladyinred, it doesn't give me a "Valentine-y" mood. Maybe you could add vocals or just make it little more smooth, but it sounds good!
Well yeah that was kind of the main purpose of the song but I discovered the Valentine's Day contest and I chose that one xD
Thanks for the feedback though
Thanks, the drums were the most important part here because they set the pace.
And yeah it was the last day for contest entry and thats all i had to offer xD
But yeah my artist is already writing the lyrics to this if not ill try to pitch it to drake (I wish).
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Thanks for the feedback though
and I like the sound of "surrealistic in love feeling" which was something I was going for as it was a valentines day contest song.
Thank You,
Valdez
to be honest , I didn't feel valentine in this instrumental
song , but it sounds good .
may be you can add a vocal to this instrumental song .
And yeah it was the last day for contest entry and thats all i had to offer xD
But yeah my artist is already writing the lyrics to this if not ill try to pitch it to drake (I wish).