Who I Are - VicaMOOR

29th Jul 2014 23:43 - 12 years ago
Description : The completed track... for those who heard the demo... this is how I really mix & master :)

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Comments (6)

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Ensam
Ensam 7th Aug 2014 14:12 - 12 years ago
This is very cool. A little Eminem but inyour own way. I'm not a rap or hiphop person but this is just plain good music.

Love it

Simon
mackeymarshel
mackeymarshel 3rd Aug 2014 08:51 - 12 years ago
Hey man this track is dope! Good work on the mixing & mastering. The vibe of the lyrics and flow remind me of Eminem back in the "Slim Shady LP" days. I do have to admit that the hook is the weakest point of the track. I believe that a simple chorus is a hit or miss situation. Sometimes it gets stuck in people's heads for days and other times it drags the song down. This hook isn't bad but it's not great either.

Don't get me wrong though, overall it's a dope track!
VicaMOOR
VicaMOOR replied 4th Aug 2014 - 12 years ago
Yepp, that's exactly right. Slim Shady is the model I used when structuring this track. In searching for my own style, I'm attempting to channel other's style. And I agree 100% about the hook. I'm not too fond of it either as it was lazily written in less than 30 seconds.

I appreciate the feedback, man
undergounddude
undergounddude 2nd Aug 2014 11:38 - 12 years ago
enjoyed a lot nice flow and nice beat !! dope one
VicaMOOR
VicaMOOR replied 3rd Aug 2014 - 12 years ago
I appreciate the listen, friend.
RiceChrisB
RiceChrisB 1st Aug 2014 13:42 - 12 years ago
pretty good man, pretty darn good.
BongiG
BongiG 1st Aug 2014 13:33 - 12 years ago
I actually enjoyed this track.Nice one!
VicaMOOR
VicaMOOR replied 3rd Aug 2014 - 12 years ago
i appreciate the feedback, sir :)
SubFreq
SubFreq 31st Jul 2014 01:25 - 12 years ago
Enjoyed everything about this track except the vocals at(0:08-0:16) in the beginning over the sample. If you added some type of variation to the hook I think it would improve the track as a whole. Excellent production though. Would definitely be interested in a collaboration if you're interested.
VicaMOOR
VicaMOOR replied 31st Jul 2014 - 12 years ago
Hey, I appreciate the feedback dude. I shooting for something simple, and the hook was a little lazy... didn't put much effort in it. And sure, I don't mind collaboration. Hit me up when you have a something in mind.

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