Hi. This is some fairly strange but also commercial-sounding stuff with some distinctive, weird bass. How did you make that bass part? You can really hear the strings. Are you playing it?
They're really not my sort of vocals but I understand lots of people like them.
One criticism is that the track doesn't really go anywhere in the second half. It's mostly just a repetition of what we've already heard. Adding in some other parts and/or changing the drums would probably help. Maybe try adding some busy wide hats to really give it a lift and make that groove really swing.
And I guess they're vocal samples and that's why they're mostly just repeated from the first half. So, doesn't really feel like an actual song but sounds like it should be. I hope that makes sense!
I have been a radio DJ(mainstream radio), so I know how to do mainstream. But I have for many years discovered a different reality that is so different and weird that most people don't even dare to think it is real. I also know the music industry is often used by the dark side, so that's why the track is on the surface mainstream, but but there is something creepy, dark and weird sound beneath it. The music explains how I feel about the mainstream music culture. Lady Gaga or Rihanna are one of the very dark ones incl. JayZ that flashes satanic stuff around. I'm not a Christian.
My agenda is to hack the mainstream.
The bass is just a VST that sounds like a real bass.
I think you are right. I should add a 3rd melody or change it(song structure).
Yes it is samples. RaRCharm only made the chorus and I had to make a verse.
Description : Hey guys!
My first ever music project is out right now!
It's an EP with 6 songs named (Dark Days) by CXRTER
Check the links in my profile for where to listen :)
This is Track 3 of the EP, Let me know what you guys think!
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Description : Smooth Jazz l Improv with a little help from the Guitarteamnl using an Ibanez jazz electric hollowbody, tc electronics pedal wireless inputs tascam studio recorder hp laptop fender champion 100 amp
Description : Your Soon To Be Favorite Love Song. Produced, Written, And Recorded By T'Darius Gibson. Timauri Witherspoon Also Featured On This Song As A Writer, And Singer. Please Give Feedback On The Song, And What Could Be Done To Improve It. Comment, Favorite, Download, And Share
Description : the old dude is back to inflict some more vintage R&B on you. Just had a short pella for this one so had to make a bunch of my usual noises to fill the space....cheers
Description : I wrote this song a little while ago and originally called it "Gave You All Of Me" but I came across a beautiful track Free to use by HVRTZLAB and decided to exercise My Vocals & do a rough draft on this track. May re-do the full song at some point when I get more time. THX to all who support My work. Stay Safe/Blessed People.
Description : Indigenous sounding sample. Retro 80s style.
Instruments:
Flute
West Coast Bass
2x Synth
Prod by NXVII.
Message me to get stems for free.
If you going to use this, then write NXVII as co-producer.
Compliments_____Orlando
I have made a track that is also a bit like your genre: http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/152881
Keep it up, bro..
They're really not my sort of vocals but I understand lots of people like them.
One criticism is that the track doesn't really go anywhere in the second half. It's mostly just a repetition of what we've already heard. Adding in some other parts and/or changing the drums would probably help. Maybe try adding some busy wide hats to really give it a lift and make that groove really swing.
And I guess they're vocal samples and that's why they're mostly just repeated from the first half. So, doesn't really feel like an actual song but sounds like it should be. I hope that makes sense!
You really do like huge kick drums.
My agenda is to hack the mainstream.
The bass is just a VST that sounds like a real bass.
I think you are right. I should add a 3rd melody or change it(song structure).
Yes it is samples. RaRCharm only made the chorus and I had to make a verse.
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