" />

Description : I made this with Angela Fleming's acapella from Kronstudios. It's been a while without recording anything and i really want to put more work on this song but for now i would like to hear your suggestions. Thanks in advance.

So far 10 users have left a comment on this track.
If this is your track why not return the love and check out their tracks too.

  1. failingtimes
    failingtimes on Sun 16th Nov 2014 - 9 years ago

    I agree w/ joe there seems to be a bit of static or maybe the hi-hat seems is a bit distorted.

    W/ that being said I love this track, all the sounds instruments, even the vocals were well placed. I really enjoyed this one.

    W/ a few tweaks on the over all mix, I'd pay for this track. FT

  2. DanGoldstein
    DanGoldstein on Sun 16th Nov 2014 - 9 years ago

    beautiful work so far on her voice. especially on the "hoo-oo-oo-oo" thing. the guitar sound is perfect. I wonder how you will end it. I suppose these tunes tend to do a fade out although you might do that "hoo-oo-oo" thing as a total a capella at the end. nice work. really enjoy it.

  3. Orlando51
    Orlando51 on Fri 14th Nov 2014 - 9 years ago

    I really enjoyed this very much. Reggae can be a killer music
    when done properly...and this one is.:)

    Compliments_____Orlando

    kykex
    Reply by kykex

    i'm glad you liked it Orlando51, thanks for taking a listen!

  4. Spivkurl
    Spivkurl on Fri 14th Nov 2014 - 9 years ago

    Hey, that was a pretty enjoyable listen! I thought that the balance of bass to high frequencies was very nicely done. The timing seemed nice as well. The reverb and delay things were already mentioned, so I won't bother, especially since reggae and dub and stuff commonly use a lot of those effects. I guess my main problem with the mix is that it's very "static", if you know what I mean. Some automation of different things could add a lot of interest and character to the song. I really like what you did with the pella, and your bass and guitar work was really fun to hear! Fave!

    kykex
    Reply by kykex

    Thank you very much Spivkurl! You are right, i have to put more time in the mix and make it feel more dynamic but its not so easy for me hehe i have a lot to learn about mixing and mastering but im already trying . Thanks for the advice and for the fave!

  5. promenade2239
    promenade2239 on Thu 13th Nov 2014 - 9 years ago

    nice work on interesting acapella. I remember listening to some other song with her vocals the other day and I really liked it. Your version is very nice too - my only suggestion here is that you could fade it out or at least end properly in a conventional way. Overall I enjoyed it. Alex

    kykex
    Reply by kykex

    Im glad you liked it, thanks for the advice!

  6. paulavery
    paulavery on Thu 30th Oct 2014 - 9 years ago

    I really like the feel of this track nice one
    Paul

    kykex
    Reply by kykex

    Thanks!

  7. soundhound
    soundhound on Thu 23rd Oct 2014 - 9 years ago

    Man...Crazy guitar sounds, love it...
    I hear a few things that would knock it up a notch...
    Though they would be so small, just wondering if it's worth it...
    Some of those guitars in the back, with echo on them I'd let a few
    sneak up in the mix, in the parts that are just music...
    Like a fly when it comes close to your ear, if you get my drift...
    It would change the dynamics in those parts, add a little flavour Maon... :-)
    Overall cool track, nice work....

    Peace...TG.

    kykex
    Reply by kykex

    I like your idea soundhound, i'm definitely going to try it

    Thanks for the help!!

  8. StaticNomad
    StaticNomad on Thu 23rd Oct 2014 - 9 years ago

    Greetings. Yours is not a name I'm familiar with on this site.

    I agree with JoeCramer. I'm also a delay and reverb obsessive but I think the track just has a bit too much. It kind of makes it all a bit noisy. If you can, try removing some reverb from the drums. Or the guitar. Or a bit of both.

    Or you could have no reverb on drums but reverb on guitar and vocals and then switch the reverb around for effect and variety at different points. So, reverb on vocals and guitar not on drums, then reverb on drums not guitar or vocals.

    You can be quite creative with how you automate things and give the track a different feel in places.

    Otherwise, I think it's a good vocal that's a bit unusual for reggae. Probably wasn't recorded with reggae in mind.

    Guitar and the drum groove is good too.

    Also, I think it could do with more of an intro before the vocal arrives to et the scene. And a proper, more definitive ending might also help.

    Good luck and let us know if you update and I'll listen and comment again.

    kykex
    Reply by kykex

    Hi StaticNomad

    First of all, you are right, I am not a regular user, I have been for like two years without recording anything for several reasons, besides I really enjoy playing music but I dont enjoy so much mixing and mastering etc. so I get bored quickly and also I dont have all the time I would like for making music so I rarely finish a song.

    In regards of the reverb, I like reverb in drums because I use the reasons redrum drum machine and for me its the only way for making them feel more like real drums or, at least, real enough for a non trained ear, so I am thinking in cleaning the reverb and the delay of the guitar first.

    About the vocal style, you are right again, I think the original style is dubstep but since I heard the acapella I wanted to try it with reggae.

    I agree with you in that the start and the ending of the song need more work, in fact this is like a sketch, I didnt want to spend more time in it because I wanted other perspective and some feedback , so I appreciate your advice :). I have already several ideas for the intro and the end of the song, and I want to record the bass again and maybe the guitar too because what you hear, is the first take in both instruments. I hope I can update the song soon.

    Thanks for the help!!

  9. joecramer
    joecramer on Wed 22nd Oct 2014 - 9 years ago

    Hi Kykex

    The song sounds good (to me) but it has a terrible accustic. Not the voice, just the complete rest of the track sounds like playing two times with much to much reverb and echos.
    But i realy like the song that is behind all this or maybe more under all.

    Maybe you should do a more clear master :)

    But hey! dont mind at all, cause who am i to told you any about a clean mix? :) - right! nobody!

    Itz a cool groovy reggea and the voice of Angela Fleming fits very well.

    stay tuned
    joe

    kykex
    Reply by kykex

    Hi Joe

    This was the kind of suggestion i was looking for,i have always loved the delay and the reverb effect but perhaps too much hehe, i'll try to clean this a bit.

    Thank you!

  10. Geophase
    Geophase on Wed 22nd Oct 2014 - 9 years ago

    This sounds great!
    Good work

    kykex
    Reply by kykex

    Thank you!

 ! You need to Log In or Register to post here.

 


 

You might also like these tracks


Tags : | Reggae | 12.30 MB

Description : Thoughts to the people who are considered dust beneath the corporate machine.

Planetjazzbass
Composition/Arrangement/Instrumentation

Tags : | Reggae | 7.90 MB

Description : Music composed by Alex Richard and Laurent Wirz. With: Hanspeter Dubach Lead and rhythm guitars, Alex Richard Bass and rhythm guitars, Claude Barbotte Hammond organ, Jol Perrin Saxophone and me at the drums. The two grooves I used for this one are to find under Loops and Sample, member laurentwirz, reggae. Also an excellent loop from member ebae. I have to say that I asked Michael Mayo before publishing it but I received no answer yet. It was pretty difficult with his acapella because it's a pretty short loop with not a lot of words (for an almost 5 minutes track)! You can ear also some background vocals from Patricia Edwards and I hope it's okay for her.

Description : Vocal stem available in Acapellas section :)

Beer Can Vampire "Lockdown" [2020]
featuring:
Virginia Slimm: Vocals
Baer: Drum samples
Fouz: Guitars
Ben Marmier: Drums
Gaby S: Horns
Laurent Sevezan: Bass
Martin Brdif: Guitars
Denise M'Baye: Vocals
Abdess: Vocals

keywords: BCV Collaboration Lockdown Reggae Dub Roots Coronavirus Covid Confinement Quarantine Unemployment Stay at home Freedom Privacy Optimism Hope France French USA English Germany German

Description : Took the rundown acapella from ThaSuspect, chopped'it and made a Reggae Instrumental.
Please use it to add Verses and a Chorus.
Hope you like it.

Regards NFMaster

Description : This track contains only free loops from several Looperman artists. I think one of my best works lately... but wonder if it's ok with headphones too - there a lot of very rough cuts. Enjoy!
Applied loops (fully or partially):

3RDNIPPLEMUSIC: 0609523-0049722 (nv - gtr-SQ37 n GP51 - ebow4 - 170),
0609523-0059040 (visher lonly feedback 112),
0609523-0057540 (nv must hang sally sq65 ebow4 110),
D2D: 0274163-0020717 (Hip Hop GTR 100 bpm V20),
0274163-0021049 (Bmin Lick 6 at 90 bpm),
0274163-0021048 (Bmin Lick 5 at 90 bpm),
KENROW: 0212708-0012717 (Tele Lick 4),
0212708-0012715 (Tele Lick 2),
0212708-0012716 (Tele Lick 3),
PLANETJAZZBASS: 0111346-0031037 (Riddim Mechanic),
LUTEEASTWOOD: 0207594-0070004 (Love Affair Guitar),
ALIVIDLIFE: 0158799-0039649 (Anti-Snow Ragga Guitar 70),
HAIDARJASEM: 1154425-0085429 (Love Lead Guitar),
JACEZIII: 1074761-0073942 (Blipside Strings 130bpm),
FERRYTERRY: 0747210-0059519 (140 bpm jazz guitar),
MHYST: 0203623-0025665 (Big Fat Choir).

Tags : | Reggae | 11.54 MB | Has Lyrics | Reaper

Description : i know another old one, but remastered and new vox. the old one was too aggressive. Guitars, keys and vox by me. LM drum loops 130_Dagger_Live_Drums, 23sk-drums-reverb-spring-roots and alabafruit. Horns from Loopmasters dub and reggae horns sample demos.

Tags : | Reggae | 7.24 MB | Ableton Live

Description : A quick idea I did in one day, 2 mixes, more an exercise for myself than anything serious. Inspirations were a Peter Tosh docu for the reggae feel, a surfing vid on what a point break was for the vox, the Ace of Bass vid The Sign for the drums and Jaco Pastorius song Crisis for a bit of inspirational bass thrown in. 2 drum loops used and a vocal effect loop for the heck of it in the middle, he. Live percussion, cabasa, guiro and double maraca. Me on git, bass, vox. Here comes Summer!

Tags : | Reggae | 5.61 MB

Description : Reggae/Hip Hop BeaT....!!! This is the FisrT Track on that Style I made...!!!, Hope you Enjoy & Keep on PLAY!!! Made on MixCraft 7 Pro...!!! https://soundcloud.com/goty-beatsproduction

Description : YINTE - FREAK ANOTHER JOINT FROM THE BOTTOMLESS POOL OF TALENT FOUND IN THE ACAPELLA ARCHIVE. SHOUT OUT TO YINTE

Description : This is the 4th cover of Big Audio Dynamite i done in collaboration with a friend who live in england. We both fan of the band so we decided to do a challenge and produce a serie of cover. we done 4 in one month. each track got it proper video check my youtube channel indiegroundvid

Tags : | Reggae | 8.50 MB | Has Lyrics | Reaper

Description : This ones for Cyberflares who just made the coolest utube vid, search six foot six cyberflares and you'll find it. Music cooked up entirely from free Loopmaster demo loops and a Scratch interview. Arrangement and added fx by me. Hopefully I don't upset the upsetter.

Description : I uploaded the vocals in 2012, Soap BRILLIANTLY produced this track around them. I was listening and thought I'd share as well. Don't forget to stop at his place and leave some Looper love! Enjoy!

Tags : | Reggae | 4.51 MB | Has Lyrics

Description : Reggae Which I was going to sing top but failed miserably .... maybe next time.
Four loops from Looperman were used as follows ...

looperman-l-1352219-0087018-jensmuse-reggae-feeling............

looperman-l-0671112-0087506-danke-reggae-organ-loop..............Dankes loop is an organ loop very faint.

looperman-l-0480098-0063746-jamievega-marimba-scene-offbeat.............

looperman-l-0592478-0075909-designedimpression-wu-sbg1.........

Thank you.

Tags : | Reggae | 4.16 MB | Has Lyrics

Description : Produced and Mix - 2nick8
Lyrics and Vocals - 2nick8
Looperman Samples by
danke-groovy-sax-loop
danke-melody-for-groovy-sax-loop
calibror-rasta-groove
alabafruit-my-first-reggea-drums-70-bpm
yappy-reggae-stabs-85bpm
acidpro-reggae-drum-beat-1
acidpro-reggae-drum-beat-3
nightingale-clean-pockets-iiii
nightingale-clean-pockets-ii
nightingale-clean-pockets-iii
danke-reggae-sax-loop

Description : Quick song, nothing special. But nice chill music.