Rain Comes Down - Maffin159

Spectacularly brilliant!! I nearly cried! Any mixing issues that might be present are greatly overshadowed by the raw beauty of this tune. Well done, you!

Love & Light,

Mykael

P.S. I would love, love, love an opportunity to work with you!

I absolutely love it-so simple but effective, great lyrics, I can imagine it in a soundtrack for a film like Donnie Darko. Good job.

Some really simple and effective stuff here.

I think an album of your last few songs uploaded on here could be quite popular and enjoyed by quite a range of people.

This sounded good within the first line or two. Backing vocals work well.

1:06 has a lot of noise on it. Not sure why. Same at 2:47.

Yes, there are a few plosives and lip sounds to iron out so perhaps need to re-record some lines.

Track is very quiet though I guess that's OK for a gentle one like this.

Not a whole lot more for me to say as it's such a sparse track. I'm sure it'll improve so good luck with that and I look for ward to giving feedback on additions and improvements.

Brilliant just bloody brilliant...have to get that stunning feeling what you show with your piano play and with your? voice...

Bit like Nick Cave cause the low tone and this is awesome...

No matter about the mix...:-)

Much respect, Danke

hi,
this is really good and I am enjoying a lot the song...
For me the background vocals (aaa..., uuuu... etc) are a bit too loud as well as the overdubbed vocals. And I think it's because that the piano has some quite long reverb: it sounds far although the vocals are close and intimate... The 'cinematic' orchestral strings are also 'too much' (for me): I suggest you to replace them and add some single violin part or something to keep it 'acoustic' The song is great and you could make it just with the (close recorded) piano or guitar and it will sound fine like this. Or give some more ambiance to the voice parts which sounds better with far piano and orchestra. But I think it is still very well done as it is now... Nice work and great vocals!
Greetings,
A.

OK, now you really must tell me. Is that you singing? And, did you do the lyrics as well as the melody? The song sounds so familiar, which to me means that it hits home. I know this was a test of a new mic and that you wanted to keep it simple, but I do think the levels could have been higher overall. I know that you have a tendency to post remastered versions of your tracks. I can see doing a bit more work on this one, but I don't think this needs a full-blown orchestral accompaniment. I think it is much more effective simple and relatively sparse, so the focus is on the voice and the words.