Listen To Broken Pop Song By AxelStPatience At Looperman.com

19th May 2014 20:55 - 11 years ago
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Description : Actually titled "bare" but that wasn't "5 characters in length." Could really use something to spice this track up and make it more power. Looking for a collab! Please let me know if you need anything, like an acapella version or something changed, etc.
Verse/Chorus- Em D C
Bridge- E C E Bm
Tempo- played freely at certain parts but at others, the tempo is 100.

Comments (9)

If you have time take a listen and give AxelStPatience some feedback.

crucethus
crucethus 10th Jun 2014 06:22 - 11 years ago
Ok Austin you have a good voice in the soft sounding department, but can you belt it out for the chorus. The song lacks a significant chorus that will blow away the listener. If (as my spidey sense tells me) you have that kind of voice you can make this song into a memorable pop tune.
lets see what happens.
ZeeHipHop
ZeeHipHop 21st May 2014 11:41 - 11 years ago
Well done on this song man. Really loved the lyrics and the simplicity keeps it raw. Can't wait to hear the remixes.
Keep it up, you have a great voice
VickyDan
VickyDan 21st May 2014 11:15 - 11 years ago
Hello ....

Your song, has without doubt need more musical support, and to evolve, but already with your voice, you bring a certain pleasure to listen ....

Dan
Tumbleweed
Tumbleweed 20th May 2014 02:17 - 11 years ago
You are a seriously good vocalist Austin...delivered like a pro...I`m betting you will have absolutely no trouble finding collaborators on this one...very well done....Ed
deciBel
deciBel 20th May 2014 01:24 - 11 years ago
impressive voice & heartfelt singing ..good mentality for lyriX too ....congrats & respects....
well I seriously suggest U to work with Scott & Franco ...
also if U were on about any acoustic, cinematic & heavy metal collab let me know ...best wishes.___Behnam
ScottB55
ScottB55 19th May 2014 22:37 - 11 years ago
Any interest in this one: https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/155621 ? I can remove any lead rides required.

Cheers,
Scott
AxelStPatience
AxelStPatience replied 19th May 2014 - 11 years ago
Yeah, sure! Why not? Let me know when you remove the parts where the vocals are. Also, give me a few days to rehearse the song and I'll see what I can do!
TinyFinger
TinyFinger 19th May 2014 22:29 - 11 years ago
Nice. I like your trak.
ScottB55
ScottB55 19th May 2014 22:17 - 11 years ago
Hi Austin,

You have a really nice sounding voice. I do covers of mostly classic songs and am always looking for vocals for them. If interested, check them out at: https://www.looperman.com/users/tracks/1186559. There are only a few there, but I have many more.

Cheers,
Scott
AxelStPatience
AxelStPatience replied 19th May 2014 - 11 years ago
I'm always down for a good classic. Lemme know if you ever need anything!
Danke
Danke 19th May 2014 21:32 - 11 years ago
Hello Austin!

Another stunning track...Do you have some studio equipments?...your music needs some colour...o.k. I respect your acoustic approaches but it could be more harmonic, groovy etc...this is only my humble opinion...your voice gotta more potential, use it...:-)

Congrats, Danke
AxelStPatience
AxelStPatience replied 19th May 2014 - 11 years ago
No, I totally agree. Unfortunately, my skills kind of stop after vocals and basic piano. I would love to put beats and other instruments to my music but don't have the first clue to go about doing that. I've been playing around with some things but nothing too substantial yet.

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