Electro Track 1 - Silenttwilight

20th Sep 2015 21:42 - 11 years ago
Description : Just a trial of a new Electro song I made a few days ago. Feedback is highly welcome as I am unsure as to what works and what the track needs doing to it. So please tell me what you think in the comments section, what you think worked and what didn't etc.

Comments (5)

If you have time take a listen and give Silenttwilight some feedback.

DanGoldstein
DanGoldstein 21st Oct 2015 17:44 - 11 years ago
At the very end I like that you bring it back down again. I am sure you could continue and do another build. I like the synth choices and effects - especially the bit of glide I heard (forget the term right now). Best of luck with more development! Dan
PatrickFox
PatrickFox 21st Oct 2015 14:54 - 11 years ago
The more I listen to this the more I like it. I have to agree with some points that skwishfish84 made. But I am looking forward the result of the track. Good work. :D :)
skwishfish
skwishfish 21st Sep 2015 23:28 - 11 years ago
Hey dude! This track has serious potential. I do have some feedback that I need to get off of my chest though.

The intro seems really chaotic and out of control. Although there are only 2 main synths that I can hear, it seems as though they are not in sync with eachother.

Second, opposed to popular opinion, I think the drop synth is very unique. The only thing I would change is the heaviness of the phaser as it takes away from the core sound itself.

Also, the drums are very drowned out until the bass comes in. I don't know if that's from a mastering malfunction or if there is a volume envelope, but either way I would change it. The track seems to be missing something until the drums come in and having them so underneath everything else is teasing the listener, which is (put bluntly) annoying.

I'm sure if you fix this up it will be ready as a nice release!

Check out my stuff if you can! There's a link to my latest EP in the forums as well!!

Best,
Skwish Fish
ReonN
ReonN 21st Sep 2015 15:21 - 11 years ago
Really like the first part. The drop synth is not that appealing to "me" (personal point of view). anyways keep it up and also there's a huge space of improvement for that track.

ReonN
mudhoen
mudhoen 20th Sep 2015 22:04 - 11 years ago
The track is pretty ok. Very nice drums and good use of percussion. Your choice of teh synths are nort my taste but that is just personal. Tryto extend it a little and Im interested what the result is.

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