Cinematic Track 1 - Abilify

thank you for share.

it sounds very cool!

epic sound

thx share

Great track!! Great Work!

woow..this is so great

great !!!

Great work! Love it like it is! Very smooth and great tones!

Glad to see you up and about again, man. Would most definitely want to hear the finished product of this. Quite the excellent start you've got going.

Cool work!

absolutely nailed it once again. NICE!!!!

Krásná hudba

Really nice track, thank you very much

Good work! Sounds heroic and kind of epic.

I like the build-up, and when it peaks, it's not overbearing. Good job.

I am really digging this vibe right now. I love me some Epic Emo #####. Honestly i would kick a verse to this anytime, cause with the right subject matter and perhaps a bit of a beat after the break this has Banger written all over it.

Some work on the mix would be my biggest critique, as the brilliance of the various orchestral parts seems to be lost or atleast overshadowed by the "GLue" of this mix. Did u use an SSL COmp on this one? or the ableton aprox. of an SSl? if so lighten up on that ##### and watch those violins shine. Other then that id say you got 1/2 of a dope cinematic piece here. its definitely building towards something cool so think crescendo soon. Strong work

Elegant * - *

hhh Im very impressed

Very good work dramatic 100% .. dont need many changes...

Hi Timmy! This is epic! If you try a different synth on the part after 1:18 and make it sound more happier or brighter it would help the piece. Professional work my friend, won't be surprised to hear it play on an upcoming movie trailer. Keep up the GREAT work! :-D

This track is kinda neat. Keep up the good work bor-stevens

It's so dramatic, and really emotional.
I don't actually make these type of songs so I can't make feedbacks like the people before me.
All I have to say is to work a bit on the paino in the introduction.
Cheers!

Piano has improved a lot. I think for what you've got, you've done a superb job. Maybe work on the overcompression in the latter half, it pulls away some of the beauty and power of the mix because it goes from sound awesome to "oh gosh, thats really compressed" feeling for me. Keep it up, hope to see this one coming to completion!

Brado

jesus timmy what're you doing. This is beast. If you wanted to do a dubstep remix.....:P

This is really nice... you are very talented.

Well this is just awesome. I guess you made whatever changes were suggested earlier because what you have sounds really good to me so far! Super intense and epic. Can't wait til it's finished.

Need help with what? This is a masterpiece!!

love it will do it.

I don't like the constant use of cymbals/hits whatever is going on there on the second part of your track (and notably the transiton) it sounds bad, synthesized and takes away from the rise and puncture of the track. The strings could also use some work on the updated part - the melody is good but they sound terrible (maybe its the VST?). Also, your cymbals need more of a "punch"...I don't like the transition between the first part and the updated part - I get you were struggling on that, but I think you can do way better on that transition. I know I said I was going to work on the original part for you but I got busy haha. I'll try and add elements I think your track could benefit from and post them up here in a timely manner. I don't know what genre you want from this, but if your serious about making an "orchestral" track i'd invest in a VST like Albion 3 - I know money may be tight and you may not be able to access these types of high quality resources which is why I am offering my help. Best regards, CK.

Super bro. I like it. This is something there. If you develop the theme, it will be Epic! After listening to this track, I appeared at the very idea) Flying into FL Studio)))

The possibilities are endless with this one.

it's nice, it's like a developing story. I suggest coming up with a "twist" as in a story (changing the tune towards the end) then the music flows at constant level to denote resolution of the conflict as implied in the music.

The track sounds great, but the one thing that really irked me was the piano sounded very midi-ish. I'd suggest adding more sustain to help it flow better. Great work overall though.

Brado

First of all, it's a great snippet...we can say it's a great intro for a rock song too with some epical influences...

So my take is to lead this on that way...though I know that is a bit 'radical' idea...:-)

Handshake, Danke

I know exactly what to do, and I have the freetime to do it. I'll upload it up here with a link when i'm done.

Sure. Send me your email address in a private message. So, i will reply you and we start to work tomorrow. It's a pleasure collab in a cinematic track. If you want, check my tracks and loops, so you'll have an idea of how I can do.

-SxL

We can work with a software like teamviewer, and you can use muy library from your computer. And when you render the instrument, you can delete the midi file. So, you'll have a nice sound forma your track.

.SxL

With my comment below I don't mean that I'll give you my instruments, but they will be at your total disposal when you need (if you want). Think con it like a collab.

-SxL

Your track sounds awesome, and I really want to help you. Sadly I know nothing of music. Even if I can finish your track in my head, I can't express how to do it. The only thing I can do is offer you my instruments. I have good ones for cinematic tracks like cinematic strings 2.1, symphobia colours orchestrator, cinebrass core, heaviocity damage, drums of war 2.0, the giant piano, and many vocal and choir libraries like voxos, olimpus micro, cantus, mercury, mystica, shevannai and clara's vocal. That's the only help I can offer. Hope you can finish your track, because sounds great.

Peace.
-SxL

I like what you got so far man, its awesome like you stated. I think what you should add next is a nice indian flute with a small reverb to it. Also try adding a low filtered congo playing in the background. You can transition into this, in many different ways. An easy way to go about it, would probably be by adding a reverb kick and slowly have the flute fade in.

After the flute does it's solo, bring in those strings sound from the beginning, making them slightly more aggressive, note wise. Then go from there. That's all I have for now, if I come up with some other ideas, I'll let you know. But, very nice work thus far!

It sounds really cool, even right now! I'd love to help, would you be able to email the stem files to me, then I might be able to add some more to it that can help you. You could then add it to this? :)

Can you attach things with the Contact Me on my page, or do you need my email?