I like the flangey guitars in the intro. sound clip is mixed in well.
This bad boy is compressed to the max! Guitars come in and seem a bit muddy and bassy. Seems like there is a lot of lows and some low-mids that need to be cut for more clarity. Put a mid-scoop on the master and see if you like what it does to the clarity.
Vocals move the song along, though pretty pitchy. I like the writing of everything, so far!
1:12- The crashing cymbal on the left ends abruptly and sounds unnatural. Cant that be extended or delay added to it to help it taper better?
1:14- A lot of static popping sounds. Pretty sure this is the sound of clipping. Something is maxed out here, and I think the compressor is the culprit.
2:42- This is awesome. Would love to hear more of that in the track. Very nice tone and it works well with the different elements.
3:42- Going pretty Megadeth there. Nice contrast.
A lot of this is pretty damn impressive! Only issues are mix and some of the vocal notes, which really is just me being picky. I like getting constructive feedback, so I figure others do, as well.
Thank you! This is exactly the kind of feedback I want!! I'm gonna work on the song later! Please do more songs if u have the time! We are gonna record some of these songs in a real studio after the summer so any help will be appreciated!
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I like the flangey guitars in the intro. sound clip is mixed in well.
This bad boy is compressed to the max! Guitars come in and seem a bit muddy and bassy. Seems like there is a lot of lows and some low-mids that need to be cut for more clarity. Put a mid-scoop on the master and see if you like what it does to the clarity.
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