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Tags : | Dubstep | 2.07 MB

Description : A new track that I have been working on for some days. I need some feedback so that I can improve my mastering skills so please comment anything you feel could be helpful! Thanks for listening

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  1. Tumbleweed
    Tumbleweed on Tue 11th Nov 2014 - 7 years ago

    not really enough to give some informed feedback Axion...but I think you are off to a good start...not my genre so my feedback would likely not be really useful...if you wanted some feedback on mastering...I would definitely recommend you put all the detailed work you can into the mix itself first..EQ, Comp on the individual tracks that need it etc...volume automation to keep the interest etc...mix it down to a new stereo track when its as good as you can get it...and consider Mastering as a separate process...I have beem using T-RackS since version 1..new version has some presets that might be useful (as a starting point only)...but I would suggest you master in a new project that allows you to apply the few main mastering plug-ins you will need..mastering is experience based and does requiire you invest in knowledge/education in the fundamentasl at least....keep it going....Ed

  2. Orlando51
    Orlando51 on Tue 11th Nov 2014 - 7 years ago

    Not really my genre, but I have to admit this sounds pretty
    good and promissing.....I think you have good starting point here.:)

    Congrats___Orlando

    Axion
    Reply by Axion

    Thank you very much :) I really tried hard on this one!

  3. Byleth
    Byleth on Mon 10th Nov 2014 - 7 years ago

    @ Axion oh you should write in your description this track is a sample for a longer one or WIP ( work in progress) to make less confusion .I maybe not alone who think for a Track (full song) 54 second is too small.

    Tanks for your reply I will keep a eye on you to lisen the final production :D

    Axion
    Reply by Axion

    I will definitely do that to avoid confusion for others! Sorry about that! And my final product will most likely go on SoundCloud first. I tend to sometimes forget posting on Looperman so if you follow me on SC too you will for sure hear the final track.

  4. UhStorm
    UhStorm on Mon 10th Nov 2014 - 7 years ago

    Great work

    Axion
    Reply by Axion

    Thank you very much my good sir :)

  5. StylesBM
    StylesBM on Mon 10th Nov 2014 - 7 years ago

    Best feedback I got is put up the full track because if this is only part of the track than the whole thing will...damm this is awesome!

    Axion
    Reply by Axion

    Haha yeah I will definitely be working hard to get a full track posted soon. And thank you for the kind words! Worked hard on this one!

  6. MWRatridge
    MWRatridge on Mon 10th Nov 2014 - 7 years ago

    Axion,
    Not my reg genre but I do listen to Spiv Kurls stuff. I cannot say I find anything wrong with this track at all. I really enjoyed this one; it has no gaps, all instruments are in their place, nice builds.
    Def cannot wait to hear this completed….let's see if you can keep the interest level going…good luck!
    Mark.

    Axion
    Reply by Axion

    Thank you so much for the kind words! Hope to have this done before January knowing my tendency to move on to a new track before ever finishing the previous one haha. I hope the interest level stays at a max the whole time, as that is my overall goal. Thanks for the listen!

  7. Joyce
    Joyce on Mon 10th Nov 2014 - 7 years ago

    In my opinion, this piece is great. However, the synth melody in the beginning and end could make be altered to a slightly more friendly synth? Because now it sounds like it's attacking thy ears.
    That's all the feedback I got. I really like the wobbies in this though ^^

    Axion
    Reply by Axion

    Thank you so much for your advice. I agree that the lead is a bit ear-peircing haha! Will be changing that for sure.

    And you made me laugh out loud with "attacking thy ears" and "wobbies" haha

  8. Byleth
    Byleth on Mon 10th Nov 2014 - 7 years ago

    very cool, too bad the duration is only 54 seconds. maybe you should add some "soft" melodies before and after this 54 seconds then return with this 54 sec. the music will have like 3 minutes. because you start already with a drop.

    you can check Bass antics from Seamless to know what I try to explain :D

    Axion
    Reply by Axion

    I will definitely be making this longer. Just wanted to provide a sample track of what I am trying to master so I can get some feedback on my work and improve. Thanks for listening btw!

  9. RichKid
    RichKid on Mon 10th Nov 2014 - 7 years ago

    This is awesome! I'm a bit jealous of you! You got it going good with your music. Never stop improving. I'm not quite deep in this community but I will be! Pretty good track. I feel like the lead at the beginning and end could be not as loud as it was, I focus on things that are pleasant to the ear. You had my head nodding, definitely something to shoot for I hope you were nodding while you were making this.

    Axion
    Reply by Axion

    Haha I am going to have to agree with you about the lead. I don't even like it... I just couldn't find a good sounding lead that fit the song. Hopefully will find one soon :) Thanks so much for the kind words! It really means a lot to me... you have no idea.

  10. Livingsoulsdie
    Livingsoulsdie on Mon 10th Nov 2014 - 7 years ago

    Sounds pretty awesome to me man.

    Axion
    Reply by Axion

    Thank you that means a lot :)

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