Listen To Boxing Day Featuring Soleil Lune Rosseau Pop Song By Ckilc1 | Looperman

Hey,
Good song my friend
its good to hear young collabs (btw Im not an oldman =D )
by the way
no one of us wants to hear appreciating words here :D we are looking for feedbacks right? so lets go on:
1.you could make it more country

2.lets be honest, the main mastering of song is kinda great, but the vocal line, nah. so you could improve the velocity of frequencies between 9000-13000, (hmm maybe with some changes) to improve female vocal

3.add reverb, a big room reverb with 15% volume to your vocal line, maybe 20% or more it depends on you! trust me it will make your music, seem bigger, right? ok :D

4.to the singer: its better to stay away from your microphone a bit, and sing louder sometimes, your singing method is kinda boring and repetitive

5. 2key notes for the singer, for this song: soften your voice for a breathy voice, smile when singing

6.well lets go back to you my friend :D, sometimes, pan your toms, like in 3:22, like one on left, and one on right

7.why dont you use an exicer? harmonic exicer is one of the key steps of mastering, use an exicer for make your vocal bright and shining, you can use wave's exicer or izotope exicer

8.one of the things that is really on my nerve in your music, and that is lack of compression, its not your fault, the singer is singing in low volume and you can't do anything, but, if she sings a bit more louder, you can compress your vocal line then vocal line's volume will be balanced

9.a huge idea about your drop in 3:05, add a radio vocal effect on. yes really, just like radio, for this action, kill the whole frequencies except between 500-8000, (maybe with some changes), and also add a bell line to the drop to complete this action

10.well adding a solo guitar line after the drop, is what rockstars know as well, i think you know what I'm talking about :D,

well, sorry for the long story xD, by the way, it was 10 tips to have a better "boxing day"
Kindest regards
J_*

one of the best songs Ive heard on here for a while, well done cool song. Ive used Solelix lunes voice on one of my tracks,, if you fancy a listen here is the link, all the best Mickey https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/170868/comment-reply/556352#556352