real good lead sound,liking it,exactly the sound im in too ...well done

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Very enjoyable tune here! Like TheHumps, some of this reminded me of Depeche Mode, which is cool as they are one of my faves. Could definitely shine brighter with some adjustments in the mix, but it sounds very cool as is. I'm thinking that some more atmosphere could really spice up the track, like either some ambient sounds in the background or some effects added like reverb or delays. All in all I liked the song a lot!

nice deep track, but needs some serious work! mixing and mastering mainly!

Hi. That's a really classic synth house organ riff. I guess it's a loop. In fact, it's so classic, I was hearing the vocals from a few 90s tracks in my head as I listened, especially Show Me Love by Robin S.

Now that is a hell of a tune. Big classic smash hit right there.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ps2Jc28tQrw

Everything sits pretty tightly in this fairly minimal type of track.

2:10 those vocals are a bit of a surprise but I quite like them. Kind of seductive. Certainly nothing like Show Me Love.

Are you able to hear some of the audio pops in this as one loop moves to the next? Eg 0:07, 2:09, 2:17, 3:41 and no doubt other places though they're masked by the drums on top. You can fix those audio pops.

Overall, a decent 90s house dance track but I guess I would have liked a bit more variation in that classic organ house loop.

P.S. Damn, big congrats if you really are only 11! I had no idea but I totally understand your point about not wanting it to be mentioned. Hey, I'm only 3! Well, not only 3 but there's a 3 in there at the start...

Pretty clean sounding mix overall. The kick, like Pete said, is snappy and sounds great here. The break around 2:00 could use some work on the vocals. the vocal sound reminds me of the singer from DePeche Mode, they have a similar tone. Maybe some reverb, more volume or whatever might emphasize that a bit and make it stand out. I agree with others that some work could be done to the vocals to enhance them a bit and make them fit a little easier with the music.

Vocals are a tricky thing to mix, at least I find that to be true. I try different effects depending on the genre, feel and production on the song. I must also agree with the others that for 11 years old you seem to way ahead of the pack, that is impressive!!

Well done,

Wayne

Nice track, well done. FT

YO yo !

LOL , i did use the same loops as you did ...
it's funny to hear ...

what you did with the vocals is great ..
slow vocals on a dancy beat , real nice ..
sometimes it doesnt fit right. but its no prob..

good job !!

Interesting use of slow vocals but I think they don't fit perfectly. I like the concept a lot but the arrangement doesn't work as planned, imho. Overall a better work on the mix would really pump the tune up. I liked the idea, thouhg, keep working on it!

hey, Nice one. I am into a dance electronic mood for a while and think you did very good work here. Vocals are bit strange indeed but they add a very fine colour and nice melodic variety contrasting to repetitive elements.
Good chill vibes. Alex

Hey man,

Yeah, I meant the ones from Knowncontrol. I Like his vocals too, but they don't fit in here in my opinion. But like I said great track though.

GreetZ ;)

Hey shuckers,

Nice chill track. Man im really jealous about how you do the synthesized music so well and easy. your songs always worth to listen. :)

One thing: I don't like the vocals here, I think they don't fit. Hope you don't mind :)

But the beat is really nice and i think you hit the route 94 theme 100%.

90's, we are coming :D

Yeah man, nice sublime Deep House. It does bear resemblance to the Route 94 track. Man you got some serious skills for your age, you definitely need to keep at this. Sometime in the near future we will all be telling stories about how influential we were in helping you make it as a big time recording artist!!

Hey!
I'm not a big deep house fan but still some tracks force me to listen to it! the same with this track, from the moment i've pushed play i couldn't turn it off! nicely done my friend! my head was nodding to the beat! :)

wow ...nice to hear some nice thick drums and a snare/clap that snaps...

not sure about that vocal at 0.45 not sure it fits with the deepness .. it might if it had some kinda reverb or fx on it...to be honest I'm not sure any of the vocals work in it..I might be because they are crisp..ya know?

though I do like the track and the mix down and master how ever rough is well done...

keep 'em coming brother

great grabber at the front. that is a neat color that you add at 1:20. wondering what that is. like the way you take your time developing and varying your beat in subtle ways. very cool work. congrats!

Good work on this. Reminds me of classic stuff from the nineties. Keep cranking them out!

This is great. Really like the riff you've used and that chopped vocal sounds sweet. There's some nice drops and you've chosen good complimentary loops.
Where did you get the vocal from? it's a nice touch.
Really enjoyed listening to this track.
FR

Hi there, I just listened to a few of your tracks and I'm impressed. Amazing for someone your age. Keep it up cuz you're good at this and you'll only get better. You never learn out where music's involved. I'm in my 50's now and never stop discovering new tricks or beats. I started making music at 10 and believe me you never stop evolving. I look forward to your new songs. Rock on, Tim Terror.

I keep having to remind myself that you are only 11 years old (maybe you turned 12 now). You have a better grasp on music composition than many people who are 2, 3 or 4 times your age. Great mix as well. Nothing to critique here, just a huge amount of respect for you and all that you do. Keep at it - you have a huge future in this business. I hope all is well.

Bear

Really nice track Loved 1:30-2:10!